Johto Is Live!!!Pack 1!!!

[nintendo jr]

Hi!This is my first pack of my expansion:Johto is Live!!!:

001 Igglypuff

002 Pichu

003 Delibird

004 Magcargo

005 Shuckle

006 Gligar

007 Dark Espeon

Secret Celebi*

And the Energy mentioned in 004 Magcargo:

Intense Energy

Byes everyone ;184;

 

[Cipher 2008]

You've still not got the right fonts, but these cards are so much better than your last ones (or at least, I think that was you). Get the text and wording right and you'll be there. ATM, 7/10.

What program and fonts do you use?

 

[nintendo jr]

What program and fonts do you use?

Humanist Roman/Normal, Humanist Bold italic, Humanist Bol and Futura LT.I download from Pokemon Zeo and use Adobe Photoshop.

Byes veryone ;184;

 

[Cipher 2008]

Humanist? I use Gill Sans...I don't know what the difference between the two is, but I'd suggest giving Gill Sans a go.

 

[nintendo jr]

Humanist? I use Gill Sans...I don't know what the difference between the two is, but I'd suggest giving Gill Sans a go.

Where you found Gill Sans, in Pokemon Zeo are Humanist?Thanks for rating

Byes everyone ;184;

 

[nintendo jr]

The secret card of Johto is LIve!!!Pack 1 is this, in this I used Gill Sans:

Byes everyone

 

[Cipher 2008]

Better! A lot better! Great card, that.

 

[Blaze Dragon]

They´re pretty good, but WTF is an Intense Energy Card?

 

[King Shuckle]

Yes indeed. What is this "Intense" energy you speak of? It help to post that BEFORE you post a card with it in its text. You fonts are still wrong too. You have some placement issues as well. The damage should always line up with the effect text. I should direct you to the link to my sig, but since sigs have been disabled -.- I have no choice but to link to PPN. Here

You will find the fonts needed to make the cards. Have fun! Happy Faking!

 

[Cipher 2008]

Where on any of those eight cards is Intense Energy mentioned?

EDIT: I got it.

 

[King Shuckle]

I don't know. I was assuming Blaze Dragon knew what he was talking about. Regardless, he should still post energies if he made any before had. It's just a little advice.

 

[Blaze Dragon]

In Magcargo´s card Pokepower says something about an Intense energy card

 

[King Shuckle]

I see it now. Nevermind me. My comments still stand. >>;

 

[nintendo jr]

In Magcargo´s card Pokepower says something about an Intense energy card

Yes, Intense Energy is the Energy card that I made for the set Intense Powers, I edit this thread and I put the Intense Energy card and this Celebi* fixed, what think about it?

Byes everyone ;184;

 

[Darkmewham2]

I like Intence energy and Dark Espeon. But Pichu and Macargo look squished up.

 

[nintendo jr]

I started to made my new set, Johto is Live!!!Pack 2!!!, my last set based in Johto.This cards are in my set:Togepi, Magby, Grandbull(DS Metal), Girafarig, Politoed, Sudowoodo, Octillery(DS Lighting) and various secrets card, like Azumarrill and Lugia.

EDIT:A little preview of my Granbull DS:

Byes everyone

 

[greatchikorita]

Review of your Cards:

The Good:
1.) Nice card Ideas.
2.) Nice use of art.

The Bad:
1.) The Illus. is off. No bold for it.
2.) Attack Effect font size is big. Make it Smaller. Because of this, its placement is now wrong.
3.) The Placement for the card ID is wrong.
4.) The rarity Icon is also broken
5.) Most of your cards have the Holosheet with them even though they don't need it.
6.) Your Celebi * is the only card with the right fonts.
7.) Intense Energy's Card Effect font is small. Make it bigger.
8.) The Symbols for all the cards (excluding Celebi * and Intense Energy) are pixelated. Use the PSD File of the Symbols. the 'legend-symbols' thingy.
9.) Shuckle's Pokepower is broken. It should say 'If the Defending Pokemon is Poisoned...'
10.) Dark Espeon's Blank is wrong. It should be like THIS
And the Font Color should be White.
11.) There are more errors, But you can identify them.

Rate:
6.5/10 (overall)

Resources:
Use the Accesories in PPN (the 'legend-symbols' thingy) in PSD file.
Fonts are also found there (Futura Light Medium, Gill Sans, Gill Sans Condensed.)

Good luck on your next set! I just wish that you will improve your card faking and make cards that are more better than this.

;152;

 

[nintendo jr]

I finished Granbull DS(Metal), is the first card finished for my set Johto is Live!!!Pack 2!!!, I post here to give me opinions or defects before posting a new thread:

;150; Byes everyone ;184;