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Johto Starters! Pics you gotta see!

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RaikousThunder

Poison Tail!!
Yep got 4 new pics for you people to look at and not comment on but whatever. Anyway i got three pokemon ones and a Kingdom Hearts one for ya. First up, Pokemon stuffs.

Here is another fanmade character i made. Im sure none of you remember Alex but thats fine. This girl is named Ecko and she trains noisy pokemon. Read the description on the page for more info.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/31688751/

Next i got a colored version of the Quilava from my pokemon weasels pic. I love Quilava and i really like how i drew it, so here you go.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/31793617/

And heres smaller, colored versions of a Johto Starters sketch i put up her a long time ago. Finally got myself to color them and it really didnt take long at all. So here they are.

http://www.deviantart.com/view/31883632/

Finally, this is just a fanmade Kingdom Hearts character of mine known as Krystina.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/31689288/

And thats it for now. Comments are always nice.
 
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Xiang

Well-Known Member
These are BEAUTIFUL! :3

In the first picture- very detailed and a tad crowded- and the girl looks a tad masculine with that really thick neck and stout-ish body- but some people can be that way.

In the second- you don't know how much I love this one. The fire doesn't seem right- maybe because it's too angular and the lines are too straight? the outline of fire should be wild, wavy, and curvy.

The third is lovely. I'm no expert on anatomy.

And the fourth is the best. So much detail :3
 
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Pollen

It buuuuuurns.
In the first one, the girl's legs are too short. The shading is okay though.

In the second one, the fire shouldn't be shaded, unless it's made of rubber or something. The fire should be bright, which would also be adding highlights to the back of its head, back, et cetera.

The third one is probably the best. I love how you did the totodile... the chicorita's back end looks a little lopsided though.

The fourth one is good, but her left hand is sort of messed up looking (doesn't have any joints it looks like... kind of like sausages), and the left leg is too high up, and isn't level with the right leg.

Otherwise, they're okay. They all could use some more highlights instead of just shadows, and make them look more dimensional instead of... flat. Could use improvements, like anything.
 
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RaikousThunder

Poison Tail!!
Pollen said:
In the first one, the girl's legs are too short. The shading is okay though.

In the second one, the fire shouldn't be shaded, unless it's made of rubber or something. The fire should be bright, which would also be adding highlights to the back of its head, back, et cetera.

The third one is probably the best. I love how you did the totodile... the chicorita's back end looks a little lopsided though.

The fourth one is good, but her left hand is sort of messed up looking (doesn't have any joints it looks like... kind of like sausages), and the left leg is too high up, and isn't level with the right leg.

Otherwise, they're okay. They all could use some more highlights instead of just shadows, and make them look more dimensional instead of... flat. Could use improvements, like anything.
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Well im not the greatest in the world. Im not good at highlights either. I happen to like the shaded fire. Drawing fire in a sketch is a lot easier than trying to do it digitally unless you got some kickbutt program to do it for you. I have photoshop but i got no clue on how to use it so i just stick to my open canvas to color stuff. And in the first one, Ecko is short so she shouldnt be too lanky. Also to the other guy who commented on Ecko looking too masculan, shes a heavyset girl so shes got a thick neck. With Krystal, her hand does not look like sausages >< yeah they arent that pointy, so im not the greatest at drawing hands. A lot of people have trouble with hands. Bout her legs she might have gotten scanned a bit lopsided and it also has to do with her shoes. I knew i should have fixed it but i didnt bother.
 
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!Mew!

Guest
Omg There Well Good Pics You Must be A Good Drawer How Old Are You???
 
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Clockworkz

SURPRISE BUTTSECKS
The lines seem a bit uneven and unsteady in the CGed pieces, and shading is minimal, which detracts from thr overall quality of the image. The Kingdom Hearts Style I just really... really don't like, so I just won't go there. The starters have anatomical problems; Totodile's small mouth, Chikorita's mishapen head, but it's all little stuff that's really hard to describe.
It's decent. You have a whole lotta room for improvement, but you'll get there one day. Keep at it.
 
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Tip The Waitress

Nooo! I'm too young!
Nice job! your first pic is out of proportion tho, her head is squashed and her legs are too short. Your starters look good tho.
 
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ArcanineDarkCrow

Art-freak
the quilava is really cute!
and i like the others too.
 
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tinyturtle

who's fluffy?
first pic: the face looks... i dont know it just looks wierd and her arms look long for her height (maybe make her taller?)

second pic: thats awsome!!!1111

third pic: thats cool too!!11

fourth: teh kewlness! i luv the kh style very kewl i give you a doughnut^^
 
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RaikousThunder

Poison Tail!!
!Mew! said:
Omg There Well Good Pics You Must be A Good Drawer How Old Are You???
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Im way too old to draw the way i do. Im 19. Im gonna go to college for Fine Arts so im sure i will improve after that. Yeah i got a lot of anatomical errors, i do it all the time. But i think they look good so thats all the matters right now. Chikorita is a pain in the rear to draw for me and Totodile looks fine, his mouth isnt too small.
 
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