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Jono Region of wonder

Dalton

Jono trainer
This is the comic about the region I'm making.

so tell me what you think.

I sould put a new one on every day or so.

today

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comic1: http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/5033/1mktl3.png
comic2: http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/4329/2mksz8.png
comic3: http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/576/3mkhh9.png
comic4: http://img450.imageshack.us/img450/2522/4mklv0.png
comic5: http://img426.imageshack.us/img426/4737/5mkbm6.png
 
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Skittygirl

Skittyx2
Me too. Once spelled cat on a 3 grade spelling test kickkat. But I found a few more if you want to know.
 

Matt`

r u srs?
A pokemon journey! How original! This sounds promising.

Wait... let me guess. The person is going to go to the lab. Then he's going to get his own pokemon. Then he going to go to the next town and he's going to catch something. Then he's going to beat the gym leader. The plot is overwhelmingly original! ^________________^

Anyways, the sprites look pretty good. You have speech bubbles, but the "line things" connecting the speech bubbles to the sprite are sometimes messy. If you make the plot somewhat original AND make it funny, It will be pretty good. The funny being the most important part.

And let me say something...
If you're going to start a comic, FINISH IT. That goes for everyone. If you guys aren't going to continue your comics, at least make one more comic that ends everything.
 

Dalton

Jono trainer
Ill do my best to make the comic fun some time you just got to make comic's so you can move along. your right about the lab thing but he doent leave town just yet you'll see.
 
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Sora

AKA Snagger Outlaw
The only thing that sets this comic apart from any other journey comic is the new region.

This is just another journey comic gasping for the air of originality. And what the hell is that orange thing? o_O
 

the supermonstar

<-- Phear it. Now.
Not bad. On a scale from 1 to 10 I'll give it a 6.5
 
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