Jun's art V.2

[Jaypaw]

I think the critic is true, but that's not to discourage you but to get better at drawing. your coloring is cute but just a tad unrealistic ^^ but its not like I can do ANY better XD

 

[Tiffany]

Never mind what that other person says: I like the Eevee~ The pose is cute and I like the bow tie as well <3

..you do realize that she's doing what a poster should do in Fanart, right? Concrit is essential for any artist to grow. There's always room for improvement and sometimes others are needed to be able to point out these mistakes so the artist can fix them and keep them in mind with later pieces.

 

[Warfare]

I totally agree with Tiffany— not out of bias, but the fact that fair critique does go by rules. You can choose to ignore or disagree with a critique, but to turn it down when it's not even for you is stupid to do.

Uhm, Jun went into the hospital, again...it seems like tho cold was getting serious and flow some liquid in my lung or something like that. Of course, it has been sucked out of my lung....
But, I lost my phone D: With all the arts and pic in it. I just remembered when the nurse transfered me to the hospital, I left it in my coat pocket or something like that...now it's gone...all of my arts are gone too (glad I still have those paper...)
I'm using my friend's phone to get on actually....
Whatever happen, I love you guys, thanks for always help me keeping this thread (and me) alive...

Just to add on, this is technically spam. Notify them about this elsewhere; this is more LJ, twitter or IM-worthy.
This is just a note/warning or however else you see it, mainly because I'm too lazy to give out real infractions and those posts are sort of old. I'm going to clean up unnecessary 2010 posts though.

edit: by all means, this isn't only directed to junpearl; anyone conversing with the aforementioned person basically hasn't given a contribution and it was basically off-topic discussion.

Lol, do you have a kitten? :3

^-^ Did you have fun?

 

[Ambri]

..you do realize that she's doing what a poster should do in Fanart, right? Concrit is essential for any artist to grow. There's always room for improvement and sometimes others are needed to be able to point out these mistakes so the artist can fix them and keep them in mind with later pieces.

Aah, that wasn't meant to sound like I was disregarding what they said >_< sorry, I worded that pretty badly...I was going more along the lines of saying that I liked the picture regardless of the criticism...I wasn't trying to say they were wrong.

 

[Serris]

Wow. I'm liking the new line-art/coloured versions. I think some high-lighting on the tail would look good, and the eyes look a bit to thick with black.

Like some other people have said, the shading is a bit unrealistic. Perception is a hard thing to grasp. I think the only thing I would suggest is playing Pokémon Stadium or something a heap, to get the hang of shading a bit. Even I have trouble with shading, that's why i leave my drawings in black and white line-arts.

But never-the-less, I still love the new picture.

Keep up the good work.