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Just another dragon...

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Valkyrie X

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Well, I haven't done too much drawing lately, but recently I was actually arsed to make this. I'm really fairly proud of it, as it took around two-and-a-half hours to finish, and I actually put a lot of effort into it. I know it's nothing compared to some of the other dragons I've seen around here, but here it is:

Le spikey dragon of doom. ;o

Please comment, criticize, blah blah blah...

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Alphonse Elric

That's My Rule!!!
It looks far too hairy and furry to look like a dragon, to be honest. The shading looks fine, it has a fairly nice effect. However, might I suggest that you don't make the dragon so skinny? Because that makes it look like the wings are about to collapse on top of it.
 
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Valkyrie X

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Aw shoot, I actually worked pretty hard on the shading. :< But yeah, I guess I should've made him a little less skinny...or perhaps made the wings smaller. Suppose I still have more to learn when it comes to drawing the anatomy of a dragon. *sigh* Ah well. I tried. I'll have to practice drawing more often these days. But thanks for the comments, I appreciate it.

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Minami Itsuki

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It looks demonic. o.o

Anyways...

Shading for the wings look rushed. D:

But I like the whole demonic effect. Besides the rushed shading on the wing...it looks great.
 
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Altair

Guest
Wow, that's quite impressive! I love the way you did the claws, and the spikes on his tail have perfect positioning in my opinion. Maybe you could try darkening the wingas a little bit though, I almost thought part of them were part of the white background. Otherwise, it's a great piece of artwork.
 
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Esperante

XJ220
Totally awesome. What with the spikey claws and demonic look and body of awesomeness... The shading on the wings does look a bit sketchy, though. But besides that, its totally an awesome piece of work, maybe you should color it?

I'll never be able to crit your work as good as you crit mine. :(
 
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Valkyrie X

Well-Known Member
Err...actually, the lines on the dragon's wing aren't shading. ._. They were supposed to be actual parts of the wing itself; just little details, you could say. Blah, I know I didn't pull it off very well. I suck at making intricate details on things. D:

The body's twisted...? o.o I never noticed. =/ Agh, I always fail to catch mistakes like that. ><;;

Yes, I suppose it is rather demonic. o.o I didn't actually intend it to be like that, though; in fact, I didn't plan out the drawing at all. I actually never plan what I want my dragons to look like, I just spontaneously add things on to them and go with the flow. *shrug* Just my style, I guess. =/

But thanks to Danny (your critiques are fine; they're the ones I cherish the most <3) and everyone else for the comments.

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Myuuvuirocon

<--- Destoria
It's really good! ^^ I can't really see anything wrong w/ it... it's a really great drawing, and I love the demonic look, X3 hope to see more! :D it looks awesome!
 
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ArcanineDarkCrow

Art-freak
i really like it.. i first thought that the claws were a little weird but they fit perfectly with the body..
i like the big wings, but these shade looking details are messing them up a bit..
 
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