Kakura: Legacy of the Ancient Pokemon(PG)

[Raquaza]

Because of the placed rules: Note that while this is PG, all chapters besides the Prologue, Epilogue, and Chapter One will contain violence. To the max of PG, the violence will not be extreme, but that doesn't make it non violent.

Before you start,
Chapters:
Prologue
Chaper One: A New Start
Chapter Two: The First Badge
Chapter Three: The Second Badge
Chapter Four: Trouble Strikes Again
Chapter Five: The Third Badge
Chapter Six: The Fourth Badge
Chapter Seven: The Fifth Badge
Chapter Eight: Necrofear Isn't Finished
Chapter Nine: The Sixth Badge
Chapter Ten: The Seventh Badge
Chapter Eleven: The Final Badge
Chapter Twelve: Another Crisis
Chapter Thirteen: The Pokemon League
Chapter Fourteen: One Last Showdown
Epilogue

You are now ready to enter my FanFic.

Karura
Legacy of the Ancient Pokemon
*lyrics*If you think you're up to the challenge,
You might want to think again.
Because in this world,
There's no telling what might happen!
You might think the time is right!
You'll never know until you try!
You might have tried countless times!
Just mabey, this is the right try!
*rock guitar solo*
Just be sure you're ready...*end lyrics*

~Prologue~​

Throughout time, there have been many challenges for Ash, Brock, Misty, May, Max, Tracy, and many more. They have fought valiantly through many battles, each person with a different task. Ash, to become a Pokemon Master, Brock to become the best Breeder, Misty to become the ultimate Water trainer, May to become expert at Pokemon Contests, Tracy... well, his goal was unclear, as well as Max's, if he even had one.
You might think that Pokemon was a waste of time, but think of how many times Ash and the others have used Pokemon for good. There have been countless times where Pokemon were used for both good and evil. But this story, this story contains much more... Using Pokemon whose nature is evil for good. This is the the story of Kakura, the one boy who changed the world of Pokemon forever. And this is where our story begins.

~Chapter One: A New Start~​

Kakura never was fond of ordinary Pokemon. This boy, about as old as every trainer, was dressed Black, Blue, and Red. His hair, shirt, and socks being black, his pants, and jacket being blue, and his shoes being red. He always searched for rarer Pokemon, rather than you're every-day Pokemon. One day, he found the perfect team for his kind. "Alright! Rayquaza, Kyogre, Groudon, Regice, Registeel, and Regirock! Not only strong, but extremely rare! They're even ancients! I bet, that I could beat the Pokemon League with this team! Yeah. That's what I'll do. I'll take on Gyms, trainers, and eventually the Elite Four!" But what he didn't know was that his adventure would contain more than collecting Badges.
As he spoke, another team of evil was forming. "Soon, we'll have the ancients, and world domination will be that much easier!" "Uh, Master?" "What is it?" "The ancients. We've spotted them. In fact, all We already have two of them. And the other six are in one spot." "What?! Where are they?" "They're... well... um..." "Hurry up! I don't have all day!" "They're with a... trainer..." "What?!! Go defeat that trainer immediatly! Make the stakes of whoever loses, loses their Pokemon." "Yes sir. I will report this to all members." "Good."
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I hope to go in sets of two. It most likely won't happen though. Anyway, I'll have atleast 3 chapter up each week, if not more. While these first two chapters don't contain much, there wasn't much to do in those. The upcoming 14 chapters will contain more.

 

[Clockworkz]

I learned the hard way that paragraphs are a must have. Use them.
That is not a chapter. That is... Hell; I don't know what that is. If it wasn't completely unimaginative, didn't having a pitiful amount of detail (if any) and a tired, boring plot... it would still suck. Probably. Read some more fan fics in your spare time whilst you rewrite this debacle.
Questions: How does he know abut these Pokemon? Why does he want only rare ones? Where the hell is this kid? Why does this suck? Learn how to answer questions that others will pose to you, and answer them for them within your own story before you publish it.
Mmkay? Mmkay.

 

[Raquaza]

I never said I was publishing this.

How does he know abut these Pokemon?

Simple. Like all trainers do. He seached the land, found them, instantly knew they were rare, and caught them.

Why does he want only rare ones?

It turns out that every-day Pokemon appear too natural for him. He wants to have appeal, and as you'll learn later on, he likes using them to make Necrofear mad. That's after he meats the team, anyway.

Where the *beep* is this kid?

Where all trainers start. At his house. For right now anyway.

Why does this suck?

One of the most simple questions there is. It hasn't got to the good part yet.





Before I make the forward chapters, I'm going to go back and revise the first chapter, add a little more to it.

On a side note, I'm going to start editing my new chapters into the first post, that way if this becomes dead, or no-one posts before I get new chapters up, then everything would be fine, because I can still edit without bumping.

 

[icemew]

It seems just a little extreme to give him six legendary pokes... my character got a single Flareon, and all my reviewers were still anxious she'd turn into a sue. Yours starts the story with Rayquaza, Kyogre, Groudon, Regice, Registeel, and Regirock??? How'd he even find them? How'd he catch them when he doesn't have any other pokemon? And why not write about that, it sounds a lot more interesting than just saying he did.

 

[Raquaza]

You just jumpstarted my mind for more ideas on the Prologue. Or mabey I'll put it in chapter one. What do you guys think I should put it in?

 

[Manulya]

I agree with Clockworkz all the way. Sorry. But if you need some help making a fic, IM me or PM. Just in case you want some help that you desperately need. ;manyula;