Kanto League Adventure

[Jerry_Francis]

Okay, the last comic i made was a complete disaster. I don't know if this makes up for it in any way, but I just wanted to start over.

Comic 1, The Beginning
http://img280.imageshack.us/my.php?image=comic1thebeginning2rq.png

 

[mo_money]

Another "going-to-tha-proffesor comic" seriously you've got to be more creative.
also the speech bubbles ,why are they just white, put an outline on them or something. and the recoulors are kinda bad, you should use custom colors.

 

[Jerry_Francis]

Okay, I only have this to say about that remark. Anyone who does not like my recolors, speech bubbles, or "going-to-the-professor" part of the comic, do not make comments. I am not taking any suggestions unless they are told to me politely. Also, I am having them go to the professor because they need pokemon, because they can't fight pokemon pokemon themselves, anyone would know that. So, once again, if you are only making a negative comment, don't. Plus, if you are looking for a funny comic, this one isn't going to be so funny (because I am not a comedian).

 

[Flygon]

Umm... Sorry, but critics aren't alwways going to be nice. If they're pointlessly flaming, fine, okay, be angry at them or whatever, but it sounds to me that mo_money's trying to help you improve your comic. If my critisim's a little rude, fine, okay, but they're not always gonna be nice, and you have to consider that. The plot, so far, seems pretty unoriginal. I mean, how many "going to the lab" comics have we got so far? If you're gonna do that, try to make it in a region other than Kanto or Hoenn. But still, you're right, they need Pokemon, but not all Pokemon sprite comics have trainers going to a lab. For example, Pokemon Neo. The main character, Neo, catches his starter with a Great Ball. So please, be a little more original, and don't kill me if you think this offensive.

 

[Sora]

The raichu scale says...

Yep, just another cliche journey comic with speech blocks from hell. NEVER USE CHATSPEAK. You don't say omg in casual conversation now do you?

 

[Risk Alchemist]

Umm... Sorry, but critics aren't alwways going to be nice. If they're pointlessly flaming, fine, okay, be angry at them or whatever, but it sounds to me that mo_money's trying to help you improve your comic. If my critisim's a little rude, fine, okay, but they're not always gonna be nice, and you have to consider that. The plot, so far, seems pretty unoriginal. I mean, how many "going to the lab" comics have we got so far? If you're gonna do that, try to make it in a region other than Kanto or Hoenn. But still, you're right, they need Pokemon, but not all Pokemon sprite comics have trainers going to a lab. For example, Pokemon Neo. The main character, Neo, catches his starter with a Great Ball. So please, be a little more original, and don't kill me if you think this offensive.

excelletn advice Flygon! Listein to Flygon Jerry_Francis! Believe me on this one! This is excellent advice so yeah.... ^^;

 

[silverdragon]

its kinda cool girl = pink hat
boy= black hat

( are they oppsite???)

 

[Matt`]

Did you read this?
It's helpful.

 

[Dean]

Your comic isn't really great. Your charecters are just recolored and the speech bubbles are crappy.

 

[Chinese Teletubbie]

Okay don't use chat speak and the speech bubbles are awful also its another dumb journey comic where professor Oak goes missing at the start and the guys that are gonna get pokemon from him go and find him

 

[Blaze Dragon]

All said
1)Put outlines to the text bubbles
2)Don´t use chat speak
3)Make better recolours, or do custom trainers
4)Don´t use the overused plot that going to Proffesor (insert tree here)´s lab
5)Don´t criticize the critics. People made them to help improving

 

[Divine_Light]

Look at the lab floor its F'ed your other comic was better