General Blaze
Not the face!
Here is a sneak peak at my up coming fanfic. If you want to know the basic story line, then to bad, cause I'm still making it. But I managed to make a small battle scene that will happen after the main caracter, Jack, gets to the Kanto leauge. So, without further ado, I present to you, Kanto, the Untold Legends.
"Raidan, use Bonerush!" Jack ordered, his gloved hand pointing at the Alakazam his Marowak was facing. Raidan just grunted, and charged at the Alakazam, his bone twirling in his paw. For a moment, Jack thought that Raidan had his foe, but the other trainer only smirked, then ordered, "Alakazam, Psychic!"
Alakazam obeyed imedietly, his eyes glowing a sky blue color before a wave of Psychc energy blasted itself towards the Marowak. The attack hit dead on, and Raidan was caught off gaurd. "Raidan!" Jack yelled, concern for his Pokemon washing over him.
Raidan, meanwhile, was sent hurtling through the air before it collided in a rock, his eyes widening in pain. The Marowak slowly got up, pain corsing through it's body. He looked at the hand that was holding his bone, only to discover that it wasn't there. For a few seconds, the ground type Pokemon looked around frantically before he spoted it, lying nearby the Alakazam that attacked him. This made Raidan growl abit. The fact that he was now unarmed disturbed him a little, after all, he had never fought with out it before. But his trainer made a point to train him without the bone, so Raidan wasn't to worried.
But that didn't mean he still was.
Jack watched as Raidan looked for his bone before he spotted it. Jack hoped that Raidan wasn't to hurt to continue, but the Marowak seemed alright, save for a few bruises on it's body. After conferming that Raidan was alright, Jack focesed on the Alakazam. Durning the time that Raidan was looking for it's bone, the Psychc type had erected a wall of light, aka Reflect, to raise it's defenses abit. Now it would be harder for Raidan to defeat it. Jack gritted his teeth in frustration. That Alakazam had already knock out his Scyther, Mantis, and now it had a fighting edge aganst Raidan. He knew that if he was defeated, then he was going to be disqualifed from the Kanto Leauge. Jack had to win, he had to. "Raidan, are you ready?" He asked. The Marowak nodded. "Good," Jack said. "Then let's end this fight! Use Return!"
Raidan began to glow white, before he charged at the Alakazam, the crowd roaring in excitment. This was going to be one heck of a battle, and nether trainer could afford to lose.
Well, there's the preveiw. I know I made a few spelling boo-boos in here. If anyone can point them out, then I'll appriciate it. Hope you like it.
"Raidan, use Bonerush!" Jack ordered, his gloved hand pointing at the Alakazam his Marowak was facing. Raidan just grunted, and charged at the Alakazam, his bone twirling in his paw. For a moment, Jack thought that Raidan had his foe, but the other trainer only smirked, then ordered, "Alakazam, Psychic!"
Alakazam obeyed imedietly, his eyes glowing a sky blue color before a wave of Psychc energy blasted itself towards the Marowak. The attack hit dead on, and Raidan was caught off gaurd. "Raidan!" Jack yelled, concern for his Pokemon washing over him.
Raidan, meanwhile, was sent hurtling through the air before it collided in a rock, his eyes widening in pain. The Marowak slowly got up, pain corsing through it's body. He looked at the hand that was holding his bone, only to discover that it wasn't there. For a few seconds, the ground type Pokemon looked around frantically before he spoted it, lying nearby the Alakazam that attacked him. This made Raidan growl abit. The fact that he was now unarmed disturbed him a little, after all, he had never fought with out it before. But his trainer made a point to train him without the bone, so Raidan wasn't to worried.
But that didn't mean he still was.
Jack watched as Raidan looked for his bone before he spotted it. Jack hoped that Raidan wasn't to hurt to continue, but the Marowak seemed alright, save for a few bruises on it's body. After conferming that Raidan was alright, Jack focesed on the Alakazam. Durning the time that Raidan was looking for it's bone, the Psychc type had erected a wall of light, aka Reflect, to raise it's defenses abit. Now it would be harder for Raidan to defeat it. Jack gritted his teeth in frustration. That Alakazam had already knock out his Scyther, Mantis, and now it had a fighting edge aganst Raidan. He knew that if he was defeated, then he was going to be disqualifed from the Kanto Leauge. Jack had to win, he had to. "Raidan, are you ready?" He asked. The Marowak nodded. "Good," Jack said. "Then let's end this fight! Use Return!"
Raidan began to glow white, before he charged at the Alakazam, the crowd roaring in excitment. This was going to be one heck of a battle, and nether trainer could afford to lose.
Well, there's the preveiw. I know I made a few spelling boo-boos in here. If anyone can point them out, then I'll appriciate it. Hope you like it.
