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Kingdom Hearts: Shining Raid

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I find it hilarious that within the few weeks I decide to make a KH fic, the world explodes with them. D: D: :O THE UNIVERSE IS LAUGHING AT ME. IRONY IRONY IRONY.

Ahem. :3

This, ladies and gentlemen, is a Kingdom Hearts fiction, having nothing to do with the original story line of Kingdom Hearts and Kindom Hearts II. In fact, it's about an entirely NEW cast of characters, in entirely NEW (some old) Disney worlds.

:O This, my friends, is Kingdom Hearts: Shining Raid.

The chapters in this story aren't as well thought out as my other fictions, so the table of contents will be updated as I go along. Also, chapters will be posted around every week and a half to two weeks. D:

Most important of all: Thanks for reading!

Disclaimer: All related indicta and worlds/references/etc. belong to Square Enix and Disney. Original characters and worlds are credit to the author of this fiction.



.~:Kingdom Hearts: Shining Raid:~.



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Table of Contents:


*NOTE: -- Chapter Titles Indicate a Finished Status.

~~ Chapter Titles indicate an In Progress Work.

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~~Chaptaire o.o1: (SYSTEM FAILURE)

~~Chaptaire o.o2: (Awakening System)

~~Chaptaire o.o3: (Defense System)

~~Chaptaire o.o4 (Meeting System)

~~Chaptaire o.o5 (Destiny System)


~~Chaptaire o.o6 (Savior System)

~~Chaptaire o.o7 (Time System)

~~Chaptaire o.o8 (Deadly System)

~~Chaptaire o.o9 (Unexpected System)

~~Chaptaire o.10 (Resurrection System)

~~Chaptaire o.11 (Happiness System)

~~Chaptaire o.12 (Floodgate System)

~~Chaptaire o.13 (Star System)

~~Chaptaire o.14 (Homing System)

~~Chaptaire o.15 (Darkly System)

~~Chaptaire o.16 (Shining System)

~~Chaptaire o.17 (Neverworld System)

~~Chaptaire o.18 (Typhoon System)

~~Chaptaire o.19 (How the Universe Came to End)

~~Chaptaire o.20 (SYSTEM RESTORE)

~~Epilouge


(To be added....)





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Chaptaire o.o1: SYSTEM FAILURE

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”Where are you now,

I ask myself.

Are we walking the same paths?

Or are we just living different lives?”







It starts with me falling into darkness endlessly and then I hear snow falling even though snow can’t fall because its silent, only then do I realize that it isn’t snow it’s glowing lights falling, flailing into the darkness and as I fall I see worlds blossom forth like flowers from the glowing things and these tiny fireflies of hope create worlds around me, most of them strange looking on their little planets with their little people all living their little lives-




“This….is what you call a beginning.”



-I suddenly find myself standing in this endless field of flowers and flowing grass, no horizon in sight and I’m alone, alone like only lonely people can be until the others come and they run toward me, two people I know like family, I know them and hold out my hands for them, but they pass through me like they are ghosts and I feel like crying even though I haven’t cried for so long-




”WHO ARE YOU?!?!”




-And then the falling fireflies appear again and I touch one through my tears and it takes away my sadness, it transports me in a flash of light to a castle with high ceilings, and an empty throne that yearns to be filled but no one can fill it anymore because there is no one here in this empty place so I decide to fill it and I sit tentatively in it-



”We were called the Shining-“




-As I seat myself in this beautiful chair I look up and see hundreds of people in white swarm toward me, their cloaks flowing as they race to me in haste, as if to a battle that isn’t really there, something I can’t see until they hit me and the world explodes again in a flash of light and I’m falling up into the sky or the ceiling, whatever its called here-




”So much for chivalry, huh?”




-Here is the final stage, a world all too familiar that I see when I open my eyes and spot the tropical islands that make up my home and as I fall into the sky I’m dragged down onto an island, the city buildings zooming up to greet me as I pass them and land in an open amphitheater, with screaming people and lights and music that I’m singing to on stage-




”This is only half of the story.”




-I feel overjoyed while I sing, up until the time where everyone’s cheers become dim and I look up and realize I can see myself falling downward, and as my two selves collide I’m pushed below the surface of the stage which has suddenly turned into a hall I walk down endlessly, a hall of black stone and white stone and everything in between and I jump off the end of the hall which has suddenly turned into shadow water and I’m falling, falling, falling, falling---






”Yes.


We are all walking the same path.

Just in different ways.”







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Falling….

I felt like I was falling, with no end in sight. My eyelids were as heavy as lead, but I forced them open, slowly.

Everything was blurry for a few seconds. When things cleared, I realized I really was falling.

Just upside down.

Shadow waters…

I was receding like a bullet through what felt like the ocean, slow, inconspicuous. There was no blue in the water I fell through, just shadows and the occasional wisp of light. It didn’t even cross my mind that when I hit the bottom-if there even was a bottom-my head would receive severe trauma.

‘Didn’t even cross my wandering mind.

I just lay there, letting gravity or whatever it was pull me downward. It was pleasant, almost, as if I felt entirely safe for the first time in my life.

And then suddenly, the pleasantries ended. I was gently righted by some invisible force, turned so that my feet hit ground.

I looked around, warily. Side to side at first, and when I saw nothing but more shadow water, I looked down.

I was standing on nothing.

The watery darkness was all around. Even below my feet. I took a hesitant step forward, and felt my heart jump in surprise as thousands of white birds erupted from the floor below me. The umber shadows melted away as each bird took some of the dark covering with it as it flew. Light seeped from under my feet, and I looked down as the mosaic of birds and feathers and light came together as a blinding whole.

I was no longer residing in darkness.

I was standing on a stained-glass replica of a face of a person in a white-hooded cloak, head shrouded in the faint shadows the covering produced. The picture of the person took up most of the oval, stained-glass plateau I stood on. I watched as the birds vanished into the walls of the deep water, I watched as they lost their purity against the endless sucking void that served as a boundary in this still place.


WHY WERE THERE WALLS IN THIS PLACE-



Whatever thoughts I might have had about the mysterious birds was put to an end as the floor below me glowed. I got a better look at the picture depicted on it this time, and saw that the white figure was surrounded by a ring of fancy patterns on the outer edge. The figure was in the middle, hands out with their palms up, as if expecting something to drop from the sky.



WE WERE EXPECTING YOU-


On either side, a tangle of silver vines sprouted, thorns striving to touch the figure, but not quite managing the feat. They instead hovered around its frame, as if uncertainty had taken them over.

The backdrop glass of the picture was a searing, tranquil blue.

THE COLOR OF YOUR EYES-



It was then I heard the voice. It echoed across to me, coming from a nowhere that was only present when one was alone. The voice was wordless, but I knew what it said. It emitted the sounds of nothing, but then again, so did I.

In soundless harmony, we understood each other.

”The door….to light.

Do you seek it?”

I had no idea what this voice was talking about. I was about to say that, when something in the back of my head silenced me and spoke for me to the mysterious voiceless person.

IT knew what the door to the light was.

IT knew what to say.

The other voice seemed to almost nod in acceptance.

”…good. Now step forward, Seeker, into the light.”

As soon as the voice said this, a cone of white brilliance pierced through the dark water and fell on the platform. It illuminated one circle on the glass, a single elliptical wedge of brightness.

I walked forward. The light swallowed me whole.

It was then I felt a tingling at my side. My hands glowed, and the brightness shaped itself into a blade-like protrusion. My fingers closed around a handle, and the light receded to reveal a weapon of the most peculiar kind.

First glance told me that it was a key, the regular kind you stick in a lock, that this one was just a super-sized version. But upon closer inspection, I found it to be much different. The handle curved around at the ends, creating a box, a guard for my hands. The blade-the key to be more precise-was silver, and the handle was a glowing obsidian, wrapped around in the middle handrest with green fabric. A keychain hung from the tip of the hand-guard, silver as well, with a curiously shaped symbol on the end, looking almost like a(-dare I say-)mouse head. In total, the weapon was as half as long as I was tall, and hung in my hands limply.



”Keyblade…..


Keyblade…



This….is the weapon with which you shall seek.”



And suddenly, breaking through the calm voice with no warning….something came.


There was suddenly a malicious presence all around me. Creatures rose up from the floor, a pale yellow with shining white eyes like bulbs in the darkness. They had slender necks that held up their flat, lily-pad-like heads. They walked on two feet, backs as straight as their arms pressed to their sides. They didn’t walk normally, they pushed themselves forward and slid on large, plank-like feet to match their hands. With automatic, gliding movements, they circled in around me, bulbous eyes greedy.

Box-like creatures that showed no emotion, even in their actions.

The most startling thing about them was that they seemed to glow with an inside light against the dark waters and almost out-shone the luminous stained glass platform below us.


”Fight….”



The voice demanded.


I looked around, over my shoulder, and found that there were a total of three light beings. The first to reach me was struck down as I swung the blade clumsily over my shoulder and brought it down on the creature’s head. The thing was stunned for a few seconds, and I took the opportunity to bring the Keyblade up underneath it, knocking it into the air.

The other beings shrank back as I jumped in the air and smacked the single one back down to the floor. It wavered for a moment, and then melted into a shining puddle, evaporating in a string of white stars as quickly as it had melted.

I panted. This fighting business was difficult. I’d never raised a hand to harm someone in my life, especially not with a weapon. Instinct told me to bash the thing over the head as fast as I could so that it couldn’t strike back against me.

The two remaining shining things ganged up on me. One slid stealthily around behind me while the other openly charged. I held up the Keyblade with both hands and stopped the head-butting assault with the blade, pushing backwards so that the creature lost its balance. I saw my opening and struck it clumsily over the head until it melted and evaporated.

I had forgotten about the other creature until it teleported before my eyes in a flash of shining sparks. I blinked and swung, my heart beating rapidly. My attack missed by inches, and the being rammed me in the stomach with it’s sledge-like head, my ribcage screaming in protest as I staggered.

Out of the corner of my watering eyes, I saw the thing begin to charge up for another head butt, but this time I told myself I’d be ready. My hands gripped the Keyblade tightly, and I spread my legs apart, waiting until the being got close enough to hit.

As if knowing I was ready for it, the being disappeared in a flash of sparks again, though this time, I could see the glowing of its now transparent body. It had turned invisible. The light blurred the colors around the thing, like a heat wave, and I focused on the shimmering. With three solid swings, I dispatched of it, victory swelling in my chest for merely a moment before it was replaced with terror.


”Do not be afraid, Seeker.”


The glass platform below me had, during the battle, fractured, and then in a suspended moment of silence, it broke, crippling beneath me. I fell through darkness again, but this time amongst shards of shining glass, like the fireflies of light in my dream……


”Do not fear.”


The voice sounded as if it was trying to comfort me, prevent me from losing it. Mentally, I scoffed, not the least bit concerned I was falling toward another glass platform with no signs of slowing. I was over the shock of this now, all this seemed almost normal, so I answered the voice back in a haughty tone.

”Easy for you to say. You ain’t the one falling five stories down.”

And the voice did something I didn’t expect it to.

It laughed.



I landed, gently right-sided by some kind of invisible wind. I looked down, and saw that the glass platform had changed. This time, it showed a beautiful white flower opening its petals to reveal a boy, sleeping. The mosaic pattern circling it was red, and the background was a vibrant orange.

There was a door at the end of the platform, opposite of where I stood. It was a beautiful door, something like one would find in a church. It was a peachish bronze color, decorated with gold handles and joints. Stained glass of all colors created an arch above the scalps of the two slab arms of the doors, marking the pathway they opened onto.

The voice was now devoid of amusement.


”Now….let us see you open the door.

Can you do it?”


With confidence I strode toward the door and struggled to pull its handles apart. With great difficulty I pried the door open, and with even greater difficulty my pride realized that when the light that emitted from the door swallowed me, I ended up in the same place I was a second ago.

The voice seemed to mock me.


”Now now, we can’t have you opening the door just yet…

It is far too soon…

But you have proven your worth…

Even through the shadow that lies in your heart.”


The beam of light pierced through the darkness again, beckoning.

I walked forward hesitantly, into the light that shone down from the murky waters. It warmed my face, illuminated my eyes…

What I didn’t notice was that the light was gathering around me, and when my body absorbed all it could, it expulsed it, creating a huge shape that at first, looked like me, and then began to mutate.

The light grew long, pointed ears and feet and fingers. Its limbs were panoramically skinny, its head grew broad and flat with shining, jagged wings on the sides of its skull. Its torso grew to anorexic proportions, flaring out widely at the hips as spikes protruded from the bone of the pelvis and the shoulders. Below its creamy-yellow translucent skin, blue designs were highlighted by a throbbing light that ran through them, over and over, like a pulse, like some kind of demented blood.

And all the while, it grew bigger and bigger….now seeming to scrape the sky.


”Do not be afraid.”


The voice reassured me calmly.


“You cannot be defeated by something that is within yourself.


After all…..”


I swung my Keyblade at the monster, and the blade swept harmlessly through its hands. It lunged at me, and I blocked, cringing as if expecting a blow.

The hand rammed into the hilt of my Keyblade, sending me flying and scrabbling to regain my balance before it hit me again.


”After all….”


My Keyblade vanished in a flash of light. I was utterly defenseless as the being charged at me, monolithic body and all.


”You hold the mightiest weapon…..


Deep inside.”


And then the being of light enveloped me, searing in its heat and intensity.



My eyes were blinded.










”Don’t be afraid…..”










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She woke from her sleep, ruffled. The T.V. before her played the annual Music Awards, and she had dozed off to the commercials.

But now she was up, wide awake and terrified.

The being of searing light was gone. She was…back in reality.


It was all just a dream…






The dream again……the one that had visited her over and over…


But it had never felt as real as that before….she had never fallen through shadow waters before, or fought with demented creatures glowing with light…

The dream began to slip from her memory, as dreams often do, leaving a deep void in its place. She sighed, pushing her back into the couch and resolving to write the dream down next time.


For now, she was back in the present.


Her eyes narrowed at the plasma screen before her.


She thought that if she stared at the T.V. screen long enough, it would melt. Theoretically, in her quantum-physics-lacking mind, it was possible. It wasn’t an impossibility, oh no. Not when that bi*tch was on the screen. Not when that bi*tch was performing in the stadium with fifty thousand people and making them cheer and scream themselves hoarse with her dancing and pop-star looks and her vocals.

The bi*tch didn’t even own the voice she was singing with.

That was HER voice. Not the bi*tch’s. HERS.

So why was the singer using it?

She really didn’t know. Well, she knew the technical reason. The voice synthesizer in the back of the stage gave the voice and played it while the girl on stage lip-synced.

Earlier that afternoon, the girl on the couch had gone into the studio and sang the song for them, which they took and gave to the bi*tch. Just like they gave everything else. Always. All the time.

‘The girl with the voice’, as she was known at the studio, did not like the pretty-faced pop-idol, Renne. In fact, the girl with the voice despised her. Renne was everything she was not. Gorgeous, pleasingly slender, and graceful in her words and motions.


The girl with the voice was skinny in an underfed, sharp way. She had dark brown hair, dyed a brilliant red at the tips, shaggily layered and hanging around her face like a curtain. Her eyes were a clear blue, slanted so that it looked like she was always on her guard. Not sweet, or innocent, or any of the things media managers appreciated. The extent of her bodily grace was walking the sidewalk edge without falling into the gutter. Her words, however, were graceful, but were usually used in a sarcastic and scathing manner, and therefore, disregarded as a lack of respect.


Renne, on the other hand, was the epitome of teenage beauty, and consequently, was in every wet dream of every teenage boy in the city, and, quite possibly, the entire Sol archipelago.

Therefore, the girl with the voice wished for the T.V. that displayed Renne performing to melt in a violent conflagration of sparks and molten lava.


Once upon a very distant time, the girl with the voice started out her hopeful career by becoming the Palm Ocean Studio’s hired paper girl at the tender age of thirteen. Her job was to deliver papers between the office and the various media specialist’s cubicles. It was a simple job, and if she was lucky, the janitor she had made friends with let her into the sound booth after everyone went home. She sang there, into the microphone, for hours until the janitor had to leave and lock up.

The girl with the voice had been graced with a beautiful singing voice, despite all her other lacking bodily and temperamental qualities. Her hopes were geared toward becoming a star, and singing to feel the excitement of the crowd well up inside her and make her truly, blissfully happy.

Life as the paper girl was good until she forgot to erase the recording of her voice from a previous private session with the sound booth. The next day, the manager gave her a money-laden proposal. Instead of becoming the diva herself, she’d be the VOICE of the diva. All she had to do was come to the studio and perform when they wanted her to. She’d be getting a fat check in the mail every month without fail, and a neat little space in the “Special Thanks” corner on the back of the diva’s album cases.

But the then-innocent girl with the voice didn’t want to sing for someone else. She wanted to sing for her herself…by herself, on a stage, with adoring fans and the thrill of thumping music and applause in her chest.
When her parents separated, however, she had no choice. Her father gave the minimal child support, and her mother was struck with a post-divorce suicidal depression that only expensive medicine could lift.

She no longer had a choice in the matter.

The girl with the voice began singing for the diva, Renne, as her world began to crumble.


So she sincerely wished the plasma screen before her would burn.


“Akari!!! Turn the T.V. off and get the doorbell, will you? I’m busy with dinner!” Her mother, an aging blonde with enormous curls called, stirring a pot on a fancy conventional oven.

“Man…” Akari tapped the remote and the T.V. went blank. She lifted herself lazily off the couch, and trudged to the apartment door, grumbling the whole way.



She tilted the doorknob, and pulled. On the other side of the wood stood a boy around Akari’s own age, with sandy hair, deep brown eyes, and a shy, winning smile.

“U-Urui! What are you…..doing here?”


Urui. Head of Porta Sol High School’s Battle Team, Winner of Best Smile in the past three yearbooks, and Akari’s crush to end all crushes. The boy to whom she had sent every Valentine’s Day letter since elementary school, the object of her Truth and Dare sessions with her friends, and the specter of her constantly wandering thoughts.

Urui.

She knew she was flushing, but she did her best not to show it. Her mother banged a few pots in the background unceremoniously as Urui spoke.

“I…ah…was just going around the neighborhood, and I saw your house. I wanted to see if you were doing anything tonight…”

Akari stared up at him, mouth agape. “Uh….”

“If you’re not, I was wondering if you’d want to go watch something with me…there’s a new movie everyone’s been talking about, Lost-“

“Lost Identity!” Akari piped up, her enthusiasm for the movie outweighing her shock.

“Yeah…that one.” Urui smiled, and Akari wanted to take a thousand pictures just to capture that look.

“So…you wanna come?” He asked.


Akari’s mouth went slack again, as if just realizing what was going on.


“Uhhhh…….ermmmmm..uhhhh…..”


Her vocabulary was stunning in the presence of this boy.


“If you don’t want to, it’s c-cool.” Urui added, tripping over his words slightly.


She suddenly smiled. He was just as nervous as she was!


“No no, it’s fine! Just lemme get my coat, okay?”



“Don’t you need to check it with your mom?”


Akari smiled as she picked her jacket off the rack by the door and pushed past him, out of the apartment.


“The less my mom knows, the better.” She laughed, and in a fit of naïve ecstasy, tripped on the first flight of stairs leading down to the parking lot. She would have spiraled down the flight and landed in a very painful manner if not for the fact that Urui had caught her around the waist in mid-lurch.


Her stomach flip-flopped, and not with the loss of gravity she had just experienced earlier, but with a very familiar emotion.

It was there she experienced the first of many awkward moments of that night, moments mostly associated with first dates. She was dancing on air though, so the painful embarrassment of the rest of the awkwardly blundered seconds didn’t really faze her.


That was…..until it happened.


Until her world changed.








They were sitting in the cold movie theater, side by side. Akari was paying attention more to Urui’s face than to the movie, and when he caught her staring at him out of the corner of his eye, he laughed, and ruffled her hair affectionately.

She felt as if she would sprout a balloon out of the top of her head and simply fly away.

Life couldn’t get any better at that moment. She was watching her favorite movie with her longtime crush, alone. Suddenly her worries about Renne and her mother’s disappointing and rapidly deteriorating illness and her father’s indifferent attitude toward her and her mountains of homework and her drama with her friends at school and the secret she kept inside about her voice all seemed to melt away.

Here, she was truly happy.

Even the dream that had haunted her for the past week, the one about falling and gripping the strange, oversized key, had disappeared.


It was funny how one person could affect another so much.

As she thought these things, her stomach turned. Thinking it was out of nervousness at being in Urui’s presence, Akari shook it off, running a hand through her messy, layered hair.


A few minutes later, the feeling came again. Stronger, this time.


flip-flop


She shook it off, determined that nothing would ruin this moment.


Even a stomach ache.

A few minutes passed.




and then the lightened darkness fell upon the universe…




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Urui was laughing at something Akari commented about when the giant screen shut down abruptly. Darkness swarmed in, the dim lighting doing nothing to quell the terror that grasped the crowd. People were shouting, some where booing, and others began screaming in fear.


The dark was omnipresent. Only the faint orange side lights gave any hint that they were still among the living.

“Please remain calm. Power will be restored momentarily.” The mechanical emergency voice boomed from the loud speakers.


Everything was deathly still….and the silence seemed to drag on forever…..and ever…


for all eternity…


Akari had slunk lower in her seat when Urui flopped his cell-phone open. The screen’s flittering blue light lit a small area, and he motioned to Akari to stay quiet, his face wane.

She wondered why. Her head turned to observe the crowd around her just as they began to scream and make strangled noises. Her breath caught in her throat.

The audience was being plagued with a few glowing, luminous shapes that jumped on the people and opened their box-like mouth in what seemed to be sickening pleasure. An odd, pink-lighted crystal burst forth from the victim’s chest, shaped ironically like a petite valentine heart. The glowing shapes would then jump on the heart and wrestle it down. The hearts seemed to want to float up into the sky, forever, and would have, if the glowing things hadn’t of speared the crystal hearts before they could fly away.



The things in her dream….



Urui grabbed her hand and stood. She struggled to her feet, and watched as the bodies of the victims were consumed by black fire. In the body’s place appeared a small black creature with the same bulbous eyes as the glowing beings. They twitched and scurried around on the walls in gravity-defying steps.


The remainder of the crowd had fled, screaming. Urui dragged Akari through the emergency exit at the front, for the light and dark creatures were swarming by the exit and attacking the theater workers.

His only thought was to run. To survive. Their priorities had shifted in less than a millisecond.

She couldn’t believe this was happening. She pinched her face with her free hand and winced when the nails dug into her skin. Yes. This was real. The creatures from the strange dream that had been haunting her had come to life. They were here.


Did that mean…..the blade was real too?




”Keyblade.”




Akari wrenched her hand out of Urui’s. The stark, white-washed maintenance hallway was empty, one red exit door on one end, leading to the parking lot, and a dark wooden door, guarding the way to the theater they had just come from.

Urui faltered, then yelled.


“AKARI! DON’T BE STUPID! RUN!!!”


Oddly, she wasn’t terrified. She couldn’t understand why Urui was screaming so. There was nothing to fear. They were only the creatures in her dream. Dream creatures she had beaten once before.


She looked over her shoulder, smiling.


A burst of white light shattered their vision, and a Keyblade fell uncomfortably into Akari’s hands, as if it was too big for her palms.


Both her voice and the words she spoke were calm.


“There is nothing to fear.”


Urui looked on in horror as the door behind her burst open. A flood of light and dark creatures surged out of the doorway, making odd clicking noises. They raced toward Akari, climbing on walls and on ceilings, flattening into the floor and running under her….


“Go!” She screamed. “Hurry!!”


The key in her hand glowed as she swung it over her head in a wide arc. Three shadow creatures were dispatched immediately, vanishing only to leave a trio of crystal hearts that floated upward into the ceiling. The shining beings immediately plagued the hearts and ripped them to shreds before continuing.

“I WON’T LEAVE YOU HERE!!” Urui yelled back.


“I told you. There is nothing to fear.” She smiled as the blade knocked back a box-headed light creature into the wall.

Urui inhaled, then barreled forward. He grabbed Akari’s hand and dragged her with him down the hall, and being much stronger than she was, she couldn’t escape.


They burst into the parking lot, Urui starting up his slender car. Akari leaned out the passenger side and bonked a few shadow creatures on the head as they crawled up the side of the vehicle.


Swerving away from the movie theater and driving down the highway, Urui could see that the city was in chaos, and that the theater hadn’t been the only target. Darkness and light beings were crawling over every surface of the city, and flames were enveloping buildings and homes. Skyscrapers swarmed with darkness, pierced by the occasional creamy-white light creature. Sirens wailed. The highway had been evacuated; it was empty and devoid of cars and life. Cracks ran down the middle where the occasional accident had happened, obviously caused by the beings. Their fragile city existence had been transformed into fiery panic in less than ten minutes. Suddenly, worrying about a science test on Monday seemed like a very trivial thing to ponder over when people were dieing, left and right.


The darkness had come.


“We’ve got to get someone to help!” Urui spat, and Akari looked at him, wide-eyed.


“Who? The police? They’re probably busy.” She stared pointedly out to the burning buildings.


“Alright then, do YOU have a bright idea?” He asked, maneuvering around an abandoned car wreck in the middle of the four lanes.

Her memory dredged up the stadium, the one which, in her dream, she sang on.

“The Star Staduim!” She pointed to the dome in the distance.


“And what’s there that will help us here?” Urui asked.


“I don’t know.” She answered truthfully.


“Then what good is THAT?! We should just go home to our parents and try to help them-“


”They’re fine.” Akari said simply. “They’ll be fine if we get to the Stadium first, before the creatures.”


”How do you know that?!”


“Hunch.” She grumbled, and Urui stared at her for a long time. When she was stressed, she began talking in one-word phrases to shorten her temper’s indulgence.


“Fine. The Star Stadium it is.”


She smiled.


As they drove, the city flashing by, Urui looked at the girl next to him uncertainly.


“What was that key? The one you hit those things with?”


”Hm? Oh….this?”


She held out her right limb, and the weapon materialized in a flash of light in her palm.


Urui jumped in his seat at the sudden appearance.


“Sh*it! Scared me….”


“It’s called a Keyblade.” Akari answered simply. “And it’s telling me there’s something at the Stadium.”


”Where did it come from? And what about those things?! What were they?” Urui asked.


“I’m….not sure.”


“And all those people? What happened to them?!”


“I’m…………not sure.” Akari repeated, her face stretched.

Urui’s jaw clenched, and he accelerated forward.

The stadium was close. The car screeched into the parking lot, and the two teens got out, both sprinting to the locked gates that guarded the stairwells into the arena itself.


“Locked!” The sandy-haired boy spat, hands gripping the bars of the gate. The large padlock rattled angrily.


Akari felt the Keyblade vibrate. She looked down and saw a bead of light condense at its tip. The light expanded into a beam of brightness that pierced straight through the padlock’s keyhole. The lock clicked open and the gate swung forward.


Urui raised an eyebrow at her, and she grinned.


Keyblade.” She said simply, and ran up the stairs, a bewildered Urui running closely behind.




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The hallway of obsidian stone seemed to stretch forever. It vaguely reminded me of my dream, the same one that brought me here.

It was funny how calm I was. I was worried, of course. I was angry, and confused at the creatures and all the people that had appeared to die. As I ran, I got the feeling I was being watched, as if where I was going was being monitored by a thousand pairs of eyes.

I suddenly didn’t care if Urui was here with me anymore. I was afraid that he would perish like the others, yes, but I no longer cared if he was holding my hand or whispering to me anymore. Rampant chaos did that to you.

He ran with me, letting me lead. He knew that I knew more than he did. He knew I had an inkling of what was going on, an idea of the tip of the iceberg. It wasn’t much, but it was better than nothing.

The hall twisted, and I knew this was the part in my dream where I fell into the shadow waters. This was the part where the hall simply dropped away, and I was left to fall.

But I didn’t.

The hallway door opened into a monolithic stadium, twice the size of any Battle stadium I had ever seen. Its ceilings were glass, and the stands rose in a cathedral-like fashion, straight up into the sky. The heavens were sprinkled with pieces of night and foggy blankets of stars. The whole place was tomb-quiet, a silent, enveloping darkness most deadly. The stage was in the center, huge and iron-cast and imposing, a large archway of curtains and extinguished lights behind it.


“Now what?” Urui asked, his voice hushed. We both knew that talk would attract, perhaps, unwanted visitors.


“The stage.” I answered, just as soft.

Just then, behind us, the doors we had come through burst open.

The beings of light, with their square heads, and the beings of dark, with their erratic movements flowed forth, like a stream of freed wine uncorked from the bottle.

We were both quickly and efficiently surrounded. The mass of creatures pressed in, clicking away madly. The stage was lost from sight.


Behind me, as my mind raced with options, Urui placed his hand on my shoulder.


“Give me your weapon. I’ll fend them off while you get to the stage and do what you need to do.”

“Urui!” I protested.


“Hey, I didn’t become head of the Battle Team Committee for no reason, alright? NOW GO!”

I stared at his face for a few long seconds.

His hair was cut well above his eyes, which were gleaming with something I couldn’t place my finger on. Bravery, perhaps. Those seconds reminded me, in the first place, of why I liked him.


I liked him because he was righteous. Yes. He fought for justice.


He fought for delusions I couldn’t handle defending.


Somehow, in my heart, I knew that this was the last time in my life I would see him.


And I was right.

Those few looks, those precious moments represented what my life was like at that time. It summed up my pitiful existence up until those last seconds. The life where I was tied down by family, where I worried about mundane things like homework and what I was going to do with my life. The life where I was just a naïve, stupid, confused adolescent, wondering if boys were really worth all the hype and whether or not I would get a better job than my mother when I graduated, or when my father would call me next to catch up on my life so he could go on with his….


The life where I actually knew what was going on….


It was the last time I saw Urui in my old life.


I shoved the Keyblade into his hands and ran. The creatures seemed to take no more notice of me. In fact, they seemed fixated on Urui now, and attacked him relentlessly. I heard him shouting as he cut through creature after creature. As I waded through the darkness and light, I silently said my farewells to him.

The stairs that led up to the stage seemed infinite. Urui’s cries grew fainter and fainter, and when I took my first step onto the wooden platform, I realized that the hunch that brought us here had been completely accurate.

There, standing opposite me, backed against the archway of lights and curtains, stood a door. It was silver, finely wrought, with stained glass patterns adorning its head like a crown.

I walked toward it, and with sound of battle cries and clicking filling my head, I placed my hands on the handles.

I looked up to the sky for a brief moment, the sinking feeling in my stomach intensifying. I was saying goodbye. To what, I didn’t know.

My parents? Perhaps.

Myself?

Most likely.


That was when the glass dome developed a sea of darkness on top, dotted by shining things. The creatures had suddenly decided to crash the party, and they came for the door, just like I had.

The same door I was on the verge of opening.



I knew what I had to do now.



The voice in my dream visited me the split second before I opened the door, when my hesitation took over.


It was now or never. Was I really prepared to make this decision?


Was I prepared to lose my perception of myself….and of my whole life?





”Do not be afraid.”







I nodded, yanked, and the doors slid open, the two halves gaping out into the world. Two halves forming a shining piece, an open wound into a world of light…


The light within the door seared my eyes. It filled the stadium, and I felt myself falling away, becoming immaterial, less.





”You hold the greatest weapon of them all.”





As the light enveloped me, I looked down at my hand.


Did I?

What weapon did I hold now…


If my hands were empty?






What weapon did I hold now, if my heart was empty??







And then the lighted darkness washed over the Seeker’s heart…..




”Yes.


We are all walking the same path.

Just in different ways.



And yes.


All worlds end eventually.


Just in different ways.”












Finite



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Frost Nova

The predator awaits.
FIRST POST!!

SEREBII'S QUEEN OF DRAMA HAS RETURNED!!

Interesting read: haven't played the KH series before, so I won't know 'bout the characters, but this is one of the instances that you really bring the story to life. Loving the description you used: one particularly caught my eye.

xXSaberXx said:
The umber shadows melted away as each bird took some of the dark covering with it as it flew.

That was really nice imagery you had there.

I'm intrigued on how this is going to end up: good luck on writing this along with PR: CoF, and know that you have a faithful reader in me!
 

Shadows Follower

Well-Known Member
I see your amazing abilities to write excellent stories hasn't gone. (Shame mines not this good).

I thought this was fantastic. The description was great, I pictured every bit of this post. The characters have only been introduced and they already have a sense of character. I hope your next chapter will be even better.

I only have question. Akari is the Keyblade Master (Mistress I mean) right? So when she gave it to Urui to use, wouldn't it have returned to her hand after after a few minutes or is has this got to do with the story? Still keep it up, I'll be waiting.
 
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The Doctor

Absolute Beginner
It's Keyblade Mistress, not Master this time around.

Well, out of the big Kingdom Hearts Fanfic Boom, this is easily one of the best, compared to the dreaded 'other' stories (one involving a Gary-Stu Keyblade Master, might I add) that have been wasting good space (guess where I got this from? ;)). Like Revelation, description is excellent and very easy to picture, making for a truly exciting read. Good luck with the next chapter!
 

Mimori Kiryu

Well-Known Member
Yay! Saber posted her story! :D

As I probably told you before, I love this and even though I'm not really sure exactly what Urui looks like, I have a pretty good image and I <3 him! XD I'm already a fangirl. ;3

I absolutely love your imagery, its amazing...I feel as if I'm there. :D That's so cool!

Can't wait until the next chapter! <333
 

Master Alltro-N

The Deserts Spirit
... This is Friggen Awsome!!! a new Keyblade wealder, a new adventure... can't wait!! the Shining already sound like somthing you would want to avoid.

I liked how you did the whole dream sequence with the 'Stain Glass Rooms' in it, and now that i think about it it makes perfect sence. Can't wait for more!!

Master A-N Out
 

Sike Saner

Peace to the Mountain
Hi. =)

Well, when I saw that you had a new story, of course I had to look. I suspected I'd like this one, too, and I was right. There is just so much gorgeous imagery used here, and the character is as well-presented as the setting. With just one chapter, Akari is already so effectively developed.

This is a hell of an impressive start, and I'll be sure to keep following this fic from here on out. ^^

Highlights and et cetera:

It starts with me falling into darkness endlessly and then I hear snow falling even though snow can’t fall because its silent, only then do I realize that it isn’t snow it’s glowing lights falling, flailing into the darkness and as I fall I see worlds blossom forth like flowers from the glowing things and these tiny fireflies of hope create worlds around me, most of them strange looking on their little planets with their little people all living their little lives-

I can totally hear this coming out of Davey Havok’s mouth – spoken-word, like that part in “Kiss and Control”. *____* Yummmmm. I love things that remind me of AFI. ^^

The watery darkness was all around. Even below my feet. I took a hesitant step forward, and felt my heart jump in surprise as thousands of white birds erupted from the floor below me. The umber shadows melted away as each bird took some of the dark covering with it as it flew. Light seeped from under my feet, and I looked down as the mosaic of birds and feathers and light came together as a blinding whole.

A beautiful image. *_*

In soundless harmony, we understood each other.

Just one of those great, strong lines. ^^

The light grew long, pointed ears and feet and fingers. Its limbs were panoramically skinny, its head grew broad and flat with shining, jagged wings on the sides of its skull. Its torso grew to anorexic proportions, flaring out widely at the hips as spikes protruded from the bone of the pelvis and the shoulders. Below its creamy-yellow translucent skin, blue designs were highlighted by a throbbing light that ran through them, over and over, like a pulse, like some kind of demented blood.

That put a very cool picture in my mind. Kick-*** looking creature, there. And bonus points for the “like some kind of demented blood” phrase. ^^

She thought that if she stared at the T.V. screen long enough, it would melt. Theoretically, in her quantum-physics-lacking mind, it was possible. It wasn’t an impossibility, oh no. Not when that bi*tch was on the screen.

Which is precisely the way I feel and react when watching Elie. XD

“Uhhhh…….ermmmmm..uhhhh…..”


Her vocabulary was stunning in the presence of this boy.

…Which is precisely the way I feel and react when watching Rionette. XPPPPP

What weapon did I hold now…


If my hands were empty?





What weapon did I hold now, if my heart was empty?

Damn. That sounds like it belongs in a song. *_*


And now...
 
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xXSaberXx

xxxXsightless
T_T YAY POSTS. *hugs*

Frost Nove: NEVAR PLAYED KH? Lawl. You'd like it. Everyone does. xPP;; THANKS MUCHIES. I like the birds. T_T In the game, I'd start it over to watch the birds at the begining over and over again. xP

THANKS.

Shadows Follower: xD! You caught it! Yes, there is a reason and it is part of the story why Urui could hold Akari's keyblade. xD;; YOU'LL FIND OUT SOON. Next chapter? Maybe? Yesh. x3 Thanks so much!

The Doctor: YAY!!!! :3 Actually, there are Keyblade Masters in this too, but yeah, the main charie is teh Mistress. D: D: D: Thanks for reading!!

Mimori: xD;; Actually............Urui......D:

NEVARMIND. YOU'LL SEE. All I can say is that Urui won't stick. :// BUT YOU'LL SEE.

Thanks. *hugs*


Master-Altro N: XDD! Thanks lots. The Shining are DEFINETLY some you want to avoid. o_O;; THANKS SO MUCH.

Sike: <3 AFI and OccT. D: D: D: :O. What anime is Rionette from? :O *is dumb* xD;;; If he is from an anime. =D

<3 For your comments. And saying that all my stuff belongs in a song. xPP



OKIES. Next chap will be up on sunday. <333
 

xXSaberXx

xxxXsightless
LOL KAY MAYBE NOT SUNDAY.

xD Anyhoooo.

xx3333 New Chaptaire.







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Chaptaire o.o2: Awakening System

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“She looks dangerous.”


“Oh, stuff it, Jin. The only thing that doesn’t look dangerous to you is a baby Moogle. Everything else can burn in hell, by your standards.”


“Is that a problem?”


“……….God, you’re such an as*shole.”


It was sunset. The crimson red sky was lit by the last dying vestiges of the golden orb strung low in the distance. The bloody light washed over Fort Paradox’s Northern Wall, turning the gray stone into soft rose slabs. The city within the wall was quiet, lights turned on in the messily clumped buildings, constructed entirely out of steel. Smoke rose from the chimneys, an indicator that the residents were preparing the evening meal and waiting for the return of their loved ones.

Far off in the distance, in the center of the city, rose the Citadel, a mish-mash of several enormous towers, kept together with numerous pipes spewing sparkling energy. The towers were made out of the strongest material known to the city, Blood Crystal. The crystal took over portions of the steel and stone towers so that parts of the Citadel were made entirely out of transparent, white Blood Crystal. At sunset and sunrise, however, the Blood Crystals caught the sun at an odd angle and glowed a deep, beautiful crimson.

Most of the resident buildings and the Great Wall that enveloped the whole Fort was made of lesser portions of Blood Crystal, protecting them from both great physical aggression and magical spells.


This was Fort Paradox, home to a multitude of wanderers whose worlds had been destroyed by the onslaught of the Shining, the Heartless, and the Nobodies.

Home to the two people who currently had been assigned Northern Wall watch duty, and who had found a strange girl perched atop their watch post floor.

The bloody light lit her face, bringing out the violent red streaks at the tips of her hair. Her body was long and tall, though she had an air of being slightly underfed. Her pointed face looked slightly troubled, as if she was having a nightmare, her thick eyelashes shifting as her eyes moved in their sockets.

As if defining further that she was an outsider, her clothes looked strange and foreign. She wore a long t-shirt with a disturbing grinning yellow smiley-face on it, and a black vest that went over that. Her pants were olive colored with many pockets, and several red belts hung at an angle on her hip. She didn’t wear the simple white shoes that teenagers her age were instructed to wear with their school uniforms, instead, her shoes were bright yellow and lined with black.

The two guards looked down on her, one standing, the other squatting beside her limp form. The one squatting had a good natured face, with auburn hair pulled back into a loose, long ponytail that hung down his back. He wore a felt cowboy hat, tipped at an angle, and a long brown trench coat with heavy work boots beneath that. There was a high-powered rifle slung across his shoulder, and his brown eyes twinkled with amusement as he pondered over the girl before him.

The one standing was less amused. He was younger than his companion considerably, though his face was undeniably more handsome than his brown-coated co-worker’s. His messy, dark hair fell into his calculatingly cold, pale gray eyes, his mouth pulled into a slight frown. He wore a high-collared, navy-colored jacket, the shirt beneath was white and button up. His pants were charcoal gray, and he wore the standard white shoes his school uniform demanded. He seemed devoid of a weapon.


“At least I’m an as*shole and not a womanizer.” Jin raised an eyebrow at his companion, and the man in the trench coat laughed, long and loud.

“I prefer the term; Casanova, if you don’t mind. And don’t worry, I’m not going to do anything dishonorable to her.”

“….” Jin’s eyes were doubtful.

“Don’t look at me like that! She’s too young for my tastes! And besides, I like my women a little less tortured-looking and with a larger cup size than a B-.”

“You’re disgusting.” The teen sighed, his fingers rubbing the space between his eyes.

“OH! Like you’re any better!” The man stood up and pointed at Jin accusingly as the teen bent down to check the girl’s pulse, his forefingers resting against the side of her neck.

“Of course I’m better. What are you babbling on about, Irvine?” Jin asked boredly, lifting the girl’s eyelid to check if she had been knocked unconscious, or was merely sleeping.


“Well, let’s think about it rationally, here, since you’re the expert on that. You haven’t so much as batted an eyelid at a girl since you hit puberty! I can’t help but feel a tiny bit suspicious that you’re….um….on the other side of the tracks!!!” Irvine finished loudly, looking immensely satisfied with his deduction.

Jin froze and lifted his face to glare searingly into Irvine’s eyes.

“Are you saying you think I’m gay?”

“Well….yeah!” Irvine nodded furiously. “I mean, think about it! You seriously hate girls!”

Jin lost his glare and sighed wearily. “We’ve been over this, Irvine. I don’t hate girls. I’m just tired of them.”

“TIRED OF GIRLS?! GOOD GOD MAN, WHAT PLANET DO YOU COME FROM?!” The gunslinger shouted, obviously outraged.

Jin looked over the girl before turning to Irvine again.

“I’m just tired of their attention. You would be too, if you went to my school everyday and had to face them.”

“And if I looked more like you. That would help me out a lot.” Irvine pointed out.

“’Help you out a lot’? Try; ‘Completely destroy you a lot’.” The teen sighed.

Irvine seemed to weep as he yelled morosely;


“YOU KNOW, IF ANY OTHER GUY WERE IN YOUR BODY, THEY’D ABUSE IT AND USE IT TO GET THE MOST ENORMOUS FLOCK OF BEAUTIFUL GIRLS AROUND HIM!!! WHY ARE YOU SO STRANGE?! I BET YOU REALLY ARE GAY!!!”


“She’s out, stone cold.” Jin stated, ignoring Irvine’s outburst completely. “We should take her to Lulu, see if she can figure out what world she came from, and maybe revive her a bit.”

“Ooooh! I’ll carry her!” Irvine jumped on the opportunity, but Jin kicked him in the shin promptly to stop him from coming any nearer.

“I can’t trust you. Even if she’s not your type, you’ve been known to take advantage one time too many.”

“NOT TRUE!!” Irvine protested indignantly, but Jin shook his head.

“Remember the time when Lulu fell asleep over her cauldron and you took the opportunity and grabbed her chest?”

Irvine smacked his forehead. “Jin! She’s has the biggest bazoongas in the WORLD. THE WORLD, I’M TELLING YOU!!” He puffed out his chest for emphasis.

“Whatever.” The teen muttered, sliding his arms under the unconscious foreigner and lifting her from the ground.

“And since when do you care about a foreigner so much, anyway? We’ve found tons more like this girl before, but you’ve never given a hoot about them.” Irvine trotted along side Jin, taking the stairs that led down from the wall and into the residential area.

Jin rolled his eyes. “Irvine, those were all men and little kids. You wouldn’t have taken advantage of those people.”


“I’m not a criminal, Jin!” Irvine wiped away a fake tear dramatically. “YOU’RE SO JUDGEMENTAL!!”


“Shut up. You’re drawing attention.” Jin snarled, and Irvine looked around cheerily.

“I don’t see what’s wrong with that! They look mighty curious to see what’s going on!”

Jin growled under his breath, hoisting the girl higher up in his arms. She was heavier than she looked, but Lulu’s shop was only a few blocks away.

The residents, drawn by Irvine’s loud voice, stuck their heads out the window, eager for a look at what was going on. Some, mostly the teenage girls, emerged from their houses and pointed and stared with loathsome hatred at the girl in Jin’s arms. A gaggle of children ran up to walk beside the two guards, laughing and talking.

“Hey mister Guard man!” A short, blonde boy tugged on Irvine’s shirt. “Is that another foreigner?”

“Yup! We just found her on the Wall!” Irvine smiled and patted the boy on the head. “And she’s Jin’s new object of affection! Isn’t that cute? My little boy’s finally growing up!”

“Irvine, I’m going to kill you.” Jin snarled violently, and Irvine merely chuckled and continued walking.

“HEY EVERYBODY! THIS NEW FOREIGNER IS JIN’S GIRLFRIEN-“ Irvine shouted, but was cut off as Jin yelled out in a strangled manner and shoved the girl into Irvine’s arms.


“FINE! YOU carry her.” He spat, and strode off angrily in the direction of Lulu’s Potion Shop, which could be seen now, the small hut with its pointed, witch-hat roof closing in distance.

“Oh dear. I think I upset him.” Irvine smiled at the child beside him, and continued walking at a slow and steady pace.


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The woman dressed in all black, like a proper sorceress should. Her black hair was pinned back in an elaborate bun, strands falling about her face in a rouge manner. Her fur trimmed midnight dress held back her considerable bust, and her purple lips were pursed in thought.

She was bent over the girl that Jin and Irvine had brought her. They had placed her on Lulu’s bed, tucked away behind a curtain in the back of the shop, along with the black mage’s cauldron and potion supplies. The witch seemed to be intently looking over the foreigner, checking her clothes and consulting a few books every now and then.

Irvine was sitting in the front of the shop, legs splayed out in front of him as he waited at the counter. The shop was crowded with bottles and jars of different animal parts, such as cat eyeballs and newts. Dried herbs hung from the ceiling in large bundles, and spaced lamps and glass counters illuminated various merchandise for sale, trinkets for luck and potions for love and rejuvenation.

Jin was standing outside the shop, sulking as he leaned against the doorway. His mood hadn’t improved much, as it almost never did, and Irvine’s constant teasing wore away even more on his sanity.

“You know, Lulu, Jin was positively DELIGHTED to carry her all this way to your shop. In fact, I think he has taken rather a liking to her!” Irvine yelled at the back room, and Lulu’s calm, stoic voice emanated from behind the curtain.


“Irvine, the day Jin falls in love is the day I go out with you and the world decides to suddenly self-implode.”

“WHICH IS SOON!” Irvine yelled hopefully.

“What happened to that Selphie girl back on your home planet? Weren’t you two together?” Lulu emerged from the back room, arms crossed over her chest.


“Selphie? Well…..we grew up together…and she was cute and sweet….But you know, when your world implodes and the two of you are divided forever in eternity, you have to get over each other, and fast.” Irvine chuckled, his eyes growing dimmer and sadder.

Jin looked on, mildly surprised at Irvine’s sincere show of sadness.

“But enough of that, how’s the girl?” The gunslinger grinned, changing the subject abruptly.


Lulu looked at him skeptically, but sighed nonetheless and sat down in the plush chair behind the counter.


“She’s from a world I didn’t recognize at first. The ‘Dictionary of Planets’ didn’t recognize it either. I finally had to look it up using a Seeing Potion, and you better be grateful for that, because those cost a fortune.” She pointed a finger threateningly at Irvine and he gulped, nodding.

“So…?” Irvine led on, and Lulu shrugged.

“She’s from a world called Porta Sol. It’s a place where there’s lots of buildings, a real grungy city with hardly any vegetation or forests. My guess is that she hasn’t seen a tree anytime in her life other than when she read her fairy-tale books. Porta Sol is highly industrialized, an overpopulated archipelago. The whole planet is, in fact, a never-ending chain of islands, almost all of them desert wasteland with a few pockets where the major cities reside. The oceans turned into toxic waters millennia ago, and animals are almost non-existent and very rare. In her world, they drink machine-purified water and eat the flesh of genetically engineered animals and plants.


Lulu smiled.

“And despite its name, which means ‘Port of the Sun’ in a distant language, the whole world is shrouded in a very thick layer of ozone, which tints the sky eternally black. There are four suns and three moons there, but the inhabitants don’t see the heavenly bodies because the black cloud blocks them. Her world is an eternal night, she has had nothing other than night her whole life. In her world, all the light she sees is the artificial kind, ‘electricity’ they call it.”

“There is no magic there. Magic ceased to be when they destroyed their planet. The have no leaders, or even a single leader. They are ruled by companies who sell goods….’corporations’ they call them.”


Irvine and Jin looked at each other. Living like that seemed unfathomable to them. Fort Paradox was surrounded by miles and miles of lush deciduous forests, inhabited by natives and abundant wildlife. The Fort had been constructed on a plateau, to keep away the more direct threats, such as the Heartless, which called the forests their home. There were more Forts, farther away, which Paradox traded with and promoted commerce between. The Forts themselves were small, each governed by a single president and highly defended.

Two moons and a single sun ruled over their lives. They had beautiful sunsets and stunning sunny days, windy winters with chilly snow, and wet springs that promoted life.


They could not imagine a world were the skies were eternally dark.


“The girl herself is fourteen years old, and they use the same time system we do, so she’s the exact same age as Jin. My guess is she was born earlier in the year though, so technically, she’s older than him.”


Lulu shifted in her seat, arms resting across her lap.


“I couldn’t quite pick up her name….all of her memories were very hazy. She lived a normal life, she attended school like we do here, though they have a game called; ‘Battle’, which is like tournaments played with specialized weapons. The game is incredibly popular over there and determines their social lines. Those who play ‘Battle’ are at the top of the pecking order.”


”Original name.” Jin remarked sarcastically, and Lulu glared at him.

“Her father and mother were separated, and it seems she disliked her father quite a lot. For what, I’m not sure. However, she does have a beautiful singing voice, which she used to support herself and her mentally-ill mother because her father disliked giving them the required separation monies.”


”So she was like…what, a singing star?” Irvine inquired, and Lulu shook her head.


“Actually, the people in her world who managed singing careers thought she didn’t look physically like a star. They said she was too skinny, too ugly, and then they told her she could be the voice of another pop-star instead, who was much prettier than she is. So she sang for the pop-star, and she got a monthly check in mail to keep quiet about it. The diva used her voice to sing, because even though she was very pretty, she couldn’t sing worth Moogle shi*t.”


“How did she get here?” Irvine pressed further.

“Her world was destroyed approximately three hours ago. She was doing something with someone she loved at the time…I couldn’t make out his face, but he had a Keyblade in his hand and he defended her while she opened the door to the light.”


Jin’s head snapped up. “So that guy she was with….he’s the Keyblade wielder of that world?”

Lulu nodded. “Most likely so. He probably landed on another planet.”


”And we got the useless girl.” Jin scoffed heartlessly. “Figures.”


“Oh, stop being so mean. Maybe she can entertain us with her lovely voice, instead! I think that’s a fair trade, don’t you?” Irvine smiled and stretched his arms out lazily.

The teen narrowed his eyes. “Singing won’t solve our Heartless or Nobody problem. She’s just a useless hunk of flesh. I say we take her back to the wall and dump her over the side.”

Lulu glared. Irvine snickered.

“So that’s why you were being so kind to her and acting all worried. You thought she was a Keyblade wielder. And now that it’s turned up that she’s not, you want to get rid of the evidence that you were ever nice, huh?”

“Shut up, womanizer.” Jin spat, eyes growing colder.

“Both of you, stop it.” Lulu demanded, standing up. “Jin, stop being such a stone-heart for once in your life, and Irvine, stop being a tease. This is a human we’re talking about, not a toy you can discard of whenever you like.”

Jin turned his pale eyes on Lulu. “Did you check her aura? Does she have ANY battling capabilities at all?”


Lulu stared right back at the teen, one of the few in the town who could withstand his icy glare.

Finally, she looked away.

“No. She has no magical aptitude whatsoever and her weapon adaptability is next to nill.”


“Well there you go.” Jin stood up, smirking evilly. “Toss her over the side.”


He strode behind the counter despite vehement protests from Irvine and Lulu, and pushed the curtain aside.


He searched the dark room for the girl, and found her huddled up against the bed post, curled defensively and clinging to the wood desperately, as if expecting to be torn from her position forcefully and killed on the spot. She had wrapped herself entirely in the white sheet that had lain on the bed a moment before; making a giant hood around her that shrouded both her terrified face and thin body. Only her searingly blue, brilliant azure eyes shone from beneath the folds of white, pained with fiery hate and fear.

Her body was shaking violently, as if she was shivering with cold. She looked like a wild animal, desperately defending herself against something that seemed to terrify her. Defending herself against him.


He froze when his eyes locked with hers, and he stayed that way as she spoke in a fierce, savage, hateful voice.




“My name is Akari Shihoun, and please, don’t try to toss me over any wall. I would probably rip your face into pieces if you did.”​





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She waited until the woman in black left. The potion the woman had made her drink was bitter, but it brought back a flood of memories that the woman seemed to be able to read. When she left, Akari straightened up and stopped pretending to be asleep. She had first woken when the strange man in the brown coat placed her on the bed and left, but she wanted to remain inconspicuous and try to listen in on what was happening.


As she listened, the sinking feeling in her stomach grew worse. The woman named Lulu explained her whole life story to the two men waiting, the men who were obviously the ones who found her in the first place. She wondered what the ‘night’ they talked about was. Did her planet have a lot of ‘night’? Was there really anything other than a black sky?


The woman spoke then, shattering Akari’s thoughts.

“Most likely so. He probably landed on another planet.”


So Urui….was somewhere else. He didn’t die…he just landed in another place, like she had done. She just hoped he was treated as kindly as these people had treated her so far.


”And we got the useless girl.” She heard a cold, smooth, deep voice, like the winter wind, speak with scorn. “Figures.”

It was one of the guards, and he sounded heartless. The frigid tone of his voice made her want to drink hot cocoa and put a scarf on to get warmer. She instinctively wrapped the bedsheet around her to stop herself from shivering.


“Oh, stop being so mean. Maybe she can entertain us with her lovely voice, instead! I think that’s a fair trade, don’t you?”

The other guard, the one in the brown coat, had a cheerful, flowing voice that Akari liked immediately. Her chill wore off slightly as he spoke. And he was right, too. She’d sing for them, if that stupid guard with the horrid voice would stop being such an a*ss.



“Singing won’t solve our Heartless or Nobody problem. She’s just a useless hunk of flesh. I say we take her back to the wall and dump her over the side.”


The cold enveloped her again, stabbing her body with pricking chills. The sheet tightened around her frame instinctively and her eyes widened beneath the hood of the blanket. He wanted to kill her because she was useless…


Akari heard the other guard suddenly snicker in amusement, and she wondered what was so funny about the prospect of her death.

“So that’s why you were being so kind to her and acting all worried. You thought she was a Keyblade wielder. And now that it’s turned up that she’s not, you want to get rid of the evidence that you were ever nice, huh?”

Keyblade…? They knew about the Keyblade too?!


“Shut up, womanizer.” The cold guard shot, and she swore she felt a blizzard go through the room.



“Both of you, stop it.” Akari heard the woman stand up. ”Jin, stop being such a stone-heart for once in your life, and Irvine, stop being a tease. This is a human we’re talking about, not a toy you can discard of whenever you like.”


So the warm guard’s name was Irvine, and the cold one was Jin.


“Did you check her aura? Does she have ANY battling capabilities at all?” Jin sounded doubtful, and Akari thought that if he wasn’t so chilly, his voice would be very pleasant to listen to. But he was right. Akari disliked fighting period, and so she never tried out for things like Battle because she knew she would be pathetic at it.

She wondered if she did have any talent…..could the witch really tell?


There was a slight silence, and finally, the Lulu woman spoke.


“No. She has no magical aptitude whatsoever and her weapon adaptability is next to nill.”

Akari’s heart sank.


“Well there you go.” She suddenly heard the cold guard stand up.



“Toss her over the side.”

His voice was hard, evilly amused, and above all, deeply frigid. She began to shiver violently as she heard his footsteps come closer to the curtain, the protests of Lulu and Irvine becoming fainter and fainter as his steps neared. She wanted time to slow, she wanted to go back to her own world, she wanted to fall asleep again just to avoid the wintry chill that was coming her way.

He probably looked as cold as he sounded. He was probably twig-skinny, with pale skin and icy blue eyes. He probably had long fingers with long nails, and long, white hair that blew like a snow cloud in the wind. He was probably ugly, his eyes too close together and his mouth too small. He was probably as ugly as he sounded…..

She didn’t want to be here. She wanted to be warm again. Her heart beat despite the lack of heat in her body, pumping blood quickly as she got more and more anxious and frightened. His footsteps were close, they hovered on the threshold of the curtain before he stepped through, pushing the fabric to one side.

Her mental image of the Cold Guard was shattered at first sight.

For a split second upon seeing his face, she froze. Her mind immediately took in his tall, lightly muscled frame. Her eyes searched his sun-tinted skin for any sign of outward warmth, she searched the startled expression on his face for any sign of compassion.

He wasn’t twig skinny, he didn’t have vampire-pale skin. His fingers were long and spidery, yes, but without long nails. His dark hair fell into his surprised gray eyes, and while it wasn’t long as she had thought, the tips of his hair went a little past his jaw line, ruffled in a disorganized manner. His eyes weren’t too close together; they were perfectly proportioned and slanted at the corners, with thicker eyelashes than she had seen on any girl. His mouth wasn’t too small, it was completely normal, his lips pulled downward in shock.

He was more handsome than Urui by leaps and bounds, more handsome than anyone she had known in her short life.


The Cold Guard, Jin, looked absolutely nothing like he sounded.


She squeezed the bedpost in her hands tightly. His appearance made her conviction waver, but she would not let it shake her. He sounded like he had been meaning to kill her, and she had to show him that she wasn’t going to lie down and take that.


Her voice came out exactly like she wanted it to sound, despite her surprise; fierce, angry, and burning with hatred.

She would burn his cold, stunning face away with her venomous hate.



“My name is Akari Shihoun, and please, don’t try to toss me over any wall. I would probably rip your face into pieces if you did.”​












Finite

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Master Alltro-N

The Deserts Spirit
Silly Jin, She IS the Keyblade's Chosen One...
All right, Heartless are formed when the darkness of a persons Heart consumes it. Nobodies are the Body and Soul that remains and are destined to return to darkness. Then when a Nobody does return to the darkness, the body fades away and the Soul becomes a Shining. That would make perfect sense, no? But that is just how i see it. Am I right?

To cool. It's not long, but it serves its purpose of causing a addiction of sorts to make people want to read it; all good stories do! Can't wait for more!

Master A-N Out
 
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Mimori Kiryu

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OMFG. I....LOVE...JIN...DAMMIT. D:

No, srsly, I do. He reminds me of Kai... *is shot*

I loved this chapter, it was really great, Saber as always. <3
 

chrisivy

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This is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
 

lisalover

I'm a KA water bunny
WHOHAAAAAAAAA!

Another great fic from Saber. Finally a not Gary Stu or Mary Sue KH fic.

So far the story is intrestring and very well written. I look forward to seeing this to the end.

Anyway as for the story itself I liked the way how in chappie two you had the conversation between Lulu, Ivrine, and Jin and then you showed us what is was like through Akari's eyes.

Not to mention you have my favorite FF character yeah Lulu.

Like I said before nice work on the fic and Good Luck.

p.s.
Irvine smacked his forehead. “Jin! She’s has the biggest bazoongas in the WORLD. THE WORLD, I’M TELLING YOU!!” He puffed out his chest for emphasis.

Someone else notices.
 

Sike Saner

Peace to the Mountain
He probably looked as cold as he sounded. He was probably twig-skinny, with pale skin and icy blue eyes. He probably had long fingers with long nails, and long, white hair that blew like a snow cloud in the wind. He was probably ugly, his eyes too close together and his mouth too small. He was probably as ugly as he sounded…..

Akari and I have very different ideas of what constitutes "ugly" - the image of a person that she's imagining there sounds very lovely... *_*

But Jin's actual appearance is nice, too. ^^ He's a character I came to like immediately. He and Irvine have very entertaining interaction, too.

Following are two scenes that I just absolutely effing adored:

“Hey mister Guard man!” A short, blonde boy tugged on Irvine’s shirt. “Is that another foreigner?”

“Yup! We just found her on the Wall!” Irvine smiled and patted the boy on the head. “And she’s Jin’s new object of affection! Isn’t that cute? My little boy’s finally growing up!”

“Irvine, I’m going to kill you.” Jin snarled violently, and Irvine merely chuckled and continued walking.

“HEY EVERYBODY! THIS NEW FOREIGNER IS JIN’S GIRLFRIEN-“ Irvine shouted, but was cut off as Jin yelled out in a strangled manner and shoved the girl into Irvine’s arms.


“FINE! YOU carry her.” He spat, and strode off angrily in the direction of Lulu’s Potion Shop, which could be seen now, the small hut with its pointed, witch-hat roof closing in distance.

“Oh dear. I think I upset him.” Irvine smiled at the child beside him, and continued walking at a slow and steady pace.

He searched the dark room for the girl, and found her huddled up against the bed post, curled defensively and clinging to the wood desperately, as if expecting to be torn from her position forcefully and killed on the spot. She had wrapped herself entirely in the white sheet that had lain on the bed a moment before; making a giant hood around her that shrouded both her terrified face and thin body. Only her searingly blue, brilliant azure eyes shone from beneath the folds of white, pained with fiery hate and fear.

Her body was shaking violently, as if she was shivering with cold. She looked like a wild animal, desperately defending herself against something that seemed to terrify her. Defending herself against him.


He froze when his eyes locked with hers, and he stayed that way as she spoke in a fierce, savage, hateful voice.



“My name is Akari Shihoun, and please, don’t try to toss me over any wall. I would probably rip your face into pieces if you did.”​


Oh, and as for this:

xXSaberXx said:
What anime is Rionette from?

He is from Rave Master.
Albeit only three episodes of it. T______T


And finally:
 

xXSaberXx

xxxXsightless
Master Altro: That's a good guess! But you'll learn where they really come from, soon. :p Promise.

THANKS!

Mimori: ROFL ROFL ROFL. HE'S NOT KAI. Srsly. :p

HUGS.


Sike: xDDDDDDDDDD!!! I tried to make 'ugly'. I obviously phailed. TwT Thanks again for le quotes. OCCT FOREVARRRRRRR!111



xD MMKAY. NEXT CHAP TIME.


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Chaptaire o.o3: Defense System

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The eye contact would not break. Neither of them was willing to pull back, to give in. Irvine and Lulu stood up and entered the curtained room after listening to the few seconds of stunned silence and the vicious sentence the girl uttered. Looking to see what was going on, they pulled back the fabric and stepped into the dim room, where both young adults quickly fell silent upon what they saw.


Jin quickly got over his stunned state when Irvine stepped up to his side and nudged him in the ribs, chuckling.

“You still think you can toss her now?”

Lulu rolled her eyes and swept over to the feral-looking girl. Akari flinched back, and the sorceress spoke in a calm, mellow voice that she reserved for children and small animals.

“Don’t worry, I wont hurt you, neither will the boy. My name is-“

“-Lulu. I know. You’re a witch, we had those in our world before the cities took over. I didn’t think I’d ever meet one.” Akari interrupted the black mage flawlessly, her muscles relaxing slightly as she spoke.

Lulu’s blood red eyes widened, and then softened, amused.

“Well you got to meet one after all, hm?”

Irvine bounded over, feeling quite left out of the introduction.

“And I’m Irvine! Welcome to Fort Paradox!” His smile was infectious, and Akari couldn’t help but grin along with him.

“You’re the one that brought me here, right? Thank you for that.” She smiled warmly, and Irvine chuckled.

“Well well, what a pretty smile you have. Your name is Akari, right?”

She nodded, the compliment making her blush.

“I thought so. I wasn’t really the one who brought you here, you know, that was Jin.” He jerked his thumb over his shoulder. “He was the first one to spot you, too. I just carried you a little bit of the way when Jin got tired.” Irvine grinned brilliantly, and Akari froze, eyes shifting upward to meet Jin’s glare.

Jin looked down on her with distaste. He saw that she was opening her mouth to say something, probably a ‘thank you,’ and he didn’t want thanks, so he interrupted her.

“Don’t thank me. I did nothing.”

Akari maintained her gaze. “I wasn’t going to thank you.” She answered in a cool voice.

Jin’s eyes narrowed, and Akari frowned.




“I was going to tell you that the Keyblade Urui fought with was actually mine.”​


The room froze. Lulu’s expression widened, Irvine raised his eyebrows so high that they disappeared into his hairline, and Jin took a step back.


“Are you saying you could hold the Keyblade as well as the boy?” Lulu asked quickly, and Akari nodded.

“Actually, it was mine to begin with.”

Lulu held her hand up. “Please, start over. Tell us your story from the beginning, and how your world came to die.”

The girl’s eyes widened. “My world……is dead?”

Jin folded his arms across his chest and looked at her heartlessly.

“Of course. Why else would you be here? When you opened the door to the light, which is the heart of your world, the light scattered and the Heartless ate it up. Those with strong hearts survived the explosion, and were transported to different planets.”

“Let her tell her story first, Jin.” Irvine insisted, and Akari’s eyes fell to the floor.


“Yes. Well….”



“It started when I went out on a date with Urui. That’s the boy you saw holding the Keyblade. We snuck out, and he drove us to the movies. We were watching the movie when there was suddenly a black out.”

Akari shook her head, trying to think.

“When the lights didn’t come back on, Urui got his cellphone out so the light from the screen could be seen…”

“Cellphone?” Irvine asked, curious.

“Um….it’s like a portable telephone…..erm….something you talk to other people with…” The girl struggled to explain.

“Like the Moogle Mail System here, only hundreds of times faster.” Lulu snapped, and Irvine nodded in recognition as Akari continued.

“I looked in the back of the room…and the rest of the crowd was being attacked by these black creatures with huge eyes….they moved around like spiders, and they made these little heart-shaped crystals come out of the people’s chests. The person’s body would get turned into another little black thing afterward, and the light creatures that were there as well would attack the heart and spear it through, like they wanted to kill it.”


Jin’s head suddenly snapped up. His gaze caught both Lulu’s and Irvine’s, and he spoke to Akari in a low voice.

“Those black beings are called Heartless. They come in many shapes and sizes, but the small creature is their most common form. Their only goal is to free people’s hearts, which were those crystals you saw. But you said there were light creatures there as well?”

”Yes. They were box shaped, and they slid along on their feet very fast. They attacked the hearts and speared them with their big hands…..” Akari answered, starting to shiver as Jin’s gaze bore deeper into her face.

“She had Shining in her world.” Irvine muttered.

“That’s not good….” Lulu sighed, and Akari looked on, confused.

“Wait…why is that so bad?”

Jin answered for them, his voice level and chilly.

“The Shining are the polar opposites of the Heartless. Instead of searching for and freeing hearts, the Shining forcefully destroy hearts. The door to the light is the heart of your world, every world has one, just as every world has only one Keyblade wielder. If the Shining were on your planet when you opened the door to the light, then they destroyed your planet completely. All the people with weak hearts perished, and there is no way to recover them, ever again. If it was just Heartless, then they would have only freed your planet’s heart, and there would be many ways to retrieve it. But not this time. Your home is gone now.”

Akari froze. Her world was gone. She was an orphan now. Her father and mother were dead, her classmates were dead, her life was gone. Her apartment was gone, every record that she ever existed had perished. She had no anchor, no defining purpose.

Her life was gone.


“Please, you must continue with your story. We can talk about your planet later. I know it’s hard to digest, but it is urgent that we know who had the Keyblade in your world….” Lulu pressed, glaring at Jin, who merely smirked and leaned against a wall casually.

“She’s right. We gotta know what happened to the Keyblade wielder, and why you could hold the Keyblade as well. It’s very rare that one world has two wielders, you know….” Irvine’s eyes were soft with pity and compassion. He remembered the feeling of losing his world too….

”…..yes. I’m sorry.” The girl broke her stunned silence, burying her head in her hands and forcing herself to continue with her tale.

“We ran from the theater, out the emergency exit door. I stopped midway, and the Heartless and Shining flooded in behind me. I suddenly felt so brave, and I told Urui to run while I held them off. I held out my hand, and the Keyblade fell into it, but it felt very awkward, nothing like the Keyblade in my dream.”

“Your dream-??” Irvine interrupted, but Lulu held up a hand to silence him.

“Continue.” The witch ordered, and Akari obliged, not lifting her face from the cradle of her hands.

“I fended them off, really badly because I don’t know how to fight worth jack, but I did my best. I killed several, and the hearts released by the Heartless were killed by the Shining, so I got in a few extra swings then….”


“And then Urui dragged me away, out into the parking lot. We got in his car, and we drove along the highway. Everything was ruined, the buildings were in flames, the shadows and the light were everywhere, attacking everything.”


“We didn’t know what to do, until I remembered my dream. Something told me that what happened in my dream was what I should do now, so we went there, to the Star Stadium. The gate wouldn’t open, but the Keyblade did something funny and it opened after that. We ran and ran and ran, and we got inside to the stage. We were surrounded suddenly by Heartless and a few Shining, with no way out. I knew I had to get to the stage, and Urui knew it too. He told me to give him the Keyblade, and I did. He was the school Battle Committee head, so he did a better job of killing than I did.”


“And the Keyblade didn’t jump back into your hand?” Lulu questioned, and Akari shook her head.

“No. It stayed in his. I ran up to the stage, and there was the door to the light at the end of it. I opened it……and then……I woke up here.”


“Makes sense.” Irvine muttered.

“You said you had a dream….did you have a Keyblade in that dream?” Lulu pressed, and Akari nodded.

“Yes. And I fell through darkness a lot, and landed on these platforms….and fought the Shining things….”

Jin’s eyes flickered. “You fought Shining? Are you sure it wasn’t Heartless?”

“They were cream-colored. They glowed. They looked like boxes. It was Shining. I even fought a giant Shining, but I failed and the dream ended after that.”

“There was a voice, too. It was calm and guided you through the whole thing.” Jin continued, and Akari nodded.


“Yes.” She looked at the cold guard with questioning eyes, wondering how he could have known that.


“Can you do something for us?” Irvine asked, and Akari shrugged.

“We need you to hold out your hand and summon the Keyblade like you did in the theater. Can you do that?”

The girl lifted her head from her hands, eyes oddly empty. She held out her right hand and concentrated.


Nothing came. No flash of light, no blade.

They waited, and waited.


“Nothing.” Jin scoffed. “I was right. She’s useless. We might as well just report her to the Citadel and assign her a housing apartment. Maybe if she’s lucky, she’ll get a new family. But we can’t take her, she can’t fight, she can’t even become a Guard….”


Silver eyes found her face. Heartless silver eyes.

“You have no talents other than your singing. And while that may have helped you in your black world, little girl, it won’t help you in this one. We’ll find you a place to live, and you’ll start school on Moonsday like everyone else. You’ll build your new life here as a worthless piece of scrap planet that just happened to land in this universe.”

“You’ll start over, like everyone else. It’s a pity you landed on this world.”


His words made Akari break. The tears began to well up in her eyes as she truly realized she was alone in a strange world, with no sense of time or place. No one cared about her here, and his cold voice stabbed this truth into her and burned it into her brain.

She broke.


Akari stood up abruptly, sheet falling off her body, hands clenched in anger.

“TO HELL WITH YOUR WORLD!”

Lulu stood up abruptly as well, placing a hand on Akari’s shoulder. The girl shrugged it off, screaming.

“DON’T TOUCH ME. I DON’T WANT YOUR DAMN WORLD, I DON’T WANT ANY OF YOUR HELP, AND I DEFINITELY DON’T WANT ANY OF YOUR PITY!!!!”

She streaked past them, out the shop’s door, and into the dark streets. Night had fallen.

Lulu sighed, throwing a venomous glare at Jin. “You just had to choose today to be especially vicious.”

“I’ll go get her.” Irvine stood up wearily, and Jin snorted.

“Don’t bother. She’ll come back. She has nowhere else to go.”

Lulu nodded. “But you never know what could happen in the night. I’ll send Eiko after her.”

“Eiko!” The witch yelled into the air.

Suddenly, a flash of light appeared at her shoulder, and a small fairy with short purple hair, a horn on her forehead, and small white wings was hovering over Lulu’s neck, smiling.

“Yay yay, happy day! Lulu finally has an important quest for Eiko that only Eiko can complete!!! Lulu makes Eiko feel important!! Teehee…” The fairy’s voice was small and sickeningly cute.

“Oh give it up, pipsqueak. She just wants you to tag the girl that just left, nothing special. She’s got red streaks in her hair and is wearing weird clothes.” Jin rolled his eyes.

Eiko stuck her tongue out at him and flew over to hover before his eyes.

”Aww, shuddup doodoo-head. I bet it was your fault the girl left in the first place!” The fairy spat, and Jin developed a stressed expression that finally imploded.

“Just go tag her!!!” He shouted, and Eiko made a rude hand gesture with her diminutive fingers at him before flying out of the shop, leaving a trail of purple sparkles in her wake.

When it was silent again, Irvine flopped onto the bed, sighing.


“So maybe something happened. I’m betting that Urui boy had the dream as well, otherwise, he wouldn’t have been able to wield the Keyblade.”

”That doesn’t explain why the girl had the dream, yet she can’t summon her Keyblade when she calls for it.” Jin shot back. Lulu nodded.

“Personally, I believe the Keyblade she fought with in her world wasn’t really hers.”

There was a pause in the air.

Finally, Irvine raised an eyebrow. “I’ve never heard of that happening before.”

The witch nodded. “It’s very rare. When the wielder of a Keyblade isn’t ready to fight, their personal Keyblade won’t answer their call. She wanted very desperately to defend Urui, so she called out to a Keyblade that wasn’t hers. Her will to protect was so strong, she was able to call another blade to her.”

“So she is a Keyblade wielder.” Jin muttered, and Lulu shrugged.

“If she doesn’t find her reason for fighting, the Keyblade may never come to her. And considering we need every Keyblade wielder we can get, we need her to shape up, and fast.”

“She has a weak heart.” Jin snarled. “You can’t make a weak heart strong overnight.”

“I think her heart’s very strong.” Lulu interjected.

“Then how is it that you sensed no magical aptitude or weapon capability in her before?” The teen shot back, and the witch smiled a rare smile.

“Her Keyblade hasn’t answered her call yet. When it does, her heart will be far stronger than anyone can imagine. Maybe even stronger than you, Jin.”

“That’s just a hunch.” Jin continued for her, and Lulu shook her head.





“No. That’s a fact.”​





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Her face felt hot and dry, the night air cooling her skin as rapidly as it heated up. Her feet took her to the highest point in the city, climbing up flights and flights of stairs until she stood on the edge of the grand wall that separated the city from the dense forest thousands of feet below. The two crescent moons hung lazily in the sky, one blue, the other creamy-white against the backdrop of the midnight bowl.


It was beautiful. The sight was breath-taking. She had never seen such a clear, navy-colored sky before, lit with pure white light. She had read and studied about the moons in her classes, but she had never seen them before with her own eyes.

It was stunning. Her optics traveled down to the velvety forest below, the tops of the spiked pine trees shifting in the cool wind and carrying with them a citrus scent.

She had never seen trees before, either. She wanted to reach out and touch them, they looked so soft and fluffy. They were queer things, piled on top of each other, seeming to be competing for space, as the skyscrapers in her home did.


Her dead home.

Akari shook her head and concentrated on the view.

The horizon……never in her life had she seen a horizon. It stretched on and on forever, seeming to have been sewn straight into the sky. The panoramic view, when digested too fast, made her light-headed, and she felt incredibly small and empty standing on top of the large wall with the large sky before her.

So empty.




”Your world is gone…..”


She inhaled sharply, the wintry voice in her head fading. He was a di*ckhead. She hated him from first sight. He was easy on the eyes, but that belied the bitter, sarcastic, judgmental, heartless, sadistic inner shell. He was beauty and the beast, all rolled into one package.

The black sorceress Lulu was kind enough. She knew too much, and was too keenly perceptive. Akari got the feeling that around the witch, no thought went unread. She knew every notion that crossed your mind, or at least had a very good idea of the notions in your mind.

Irvine, the sharp-shooting guard, was an affable man, and she had the feeling that every person he met instantly liked him. He seemed to have an overactive imagination and a heavily leaning preference toward women. He seemed adept at hiding his emotions as well as his past, so in a way, all three of her ‘saviors’ were mysterious and unknown figures.


just like the white-cloaked people in her dream….



She leaned her arms on the wall, resting her head on her elbows. The night air blew gently across her face, and she still felt so alone. The sky seemed so large, the forest seemed so full. She felt so small, insignificant, abandoned. Her life had been shattered in a single night.

The tears refused to come to her. The image of her parent’s face grew fainter and fainter by the second. Urui was but a distant memory, shoved aside to make room for this strange world of sunset crystal and ridiculous things like magic and witches and trees and living animals and something called ‘daylight.’


This was her home….now.


She assumed the people of this world got a lot of stragglers from destroyed worlds. How could they not? She was surprised her world didn’t have a better knowledge of things like Heartless, the Shining, and doors to the light. Some worlds knew more, others less, obviously.

Her stomach rumbled, interrupting her thinking and her serious debate on what to do with the rest of her life. She blushed. She hadn’t eaten since lunch yesterday, and her stomach was protesting to the lack of food. Akari sighed, knowing she would have to return to the witch’s hut if she wanted nourishment. The thought of going back made her insides flip over nervously. Jin would be there, and anywhere he was, she didn’t want to be.

He would glare at her and probably ice over her food. And then she’d starve and she’d die.

She shook her head. She was being overdramatic. Jin didn’t like her for the simple fact that he thought she was a weakling. Irvine seemed to care less about her battling skills, and Lulu was content with being somewhere in the middle.

They didn’t care about her……did they? They had their own lives to worry about, so why bother with hers?

Oh…right….the Keyblade, Irvine had said.

She sighed and her mind wandered. Then she recalled Irvine’s words that Jin had carried her from the Northern Wall all the way to the hut, and she flushed darkly, thinking about his large, spidery fingers wrapped around her body.


An amused voice suddenly cut through the air.

“Yeah, Jin does that to a lot of girls.”

A boy looking slightly older than her landed on the wall’s lip lightly, his mop of blonde hair swaying as he regained his balance from his jump. He wore a blue vest with a puffy, sleeveless pirate blouse beneath it, the ruffles peeking through his vest’s collar. His pants were blue as well, flaring out at the ends around his laced-up boots. He had a dagger strapped to one hip, large, ruffled gloves, and most startling of all, a long monkey tail protruding from the back of his tailbone.

His eyes were colored a feral turquoise. He smiled, and sat himself on the wall, tail curling slightly.


“A-Ah! How did you-? BAH! I wasn’t….thinking about Jin!! I have no idea what you’re talking about!!” Akari protested, glaring a fiery glare at the monkey boy.

The boy laughed. “Whenever a girl goes from silent to blushing in less than ten seconds in this town, you know Jin’s got something to do with it.”

“Bleah! He’s the one that made me run here in the first place.” Akari spat.

“In the middle of the night? Wow, he must have said something really bad.” The boy chuckled. “The name’s Zidane, by the way. Resident Thief of Fort Paradox. I’m your typical good guy, I steal from the rich, and give to the poor!” His tail swished back and forth excitedly, and Akari’s face lightened considerably. His enthusiasm was infectious.

“I’m Akari. I’m….uh…your typical evil girl…..who likes to sing…?” She struggled for an accurate description of herself, and Zidane chuckled.

“You don’t look evil….” He cocked his head to one side.


Akari snickered. “Two words. Food Depravation.”


Suddenly curious, she lifted her arms from the wall slowly and fingered Zidane’s furry tail. He jumped up abruptly, looking slightly embarrassed.

“Oh! Sorry…I was just wondering if it was real.”

”You bet your Chocobo’s it is.” Zidane grimaced. “It hurts like a douche whenever Eiko or Irvine pulls it.”

Akari laughed.

“You’re the new girl, right? I heard a lot about you from eavesdropping on the town’s dinner tables.” The thief smiled. “Seems to me like you’re the newest foreigner Lulu and Jin have taken an interest in.”

Akari’s eyes widened at the mentioned thought that Lulu and Jin interrogated EVERY foreigner that arrived in Fort Paradox.

“You mean…..they question every strange person that arrives here?”

“Yup! Rumor is, is that they’re searching for more Keyblade wielders, which is bullcrap. We all know there are already three of them in this town, and that’s all the prophecy talks about.”

Akari looked at Zidane, genuinely confused.

The thief laughed. “Oh, right! You don’t know about the prophecy. Well, it was made long ago by the first President of Fort Paradox. He had ESP, you know, and he made a prediction that when the Citadel…”

Zidane pointed to the four towers in the distance.

“….when the Citadels are encroached upon by the Blood Crystals and the whole of Fort Paradox turns crimson red, three Keyblade wielders from different worlds will come together and defend Paradox from its greatest threat.”

“The buildings around here are slowly being covered with growing Blood Crystal, as you can see, and the Citadel has been growing them for some time now. We have three really powerful Keyblade wielders in town already, they’ve been here since they were kids, training to defend this town. Now all we have to wait for is the ‘greatest threat’.”

“Heartless?” Akari asked, but Zidane laughed.

“No, we take care of those easily enough. Sometimes we get Nobodies or Shining, but we kill them right away. No, the greatest threat will probably be something much, much worse.” His tone was cheery.

“So that was why they wanted to know about me so badly….” Akari muttered.

“Yeah, Lulu and Jin are pretty self-serving, but then again, so am I. Plus, they work for the President in scouring out new Keyblade wielders, and they get paid for it. Everyone in town is kinda scared of them…I guess, because they work for the Prez and all. Except Jin’s fangirl’s, they aren’t scared of ANYTHING ‘cept a glare from their object of obsession.”


“Lulu’s the most powerful Black Mage in the Fort, beside the Prez’s right-hand bodyguard, and Jin’s one of the six Captains in the Wall Patrol. Him and Irvine are the best of the best when it comes to guarding our defense, besides the top Captain, Sir Rust-a-lot Steiner, of course.” Zidane laughed again.


“Though, now that I think about it, Lulu’s helped me a bunch of times, so she’s really not so bad. I’m trying to find someone, and she’s helped out a lot. Jin has too. He’s actually a pretty nice guy if you don’t rub him the wrong way or make a bad first impression.


Akari rolled her eyes. “I did both.”

Zidane chuckled, flipping his dagger in the air lazily.

“But not on purpose! He tried to toss me over the wall! I wasn’t going to take that!”

The monkey boy spewed sudden laughter, rocking back and forth hysterically. “Throw you over?! HAHAHA. That’s a good one!!!”

When his laughter subsided, he smiled at Akari.

“Don’t mind him, he says that a lot to people he thinks are unworthy of being in his presence.” Zidane puffed up his chest and did a startling face impression of an angry Jin. Akari couldn’t help but laugh, and she held a stitch in her side as she spoke.

“I…don’t know. I just….don’t like him very much.” She caught her breath, her face falling. “He’s rude, he has no sense of chivalry, he looks at me like I’m dirt….the first time I was near him I wanted crush his stupid little head into the ground and jump on it a thousand times-“

“Ahh…Akari?” Zidane said nervously, looking behind the girl with wide eyes.

The girl took no notice of Zidane’s voice, getting angrier and angrier by the second.

“-and then I’d take a flamethrower-which is a like a big gun that shoots fire in my world-and douse him in oil, set him on fire, and shove him over the edge of the wall and see how much he likes it. Oh! And when his body hits the ground, I’ll get some giant biting ants in the jungle and sic ‘em on him! AND THEN DUMP HIM IN THE RIVER AND WATCH HIM GO OVER THE WATERFALL! AHAHAHA! IT’S THE PERFECT PLAN!!!! Don’t you think so, Zidane? Wouldn’t it be funny?-” Akari turned to face the monkey boy, and froze, coming face to face with the stoically-expressional Jin himself.


“Oh yes. It would be hilarious.” The dark haired teen sneered. Zidane smacked his forehead exasperatedly and Akari glared.

“You always encourage people to badmouth me, don’t you, Zidane?” Jin asked casually, his voice laced with slight amusement as he walked closer to the pair of them.

“Not on purpose, Jinny. You know you’re my partner in crime. I’d never do anything to bring you down.” Zidane sighed sarcastically, grinning slightly.

“Hmph.” Jin smirked good-naturedly, ignoring Akari completely and leaning against the wall alongside the other two.

Akari felt that her presence was being invaded and she scooted over a few feet, away from the cold guard. She said nothing, and continued to stare at the sky.

Jin never took his silver eyes from the jungle while he spoke.

“I’ve heard that you’ve never seen the sky before…”

The girl sniffed, trying to sound indifferent. She didn’t speak, she felt that if she spoke, she’d start playing the little game she was sure he was setting her up for, the one where he’d end up proving how weak and insignificant she was.


After a few seconds of silence, Jin tried speech again.


“I won’t bite, you know. Unless you make me angry.”


“I don’t give a sh*it if you get angry or not. You really think I care?” Akari spat back.

“Of course you care. You’re just another girl. They always care.” Jin sighed in a monotone, expecting her to cower or stutter and agree with him, just like they always did.

Zidane watched on, his tail flicking back and forth nervously.

“Know what? I think you’re wrong. Ever since I met you, I’ve had a feeling that you’ll always just be the douche I’ll never give a damn about. You think you’re so high and mighty, don’t you? I hope you don’t think I owe you something for finding me, ‘cause there’s nothing in my power I’d be willing to owe you. Except maybe some extra vomit in my gut that I may just happen to puke up on your shoes.”

Zidane snorted so loudly it sounded as if he had inhaled a large, flapping insect.

Akari continued, as Jin seemed to be struck wordless.

She had no idea where her extra bravery was coming from.


“I’m sorry I’m being rude. I really am just paralleling the hospitality I’ve been shown at your hands! My world may have been dark, ugly, and insignificant, but at least we don’t threaten to throw our guests over walls. Did I mention that everyone there is relatively ugly? That’s a good thing, because otherwise we’d have people like you, Jin, who’d strut around and act like they own the ground they walk on. And then, we’d all be a society of pretentious a*sses! We’d all be snotty kings! And bit*chy queens! OH, HOW I BOW AT YOUR FEET, YOUR MAJESTY!!!!”

The girl embellished her last sentence with enough sarcasm to freeze the air she breathed. Her bow was long, exaggerated, and when she came back up again, her face was flushed with victory.


Zidane was holding his stomach in the background, laughter ripping at his insides.

Akari bowed once more, and turned, walking away from the wall and toward the witch’s hut, where food awaited her.



“Later, Your Pathetic Highness.” Her voice sneered.



Jin stood there in silence, Zidane holding in muffled laughter.


The thief smiled after recovering from his bout of amusement.


“You, my friend, just got shafted for the first time in your life. Welcome to the club.”


Jin made a slight growling noise in his throat, standing up and aiming to run after the girl when the ground around them suddenly sprang to life. Shadows erupted from the stone, jerking and walking slowly, bulbous yellow eyes searching.


Heartless.

Zidane reacted quickly. He drew his dagger and took a Heartless out in a graceful swoop of his blade. Jin narrowed his eyes and gathered a storm of cold, icy energy in his palm. The Blizzard attack shot from his hand, blowing up into a frigid crystal bomb the second it touched the ring of Heartless.

As the defeated, pink, ethereal hearts floated upward, the remaining Heartless turned and scurried down the stairs, an enormous swarm of them gathering and running toward a scream that emitted from further down the alleyways below.

“They’re after her!” Zidane shouted, and Jin nodded.

Suddenly, the same scream came zooming toward them, in the form of a purple light.

Eiko the fairy was panting as she hovered in front of Jin’s face.

“I just caught up with Akari…..but….but…they….they surrounded her!! She shouted for me to go get help, and I did, but when I looked back, they’d piled on top of her! OOOH! You have to go help!!! There are hundreds of them!!!”

Jin snarled in anger. “Dammit! We’ve should have told her that being a Keyblade wielder makes you a target for Heartless.”

He looked up at the worried faerie and monkey thief.

“Eiko, go get Lulu and Irvine to help. Zidane, let’s go.”

Zidane and Eiko nodded, and the two teens ran down the stairs as Eiko sped away to the witch’s hut.

Zidane took a shortcut down by bounding from rooftop to rooftop with his monkey-like agility. Jin turned to face the sheer drop behind the stairs, and jumped. He landed easily on the ground, and began to run toward the mass of black shadows gathering in the town’s square.


Eiko had been right. They had completely swarmed her, and she was trapped under a writhing mass of Heartless. They would consume her heart if they didn’t act quickly.

“HYYYAH!!!” Zidane leapt from his perch on the rooftops, straight into the pile. His dagger worked quickly, cutting through mass after mass of Heartless. He soon cleared the pile efficiently, and Akari lay motionless on the stone, face down. The Heartless continued to swarm up, creating a huge ring of malicious intent around the girl and her two defenders.

“We’ve got no other choice, do we?” Zidane asked. His back was pressed again Jin’s, and together they formed a wide range of vision to make sure the Heartless didn’t try to attack the girl again.

“No. We don’t. I’m going to draw them out, and I want you to watch her back. Make sure nothing slips past you.” Jin murmured softly, and Zidane nodded.




“Here we go.” The cold guard narrowed his eyes.



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The winter bit into her skin the closer he was to her physically. She wondered if his insides were cryogenically frozen, which would explain why he gave off so much cold energy. He leaned against the wall in the same manner she did, and feeling slightly invaded upon, she shifted several inches away from him, determined to avoid eye contact.

He stood like a statue, the only thing moving were his lips.


“I’ve heard that you’ve never seen the sky before…”


He seemed curious, as if doubting that such a person could really exist. She wanted to roll her eyes and tell him that not everyone came from the same planet that he did, but those words would have made her sad. Instead, she snorted indifferently, making sure her face was passive.


He seemed to feel the need to explain his attitude toward her, and vice versa.



“I won’t bite, you know. Unless you make me angry.” His smug, expectant face was simply begging to be punched.


He thought she was afraid.


She hated it when people assumed things about her.


“I don’t give a sh*it if you get angry or not. You really think I care?” Akari spat back, angrily.

“Of course you care. You’re just another girl. They always care.” He sighed back, as if he’d said this same line a thousand other times.


Just another girl….

Yeah, that was exactly what she was, but she was just another girl who had lost her home, her whole life, and slowly, even her sense of self. Her sanity.

She broke her reins and said the one thing she knew that his type of people hated the most.


“Know what? I think you’re wrong. Ever since I met you, I’ve a feeling that you’ll always just be the douche I’ll never give a damn about. You think you’re so high and mighty, don’t you? I hope you don’t think I owe you something for finding me, ‘cause there’s nothing in my power I’d be willing to owe you. Except maybe some extra vomit in my gut that I may just happen to puke up on your shoes.”

She heard Zidane snort in the background, and she grinned. Jin’s face was dumbstruck, as if he had been physically abused across his face.

She was filled with some kind of demented confidence. She would have cowered, yes, if the words had not come to aid in time.

She decided to take it one step further and assert herself to the moronic Guard.


“I’m sorry I’m being rude. I really am just paralleling the hospitality I’ve been shown at your hands! My world may have been dark, ugly, and insignificant, but at least we don’t threaten to throw our guests over walls. Did I mention that everyone there is relatively ugly? That’s a good thing, because otherwise we’d have people like you, Jin, who’d strut around and act like they own the ground they walk on. And then, we’d all be a society of pretentious a*sses! We’d all be snotty kings! And bit*chy queens! OH, HOW I BOW AT YOUR FEET, YOUR MAJESTY!!!!”


Her sarcasm dripped. She bowed toward his feet, coming back up with a smug face.

She turned and left.




“Later, Your Pathetic Highness.”


She felt a giant smirk crawl on her lips as she caught a glimpse of the cold guard’s face as she turned and walked down the stairs.

Suddenly, she had developed a bounce in her step from her first triumph in her new home. The cobblestone stretched before her, seeming suddenly so cheerful and excited about life.

It was short lived as she was surrounded in the blink of an eye.

Her attackers wore all black, and were installed with bulbous black eyes. She couldn’t run, two black creatures had grabbed her legs, and dragged her down, where the rest of the Heartless joined in to swarm on her slowly fading conscious.

She heard a yell, and saw a dot of purple sparks cut through the dark solid.

“Get……Help….” She muttered, not entirely expecting a spark to be of any help. When the purple glow disappeared, she felt the weakness consume her again, and the darkness pressed in for seemed an eternity.


Her heart was fading, she could feel it. She began to lose feeling in her legs, then her abdomen. She felt light-headed and began to forget who she was, the blackness before her was now the only thing that mattered.


As long as the black stayed….



Suddenly, a bright pinpoint of light seared her retinas as the numbness crawled up to her neck. The light washed away all darkness, and stunned nerves and weakness.



Now, all that was left was light.







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Akari felt the weight lift. The Heartless had retreated, and as she opened her eyes, she saw they were gathered around her now in a massive ring. She saw a tail out of the corner of her blurry vision, and knew Zidane was behind her, dagger drawn.

She looked up and her eyes widened.

Jin stood before her, his right hand held out, parallel to the ground. His palm was glowing brightly, and the glowing light elongated into a large object that Jin lightly and expertly held as a weapon.


The shape was so familiar. A sword formed from a giant key….


The dark-haired boy pointed his silver-bladed, white-handled Keyblade at the shadows before him, fingers gripping the pale handgrip as if he had held the blade a thousand times before.

As if he had fought a thousand times before.


His voice was just as dangerous as it was cold, but this time, Akari felt no chill. All she felt was relief and gratitude toward the ice guard in front of her, and the thief guard in back who had pulled her from the black abyss….





Jin snarled.






“You may die now, darkness.”​













Finite



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lisalover

I'm a KA water bunny
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

:)First postie!:)

Go me. In yer face granny persons. Yeah so what if I'm gloating, you wanna fight about it, no. Then your just being a p***y.

Ok, enough gloating.

Neway. Yes I was right, this is another Saber classic. Chapter three is the best.

And OMG, Zidane and Eiko, my other favorite characters. I think I'm in love. All you need now is Freya and I'll pay you to write this.(Not really, guy's gotta eat)

The plot seems to be good. I'd like to see where this is going and OMG#2, Jin's a keyblade weilder. Get out of here and go to Mexico(Great Tacos ^^)

Good work and keep them gooda** chapters comming.
 

Sike Saner

Peace to the Mountain
I really enjoyed reading about Eiko. She made me think of a spazzy little sister, and she had some hilarious lines. XD

And Jin is still hot. o.o But it sure was satisfying to see Akari tear into him like that. Very satisfying. XD

Favorite moments:

Everything was ruined, the buildings were in flames, the shadows and the light were everywhere, attacking everything.

Silver eyes found her face. Heartless silver eyes.

Both of the above are phrased in a very lovely manner and make me envision cool things. ^^

Akari stood up abruptly, sheet falling off her body, hands clenched in anger.

“TO HELL WITH YOUR WORLD!”

I love the sheer power of her response there. ^^

She sighed and her mind wandered. Then she recalled Irvine’s words that Jin had carried her from the Northern Wall all the way to the hut, and she flushed darkly, thinking about his large, spidery fingers wrapped around her body.

Large…spidery…fingers…*Homer-style drooling noise as Rionette-thoughts occur* *______*

…Er, yeah. Yeah, I liked that part. XD

Zidane snorted so loudly it sounded as if he had inhaled a large, flapping insect.

That line made me smile, especially the “flapping insect” part.


And now…
 

Mimori Kiryu

Well-Known Member
:eek:

Jin's a keyblade wielder?? W.T.F. That makes him even COOLER than before! XD And he's still hot. xD

Enko seems cute...in an annoying kind of way. And I just love Zidane already. <333 Lovable fox tail. XD

And for some reasons unknown, I see Zidane and Jin kind of like Leon and Cloud from KHII. XD Don't ask me why because Idk. XD
 

xXSaberXx

xxxXsightless
Lisalover: LOLOL. Thanks so much! xD

Sike Saner: WTF OCCT. Yeah, Eiko's that lil' tot from FF9. A summoner. O: BUT IN THIS, SHE'S LULU's ASSISSTANT/JIN'S MAIN SOURCE OF ANNOYANCE. x33 <3333 spidery fingers.

Mimori: ROFL. LEONxCLOUD. No but...I guess you could say that! It makes the most sense, anyway. xD Eiko is annoying. O: that's okies though.

THANKS AGAIN.


KAY. NEW CHAP!! For the school though, I really did model after a japanese school, what with Yankees and uniforms and all. O: I added a lil' more creative thinking in there, too, just to make Akari's world seem un-creative.

AWRIGHT. <33


HERE's AN UPDATED LIST OF THE FF CHARACTERS SHOWN IN THE PAST CHAPTERS AND THIS ONE FOR REFERENCE. O: (cause I know I get lost.)


Zidane Tribaal-FF9
Eiko-FF9
Irvine-FF8
Rinona-FF8
Lulu-FF10



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Chaptaire: o.o4-Meeting System

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The blade flew like a white bird through dark skies. I’d never seen something so fast, so concise. There was no waste in the way he battled. Shadow after shadow disappeared, felled by snow-colored steel. The voracious Heartless seemed intent on attacking only one person now, ignoring both Zidane and I. They had one mind for Jin, one target, one goal.

Destroy the one with the Keyblade.

There was only white. White and darkness. Jin flipped the Keyblade from one hand to the other as the Heartless swarmed in on his opposite side. His hair was dark, his skin appeared snowy pale under the glow of hundreds of bulbous eyes. There was no color about the sky or even in the air around them. The world was reduced to ivory chrome and a nightless canopy, soft and dark and moving with fluid grace. The blade cut through Heartless and shed a light between the slash wounds that bled into the abyss.

Blood flew, of the dark kind. Stains that would never wash from the streets, or the walls on which they splattered. When a single Heartless fell, three more would burst upwards and attack. Despite Jin’s slaying strikes, the numbers kept multiplying, and even when Zidane joined in, the Heartless didn’t recede.

Akari struggled to stand to her feet and help somehow, when Jin froze upon seeing her rise. There was a break in his strikes just then, and he pointed his Keyblade threateningly at her and roared, his silver eyes blazing.

“NO! STAY DOWN!!!”

Akari dropped to the ground immediately, and watched as the Keyblade wielder struggled to throw several Heartless that had attached themselves to his back when he had stopped to yell.

The three shadows were blown apart suddenly, and a string of gunshots drew the attention to a certain auburn haired man standing outside the circle, smirking.

“Hey now, save some for me!”

“Irvine!!!” Zidane yelled ecstatically.

Zidane’s jubilee was short lived as several Heartless roped their hands around his legs and began to drag him down to meet the ground. Their hands were suddenly set aflame, and the fire spread to their bodies and they imploded as the flames reached their heads. Many of the Heartless seemed to become immolated quite suddenly, and from the new opening in the circle of darkness stepped Fort Paradox’s number one Black Mage.


“Lu!” Zidane called again, and the witch tossed her hand casually behind her head, dropping a bolt of lightning onto several of her attackers.

“I came running when I heard there was going to be blood.” She smiled evilly with purple lips.

Irvine chuckled heartily, and the four fighters surrounded the girl splayed on the ground.

“Don’t worry! Eiko’s here to make the wounds all better!!” The lavender spark Akari had seen earlier reappeared in front of her eyes, transforming into a small girl with a horn on her head and wings on her back. The fairy began to flit around her body, tapping various skin patches with her tiny finger. Wherever she touched instantly felt better, and soon the grogginess in Akari’s vision sharpened to reveal the frightening truth before her.

There was well over several hundred Heartless now, all bloodthirsty and surrounding them in a huge circle. The inner ring was comprised of human fighters, her saviors, her new acquaintances. At the very center, she sat bewildered and shocked at the outpour of support and the elegance with which they all fought. Eiko hovered by her side, touching her wounds lightly and squealing out support for Lulu and Irvine and Zidane.


“Awright! Lu gets better everyday! Irvine, TO YOUR LEFT! Zidane, this isn’t the circus! Less flipping! More attacking! JIN! WHERE DID YOU LEARN TO FIGHT, SUNDAY SCHOOL?!”


Jin snarled something back that Eiko thankfully couldn’t hear. Akari couldn’t help but to laugh under her breath at Eiko’s comments. She certainly lightened up the mood, even though most of her comments were based on obvious personal preference rather than battling ability. She obviously didn’t like Zidane, and she had an even greater distaste for the Keyblade wielder. But from what Akari could see, both boys were much more gifted at fighting than any Battle competitor she had seen on T.V. They fought to live, so naturally, they were better at it than those who were paid professionally, in her world.


“Hey Lulu, those big bazoongas of yours getting in the way of your spell-casting?” Irvine called as he squinted over the barrel of his gun, and squeezed the trigger to release a burst of rapid shots.

Lulu rolled her eyes and brought a wall of icy fury forward, encasing a row of Heartless in pure ice.

“Irvine, save the jokes for the shop.”


Zidane laughed loudly and hung from a nearby lamppost using his long monkey tail. The Heartless that headed toward Jin ran right under him, and he dropped to the ground and slashed repeatedly in a sort-of sneak attack.

“Careful, gun man. She doesn’t need her eyes to aim her spells.” The thief called, and Irvine shouted something loudly that sounded suspiciously like ‘WOE IS ME.’

The casual demeanor and battle repertoire between them seemed like a normal task. It was the way she wanted to speak, cool and collected and together and always able to say the right thing at the right time. The glory of the fight, the training that went into it…

All of it…

She wanted to be a part of it.

Jin worked silently, having the largest load out of all the battlers. The Heartless attacked him mercilessly, leaping across great distances with their claws out, chirping softly, and clinging to the ground and places that were hard to reach. He would occasionally send out a frigid ice attack of some sort that exploded upon bodily impact, and Akari felt the cold wind procured from the bomb brush across her face every so often.

“Hey Jinny! Watch the hands! Heartless like to eat that part the best!” Eiko taunted loudly.

Akari puffed her cheeks and decided to try and cheer Jin on as well.

“Yeah! Um….Watch the hands! ‘Cause….um….you might get frostbite if you’re not careful with those spells!!”

Eiko raised an eyebrow and looked at the girl strangely. Akari’s sudden encouragement made Jin drop his battle stance and turn his head to stare at her as if she were insanely stupid. She returned his stare with a kind of embarrassed look.

“Look, if I need a singer’s advice, I’ll ask you for it. But until then, keep quiet!!!” He yelled.

Akari cringed, having been trying to fit into the niche of battle had backfired. She opted to close her mouth and watch silently at the powerful fighters, content to just sit back and wish she was one of them.


“Lulu! This is going nowhere!” After several more minutes of fighting, Irvine shouted across the circle at the Black Mage. “We need a mass wipe attack to get rid of them all at once!!”


Lulu pursed her lips, and nodded.

“Right. I know just the thing.”


The mage turned to face her comrades.

“Get everyone to high ground!!” The witch commanded, and she turned to face her enemies again, her hands placed before her as she murmured an incantation.

Zidane followed her command fluidly, and he agilely jumped to the roof of a nearby building. Irvine loaded his gun on his back and sprinted up the Wall’s stairs. Eiko flew upward, squeaking at Akari to find a safe place to stand.

Akari looked around, confused. She had no idea what was high enough ground, and she settled on the Wall. She got up on shaky legs and ran to the stairs, feeling the ground below her quake strangely as she gathered speed.

Jin appeared beside her running form, snarling.

“Too slow!”

She suddenly felt her body become lighter, the ground beneath her fell away. She had the brief feeling that Jin was holding her, and then she was thrown upward, toward a building’s roof. Zidane popped his head over the side and caught her by the hand, letting her dangle as the ground below her erupted, cracking itself into separate plates and elevating themselves at different intervals at breakneck speed. The resulting damage affected only the circle of Heartless and not the surrounding buildings, and the beings of darkness were slowly shaken into exploding. Their crystal hearts flew upward, and one pink organ tickled Akari’s nose as it passed through her body like a ghost and reached the sky.


Lulu stood in the middle of an empty street now, looking at her comrades perched in various places above her. The reverse rain of hearts lit the night sky up with a pallid magenta light, and the black mage smiled as Zidane, Irvine, and Eiko all whooped and yelled in triumph.

Jin was the first one to make it down to the ground again. As he walked under the building the monkey thief was perched upon, Zidane called to him, grinning madly.

“Hey Jinny! Catch!”

Zidane let go of Akari’s hand abruptly, and she fell like a stone, fifteen feet down.

The Keyblade wielder looked up, saw her falling, and stepped to the side. Just when she thought she was going to hit the ground with a sickening thud, she felt herself floating a few inches off of the cobblestones, surrounded by powerful currents of air that swirled around her body and righted her on the earth again.

The winds died, and Jin released them into the atmosphere. Irvine came to stand beside him and Lulu, hands behind his head. Zidane bounced happily around the buildings with Eiko, singing fragments of a victory ditty.

She stood alone, her face pale. Her adrenaline still surged through her veins, making her heart beat in sporadic rhythms. Her body quivered with leftover fright, her legs shook and made it hard to stand properly.

She looked at the ecstatic fighters, punching the air and scoffing and laughing and talking like a regular bunch of life-long friends.

Victory made them giddy. Even Jin smirked when Irvine cracked a joke.


what a happy family…


Her heart sank only minutely as she realized there was no place for her in that ring. She would never stand among them and be a part of their lives. She had lost her only place in the world, along with her home planet.


This was no place for a little girl, even if she was a failure Keyblade wielder. There was no place for a failure, when there was so much success and brightness already existing.


There was no place.


Her feet took her away from the bright ring, farther into the darkness of the alley itself.

Just when she was about to round the corner, a voice called to her from the circle behind her. She turned, and they were all looking at her, Lulu motioning for her to come over.


“Where do you think you’re going?” The black mage asked.

The ring had frozen, all eyes staring at her.

Akari surprised herself as a retort shot out of her mouth.


“Somewhere without perfect people.”

There was silence, and then four out of the five burst out laughing. Jin merely raised an eyebrow. Eiko was the first to get over her bought of laughter, and she straightened up and squeaked loudly.

“Aww, stop being ridiculous and let’s go get some dinner!”

The purple fairy buzzed over to her shoulder and dragged the girl by her collar toward the ring.

Irvine put his arm around Akari’s shoulder and led the way to the witch’s hut, the others walking beside them in a laughing, scowling, grinning, shouting line. Akari smiled slightly, and got the feeling that there was a long night of celebration before her.

Irvine burst out into random song as they walked along the cobblestones, shouting at the top of his warm voice.


”On ho! Ye merry men!

Go towards home, ye merry men!

And when the sun sets below the sky, ye merry men,

Let us all remember,

That merry men may die,

That merry men may die.




Fly towards home, ye merry men!

Towards familiar flowers and earthy loam!

Drink a night to drought, ye merry men!

Fight a grand ol’ fight, and live without doubts!

And when the sun rises high, ye merry men,

Let us all remember,

That time called when!



We run towards home, ye merry men!

Without strife or without sighs,

So let us remember,

That merry men may die,

That merry men may die!!”





“What’s that?” Akari pointed to the green-tinged horizon as Irvine’s song ended. A tip of a ball of white light was emerging from the head of the world, bright and meaningful.


“That’s called a sunrise.” Eiko smiled.


“It’s my first….sunrise.” Akari repeated.


The group stopped to watch the orbital star rise serenely into the pale morning sky. There was a silence as dawn became a reality, as the dawn broke the sordid affairs of the night.

As a new day dawned, Lulu looked at Akari softly, and smiled.




“Welcome to your new home.”







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The days passed by in a blur. Akari eventually became used to the concept of sunlight and daytime, though her vision took a while to adjust to the constant light. The girl was enlisted under Lulu’s care until the Presidency’s Bureau could assign her a new foster home, and she worked diligently as Lulu’s assistant. She sorted recipes in the morning and minded the shop while Lulu was in the back, concocting potions. She got to know many townspeople by working at the counter, and little by little, she learned more about her new world. On rare occasions, Lulu let Akari go into the forest to collect herbs to restock the supply. Considering the forest was dangerous, even in the daytime, Lulu pulled Jin off of wall guard duty and out of school to protect her. The Cold guard wasn’t exactly thrilled with his newfound assignment, but he grudgingly went along with it when Lulu told him of a giant Heartless in the forest that if battled, would be great training for a Keyblade wielder.

So that was where he was now, sitting under the shade of a giant pine tree with his eyes closed. He was leaning against the trunk of the great growth, resting peacefully on the edge of the meadow.

Farther off, in the middle of the vibrant clearing, Akari squatted over a patch of red leaves growing rigidly out of the ground. She picked a handful of the herbs and placed them in the basket she carried. Standing up, she moved to the next growth of herbs, and harvested those. She worked quietly, humming softly to herself and smiling brightly. The sun lit the meadow up with fresh, spring-colored light, the cool shadows of the surrounding pine trees reaching out velvet veins into the bright green sea. The sky was a bright periwinkle hue, not a cloud dancing over its faceless bowl. The sun radiated warm, easy-going light, and the winds skittered about in a blustery fashion.


Akari hummed and smiled because it was a gorgeous day, like nothing she had seen in her entire life.


Jin cracked an eye wearily to check on the girl’s progress. Her red-dyed head was easy enough to spot in the grass, and his eyes roamed to her basket. It was more than half-full. Not bad, for a thirty minute time period. Of course, she was humming and thoroughly enjoying herself as well, so she would have more done if she didn’t indulge herself.

He was about to yell over at her to stop playing around and do more work when she did something that struck him wordless.

She opened her mouth and began to sing.


It was a nameless tune, just a string of tones laced together to form a makeshift song, but it couldn’t have been any more beautiful. It floated through the meadow like pure water, so graceful and clear that even the trees seemed to enjoy it. She poured her heart into it, and the melody flew higher and sweeter with each passing second, and just when it seemed it could go no further, the song dropped, and ended with her resonating voice on a final note.


Her head drooped.



“Awww, crap.” The girl sighed and went on picking her herbs. “That wasn’t very good at all.”


Jin choked abruptly at the irony of her resigned sigh, his throat afraid to use words. After that song, any other voice would sound harsh and grating.

Akari whipped her body around at his cough, face flushing a crimson shade.

“O-Oh…I forgot you were th-there.” She stuttered, squirming mentally for her actions. She shouldn’t have sung! Jin had been sleeping, and it would have woken him up…

“S’fine.” Jin croaked warily, still slightly stunned. As he spoke, he regained more control over his tongue.


“Where’d…..you learn to do that?”

Akari looked at him quizzically. “What, sing?”

He nodded.

The girl shrugged.

“While all the other kids were taking Battle lessons, my mom enrolled me with a singing tutor. She thought it was more feminine. Usually, people in my world learned the art of Battle at a young age, but I was an exception because my mother didn’t want me to grow up to be unrefined. It’s kind of stupid….”

“So you can’t fight because you can sing?” Jin asked, and Akari nodded. Her smile seemed sad.


“Yes. But here, singing isn’t needed. I’ve always wanted to battle, and in this world I can, but I’m just not capable. A failure, both ways.”

She grinned resignedly and stood up with her now-full basket.

“Alright, we can go. I’ve got more than enough Blood Moss here.”


“Wait.”

She turned, looking surprised. His tone of voice was commanding.


“I know someone who can help you.”


Her face lit up, and Jin shook his head, eyebrows knit.

“But she hates slackers. If you don’t really want to learn how to fight, she won’t teach you.”

“I do! I want to learn! I want to be a part of you guys!” She cried out, and Jin was taken aback at her enthusiasm.

He smirked.

“Well, if you want to be one of us, may I suggest a new dye-job?” He pointed at her hair, and she fumed.

“Hunh?! Are you saying my hair-color is a problem?!” She demanded.


Jin shook his head slightly, still smirking.

“I was just kidding with you. Now let’s go back to the hut.” He turned to leave, but Akari called out.


“Wait! What about that person that can teach me?”

The cold guard shrugged.

“I’ll introduce you to her tomorrow, when you start school.”

Akari smiled broadly as her heart swelled at the good news and ran to catch up to him.

“Do I get a uniform?”

“Yes. You may not like it though.”

“Why do you say that?”

“Eh.”


“’Eh’ is not an answer.”


“Meh.”

“Neither is ‘meh’!!”



“Haha.”



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“School” was not a foreign concept to Akari. On the contrary, the two major things that took up Porta Sol adolescences time were school and Battle training/tournaments/etc. The institution itself had always been an academic breeze for Akari. The only subject that remotely bothered her was Calculations. In Fort Paradox, it was called ‘Maths’, but it still spelled the same thing for the streaked-head girl.

‘D-O-O-M.’


As she stared at the printed map in her hands, she began to worry. Was she getting lost already? On her first day? Whatever happened to good first impressions? Was she going to screw up here too?

Where was her damn Maths class?

She didn’t know.

She was lost as hell.

The wind blew definitely, flapping the collar of her uniform shirt. Her most hated part of the uniform, the appalling navy skirt, seemed to take to the wind as if it wanted to fly away, and she had to use two hands to flatten it back into place, cursing. She noticed that most girls in the school rolled the waist band of the skirt up, hiding it under their shirts. This made the skirt a good four inches shorter, and the faculty was helpless to stop the raging trend in rising hemlines.

Akari refused to take part in the fad, and contrary to most other girls in the school, pulled her skirt farther down over her legs. It was for this very reason that she wasn’t getting along with any of them, and the glares thrown her way told her that she was already unfavored. She had no idea why, however. Supposedly there was a rumor going around, but she hadn’t heard of it, mostly because those in on it disliked her immensely.

She was lost, it was fifth period, it was cold and windy, and she didn’t have a jacket to speak of. She wandered the large, white-washed halls with her map in hand, occasionally stopping to observe the posters and pictures on the walls of student work and ethics reminders. Her white breath hung in the chilly wind, she had learned that in Fort Paradox, they had four different seasons with different weather patterns. The season they were experiencing now was called ‘Autumn.’ It was a new experience, the sun shining warmly overhead in a clear, pale blue sky while the wind ravaged the earth with chilly bursts of cold. It left the skin to feel as if you had a fever and hypothermia at the same time, and Akari’s nose and cheeks always seemed to be bright red, while the rest of her was pale and shivering.

It was at that moment that she wished she was back home again. Porta Sol only had two phases of weather, Dis, the season of torrential acid rain, and Esa, the season when the air was too hot and stuffy, even to breathe. It was definitely more beautiful here, but at least back home it was familiar enough for her to remember cooler clothes or to wear her protective acid rain suit. Her homesickness hadn’t worn off completely yet, even with being a busy witch’s apprentice, she still had time to reminisce with her memories. She partly hoped that this ‘school’ business would help her keep her mind off her planet, and so far it had worked.

Up until that moment in time.

Akari tore her eyes away from the poster with a few happy children on it that read; WORK HARD, PLAY HARD; and continued walking down the carpeted hallway. She examined several door plaques on her way past, looking for her Maths building. She was obviously in the wrong place, because these labels said the rooms were in the H section of buildings, and she was looking for C.

She must have looked very desperate, because a gaggle of girls passed her then, and one of them fell back to help her. The girl was gorgeous, with tawny eyes and creamy, soft, hazelnut-colored hair that came to the small of her back in a long sheet. Her face was heart-shaped and her lips were small and plump, and she was the exact same height as Akari but considerably curvier.

This girl, like the others, wore her skirt rolled up, but her modesty seemed to keep the hem well below the considered ‘cool’ line. She approached Akari gently, and tapped her on the shoulder to get her attention.

When Akari turned, the girl smiled.

“Hi. I’ll bet money that you’re probably the newest arrival in town.”

“And you won’t lose a dime.” Akari nodded, slightly intimidated by this model-like girl. “I’m the new kid. The name’s Akari Shihoun.”

“Iris Hale. Pleased to meet you.” Iris smiled so brilliantly that Akari felt herself going blind. She seemed nice enough. Before Akari could ask the girl for directions, she was interrupted by a loud voice.

“IRIS!!!!!” From behind Akari’s new acquaintance, another girl came bounding toward her. This girl had blackish-brown hair with a single paler streak going through it on her bangs, and by the looks of her mature body, this girl was an upperclassmen.

“Rinona? What’s the matter? I told you to go on ahead!” Iris chastised, but the raven-haired girl kept coming all the same.

“I spotted Jin!” Rinona exhaled and inhaled deeply to catch her breath as she leaned on Iris’s shoulder. With a huge grin, she raised her head and looked excitedly into Iris’s eyes. “He’s heading toward Maths Two, and he says he’s looking for someone he needs to ‘talk’ to.”

Iris flushed softly and looked to Akari. “Akari, this is Rinona, Rinona, meet Akari, the new Second Year girl.”

Rinona’s dark, sparkling optics lit up when she made eye contact with Akari. She bounded over and hugged the smaller girl around the shoulders.

“Aww! I don’t ever I think I’ve seen somebody cuter than you, Akari.”

Akari was startled at the instant display of affection, but she smiled wryly nonetheless.

“Well, being called cute is a first for me. But…um….thanks. I think.”

Rinona pulled away from her embrace and grinned. “We have GOT to talk to you later, but right now, Iris needs to go somewhere. GO IRIS! GO TO YOUR LOVER!!!”

She shooed Iris away with small motions of her hands, and Iris blushed madly and looked apologetically to Akari.

“Sorry, Akari. We’ll talk later, okay?”

“’Kay.” Akari nodded and smiled.

With that, Iris was gone down the corridor, and Rinona was left to squeal excitedly.

“I’m sure you know all about Jin Viettra, Akari. The biggest rumor that’s going around now is that you live with him in the apartment above Lulu’s place!”

This was true, but Lulu also lodged there, so Akari didn’t see what the big deal was.

“Um…yeah….but-“

“Do you get to see him naked?” Rinona asked bluntly.

“WHAT?!” Akari shrieked and backed up against a nearby wall.

The upperclassmen laughed melodiously and smiled. “I was just kidding. To tell you the truth, I don’t really care much for Jin, we’ve grown up together since we landed here after our worlds were destroyed, but I DO care about Iris, she’s my best friend and a gorgeous girl, and well…”


Rinona seemed to like to talk, and she leaned in to speak softly so no one else would hear.

“….she’s been taken advantage of by too many a*sshole guys. I have brought it onto myself, as my duty, to matchmake Iris and Jin together by Winter Break!!!” The girl pointed determinedly to empty air. Akari sweatdropped and waved her hand around.


“Good luck with that.”

“THANK YOU!” Rinona took the encouragement with utmost enthusiasm. “But that also means….”


The raven headed girl sauntered up to Akari and put her arm around her shoulder.

“….you’re my new best friend! MY INNER SOURCE! THE MAN IN THE MIDDLE! I MEAN, WOMAN!”

“Girl.” Akari corrected, pointing at her non-existent chest.

“YES, THAT!” Rinona burst out laughing as she eyed Akari’s bust more closely. She moved on to pick at her shoulder, legs, and poked Akari’s stomach several times. Finally, the upperclassmen straightened up with a serious look on her face.


“Jeez! You’re so skinny! You must diet a lot. I wish I was like you!”

“Um….I don’t diet.”

“WHAT?!”

“And…you probably don’t wish you were me, because being called a ‘sack o’ bones’ by every passing guy is no way to live your social and romantic life.”

She said this with a little more bitterness in her voice than she had intended, and Rinona seemed to sober up when she heard Akari’s tone.

“Well, I’m sure you’ll grow! Soon, too!”

“You’re hilarious.” Akari said sarcastically.

Rinona laughed, and looked at her curiously. “So….what were you doing before this? What class do you have now?”

“Um…I was lost, and on my wandering way to Maths IV…”

“Hey! That’s my class! But…you’re a Second Year! You’re taking a Fourth Year class?”

Akari nodded. “In my world, school was kind of a serious matter.”

Rinona stared at her. “It’s serious here, too.”

“Oh! I know that, but, we were forced to study a lot, stuff like calculations and science formulas. They didn’t teach us much creative thinking….I just take advanced Maths and Science. Nothing special.”

“Ah! I see.” The upperclassmen grinned. “In that case, let’s go together!”

She laced her arm around Akari’s elbow, and the streaked-haired girl was whisked away in a whirlwind of talk and easy laughter.







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The Class bell rang, but Iris hadn’t been paying attention to the bell. She had been paying attention to the back of Jin Viettra’s head, or rather, daydreaming about certain things WHILE staring at the back of his head.

The shrill shriek of the metal bird ceased, and the teacher excused the students for the day. Iris stayed in her seat, lost in thought. Her eyes shifted to follow Jin as he got up and spoke to the teacher, a balding man with spectacles. The man ‘ho’d’ and ‘hmm’d’ for a few moments after Jin asked some sort of question, then shook his head and gave a short explanation. Jin nodded and returned back to his desk to gather his things.

Iris gathered up some courage and spoke.

“H-Hey Jin, who was it you were looking for before?”

“Hm?” He turned to face her, gray eyes wide. “Oh. The new girl.”

Iris’s heart sank. “Oh. Why, was it something very important?”

Jin froze, his fingers hovering over the top of his maths book.

“You…..are really weird, you know that?” He looked at her and grinned slightly.

“Ehh?” She flushed a bright red. “W-Why do you say that?”

“You remind me of someone. She asks too many questions, too.” He chuckled under his breath and tucked his books under his arm. “Well, see you tomorrow.”

“Y-Yeah….tomorrow….” Iris nodded vaguely as he left.


That day, Iris Hale did not WALK home. She FLOATED home. He had smiled! She had made him laugh! The sun suddenly looked so much brighter!!!

Her ecstatic jubilee was cut short when she heard someone shout loudly, enraged. Her head whipped around, and she spotted a small gang of girls clustered around the back of the Music building. Iris recognized them when she saw the leader, an abnormally tall girl with short, curly hair and a muscular build.

They were the local Yankees, the girls that everyone in the school steered away from pissing off. They were mean, spit on the ground, and took offense to every word another girl muttered near them. They weren’t afraid to slam people into lockers if they ****** them off, and the only people that were impervious to their violent affections were obscenely popular people, and pretty, obscenely smart people, like Jin.

There were about five of them, al in ranging heights and muscle builds. Their leader, Tris, was a tough crack, and even better in a fight. They were apparently ganging up on someone, as their jeers and yells were happy, and the only time the Yankees were happy was when someone was getting pulverized.

Iris was torn. She was only one girl, and if she yelled for help, she was dead meat. She wanted to help, but she would probably get beat up as well.

She thought for a few seconds. What would Jin do? She knew exactly what he would do. He would go in there and break it up, peaceably. She inhaled hugely and marched forward, suddenly renewed with courage and vigor.

The Yankees parted slightly as she elbowed her way in. Iris saw the victim on the ground and gasped.


It was the streaked-haired girl, the one she had met earlier that day. The new girl.


Akari. She was bruised and there were numerous cuts on her face, her uniform was torn beyond recognition.

Iris turned, enraged.

“How could you do this to her?! YOU MONSTERS!!!” She screamed, and Tris flinched back for a second, surprised someone had dared to yell at her. The rest of the Yankees fell quiet immediately. Tris regained herself and grinned a yellow smoker’s grin. Her enormous hand grabbed the front of Iris’s shirt and dragged her forward until they were face to face.


“You got guts, pu*ssy. And now, those guts are going to get really bruised. Maybe bleeding, if you’re lucky.” Tris smirked, and the Yankees howled with laughter.


Iris closed her eyes and waited for impact. She heard a small voice suddenly pipe up, ragged and hoarse.


It came from Akari.


“D-Don’t….hurt her….”


Tris snarled. “You’re in no position to ask for FAVORS, FRESH MEAT, SO SHUT THE FU*CK UP AND BE GLAD IT ISN’T YOU WE’RE BEATING ON NOW!!!”


Tris turned away, out of the circle, and dropped Iris to drag her by her hair. The Yankees howled as they circled Iris.

“Get ‘er, Tris.”

“FU*CK HER UP!!!”

“Dumb b*itch, thinking of talking back to us….”

“She won’t be pretty for much longer!!!”

They were so busy jeering, none of them noticed that Akari had forced herself to get up, standing on shaky legs and bracing herself on the brick wall behind her. Her voice rang out, calm and collected so that it carried past the jeers and made everyone fall silent.

“I said don’t touch her.”


“And I said no favors, fresh meat fu*cker!!” Tris yelled back, enraged.



“That isn’t a favor.” Akari took a step toward the ring of girls.




”That was an order.”



The Yankees yowled with crazed rage and advanced on Akari again, even Tris let Iris go to charge at the streaked-haired girl.

Things moved slowly, as if through very thick water. Iris couldn’t believe how Akari was so brave, so stalwart in her death-wish decision.

It was then that Iris realized she had no death wish, because from Akari’s hand sprung a black light, dancing like a shadow on her palm.



The darkness hardened into a tangible form.


A sinister blade, shining black with the purest gold handle, shaped entirely like an oversized key.


The moment the key appeared, darkness exploded from Akari’s body in waves, shining and bright. The Yankees were much too far into their charge to stop, and they ran head long into the battle, fully unaware of what they were really facing.


There was a sound like the scream of a dying man that emanated from Akari’s weapon. It sent shivers down Iris’s spine, and the world shuddered collectively with her.






And then the true war began.














Finite


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Peace to the Mountain
Looks like Akari’s gonna make some Yankee stew. =O

The battle early in the chapter was effing cool, and I also really liked the scenes at the school—particularly due to the characters introduced through it, namely Iris and Rinona (my hands try to type Rionette every time I have to type that name XD). The former’s infatuation for Jin made for some amusement, especially when she headed for home all giddy after talking to him. (Though I can’t blame her where that’s concerned—it is Jin, after all. X3) And Rinona…omg. XDDDD I just about died reading the scene where she was talking to Akari. She’s just effing entertaining as hell, seriously. XD

Highlights and et cetera:

The blade flew like a white bird through dark skies.

One of those good ol’ lovely sentences.

“I came running when I heard there was going to be blood.” She smiled evilly with purple lips.

Awesome. XPPPP

“Awright! Lu gets better everyday! Irvine, TO YOUR LEFT! Zidane, this isn’t the circus! Less flipping! More attacking! JIN! WHERE DID YOU LEARN TO FIGHT, SUNDAY SCHOOL?!”

Nice coaching, Eiko. XDD And that last line is just godly. XDDDD

The reverse rain of hearts lit the night sky up with a pallid magenta light

Cool image. =)

The sun lit the meadow up with fresh, spring-colored light, the cool shadows of the surrounding pine trees reaching out velvet veins into the bright green sea.

And there’s another of those lovely sentences. Very nice.

“Why do you say that?”

“Eh.”


“’Eh’ is not an answer.”


“Meh.”

“Neither is ‘meh’!!”

XDDDD

“Do you get to see him naked?” Rinona asked bluntly.

“WHAT?!” Akari shrieked and backed up against a nearby wall.

If I’d been drinking milk, I would have nosed it right there. XPPPP

“THANK YOU!” Rinona took the encouragement with utmost enthusiasm. “But that also means….”


The raven headed girl sauntered up to Akari and put her arm around her shoulder.

“….you’re my new best friend! MY INNER SOURCE! THE MAN IN THE MIDDLE! I MEAN, WOMAN!”

“Girl.” Akari corrected, pointing at her non-existent chest.

“YES, THAT!” Rinona burst out laughing as she eyed Akari’s bust more closely.

LMAO! See, that right there is why Rinona pwns.

That day, Iris Hale did not WALK home. She FLOATED home. He had smiled! She had made him laugh! The sun suddenly looked so much brighter!!!

Ah, ye olde human comedy of infatuation. XDD

There was a sound like the scream of a dying man that emanated from Akari’s weapon. It sent shivers down Iris’s spine, and the world shuddered collectively with her.

Cooooool... o.o


I now leave you with this:
 
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