Marky Vigoroth
Beginning Trainer
This story is something that I kind of made up. It's, like Team Ashley, a bit piontless, but I tried all of the things to make it a bit interesting (active verbs, lively verbs, sensory details, etc.)
Oh, and anything tragic, touchy, or otherwise the sad stuff like in Final Fantasy will be avoided/interviened here, so if you like this kind of stuff, I'm afraid that you have the wrong story entierly. (I got that from the DVD cover of "A Series of Unfortunate Events" that I read at Sam's Club. I like reading, and I didn't buy it. I just left it there.)
It was a typical day at Princess Peach’s castle. But it could be typical as in something bad can happen.
“Ah, what a beautiful, sunny day!” said Peach, walking at the castle’s garden. She knelt to pick up a few roses, and then walked on.
Suddenly, a big purple blur flashed in front of Peach! She looked around curiously, but warily.
“Now what could that be?” said Peach.
Before she could figure out what the blur was, it grabbed Peach! “HELP!” she screamed. Luckily, a Toad was just happening to see the whole scene. I better tell Mario, thought the Toad. He scurried off.
A bit higher from the sky, Kammy Koopa watched everything too. Bowser must hear about this, she thought. Off Kammy went to Bowser’s castle.
Kammy flew through the highest window of the castle, straight to Bowser’s throne room.
“Your Highness! I just received news of Princess Peach!” said Kammy frantically.
“What?” Bowser replied, eager about her.
“She’s been kidnapped!” Kammy replied.
“WHAT?!” Bowser screamed.
“She was at the garden, and then a big purple blur got her! That’s it!” Kammy responded.
“Yargh! If I said this once, I’ll say it again! Under NO circumstances is someone allowed to kidnap her without MY say-so!” he screamed angrily.
“Even worse, I think Mario is going along to save her!” she said.
“Hurmph. Mario” he grunted. Every time Bowser carries out his plans, even if they’re saving-Princess-Peach plans, Mario always stops him (except for 2 occasions, but the first one was originally Mario’s, and the second one was carried out almost all by Mario and Luigi).
“Hurry, your Grumpiness! I know where she could have headed off!” she said.
Without responding or delaying, he went somewhere a bit outside the castle, and then he was outside of the window of the throne room, with the Koopa Clown Car, of course.
“Come on!” said Bowser! “I better save her so that I could kidnap her!”
“Yes, your Gnarliness!” she responded.
They both zoomed off, hoping to find the princess.
Meanwhile, just entering the Mushroom Kingdom, a certain kind of Vigoroth was cycling his way there. He had a blue painter’s hat, a white tunic–yet he could ride the bicycle without the tunic getting into his way–, and blue flip-flops. He also had a blue backpack with probably enough pockets to supply a 3-day 3-aprox.300-metre-mountain hike.
“I better go to Bowser’s castle,” said to himself the oddly dressed Vigoroth. “Mario is okay, and Peach is pretty, but my favorite Mario character–not to mention my favorite male villain–is Bowser, and I hope I get to see him as easily as possible. Hopefully I don’t have to ask Mario–Bowser will misunderstand and be mad at me.”
Suddenly, the Vigoroth spotted the Koopa Clown Car! I must follow it, thought the Vigoroth. Yet while he followed it, he thought something. Why a tough-looking turtle resort–or reduce himself–to clown-related things? He’d better ask Bowser, but not now. Bowser may need his help.
Then, Bowser spotted the Vigoroth!
“Hey, what are YOU doin’ following MY Koopa Clown Car?!” Bowser screamed.
“I wanted to meet you, so here I am,” replied the Vigoroth.
“Yeah, well, youse stay outta this, will ya? I hafta rescue Princess Peach so that I can kidnap her!” responded Bowser.
The Vigoroth paused for a bit, due to the rescue-to-kidnap situation. He replied, “Well, I think you need me because look.”
Bowser stopped, then looked at what’s at front. It was a brown castle with some kind of light-aquamarine triangles seemingly protruding from it. The top seemed like the attic from a haunted mansion. And the ground around it was a light purple. And the castle and soil looked liked it was floating. In fact, even the road leading to the castle looked like it was floating. The road was purple, also.
“Yeah, it’s a weird-looking castle. So what?” said Bowser.
“So it seems…like…” The Vigoroth paused to remember. “Like Castle Oblivion.”
“CASTLE OBLIVION?” Kammy and Bowser repeated.
“Yes, only it’s supposed to be in Kingdom Hearts, not the Mushroom Kingdom,” said the Vigoroth.
“KINGDOM HEARTS?” Bowser and Kammy said, amazed about the whole thing.
“Yes, I’ll explain it later, or it will be explained while we’re inside this castle, whichever comes first, or if they get explained simultaneously,” said the Vigoroth.
“Whoa, whoa, whoa, wait a minute,” said Bowser. “Are you SURE we should go in there?”
“Yes. This castle is, or probably a copy of, Castle Oblivion. It’s from Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories, I think, and I beat that game, so I probably can help you there. And besides, don’t you want to save Princess Peach?” the Vigoroth responded.
“The Vigoroth could be right, you know,” said Kammy. “After all, the blur did go into that direction.”
Bowser thought about it. After all, how can a weird creature with just as weird clothes know about something from a video game? But if he wants Princess Peach, he has to go in there.
“Oh, all right,” said Bowser, “but if Peach is not here, I’m blaming it on YOU!”
“I would have blamed myself anyways,” said the Vigoroth. “After all, it was my idea to go there, or maybe Kammy’s. Either way, I will be held responsible.”
All three curiously entered the castle, yet they were suspicious about the whole thing. The inside of the castle was all white. There were what it seemed like statues of roses, and there’s a white door on top of a few stairs.
“Uh, I forgot to say this,” said the Vigoroth. “ I am Marky Vigoroth.”
“What a kiddy name,” said Bowser.
“Yes, but it’s fine with me,” said Marky. “And as you would have guessed, I am a Vigoroth. It’s one of the probably 391 pokémon for now.”
“391?!” screamed Bowser, for that is a rather large number.
“Yes,” responded Marky. “I’m a bit paradoxical, though, because even though I am energetic, I’m actually a sloth. Hence Vigor-oth.”
“Uh…” said Bowser, thinking about it.
“Anyways, I’d better say what are my attacks. You may think a few are unorthodox, though.”
“Uh…” said now both Kammy and Bowser.
Marky took out his backpack and took out a frying pan and a booklet of Wario Ware: Touched!. He opened the booklet to a page where it shows a microgame that apparently has to do with blowing on someone’s ear.
“Yes, my attacks are frying pan-whacking–like Princess Peach, of course– and blowing on ears, also known as ‘whispering sweet nothings.’ However, that’s only the unorthodox half,” said Marky. “Tell me, Bowser, what are your attacks?”
“I slash, bite, stamp, and–oh, this is my favorite– use my flame breath!” responded Bowser.
“Then the first and last attacks are the same as mine!” said Marky.
“Oh!” said Bowser, flattered. “You must admire me, don’t ya?”
“Not exactly admire, and the slash just came with me, you know, (while pointing to his own claws) these, (no longer pointing) and the flame breath wasn’t because of you, but you ARE my favorite Mario character and male villain.”
“Wow… he may have weird clothes and attacks and have a kiddy-kiddy name, but he sure does know which attacks suit him!” said Bowser.
“I just put on these clothes because I like them, and I learned Flamethrower due to a Technical Machine, which is, in general, a disc that can teach you new attacks!” said Marky.
Marky looked at Bowser a bit more closely. “You look better that what the video game show you!” said Marky. “You look really tough. And I think you would do well in battle with your…–I hope this is a real word–burliness.”
“Burliness?!” said Bowser amazedly.
“Yes. Either turtles are supposed to be a little chubby (I can barely see the ‘chubbiness’ at all), or you’re just plain burly,” Marky explained, now a bit more apart from Bowser.
“And I better tell you this, Kammy. You look like someone worth asking. Also, I like you like this better than the Yoshi Touch and Go version. And before you ask, I do scribble around the screen, hoping to hamper ‘your’ progress in the game. But only that. Really!” said Marky.
“Hmm…” Kammy mumbled, thinking about the whole thing.
“Once again, you look better in real life. But I better tell you this.” Said Marky. He looked back. “We will need to work together to win though this castle. After all, I work on keeping this adventure log, which is actually some papers I put together now, to help you, Bowser works best at dealing out damage, and you, Kammy, have some usefulness due to that you can stay above the ground. And THAT is something useful.”
Suddenly, out of nowhere, a bewitching voice cackles. Bowser and Marky knew who she was.
“It’s Cackletta!” said Bowser and Marky.
“You’re right!” said Cackletta”. “And yes, I do have you precious Peach, because I plan to overthrow the throne and make it MINE!”
Immediately, Marky interfered. “Bowser-abuser! He already get his punishment from Mario, and you added more unnecessarily!” He looked at Bowser and Kammy. “If you want to know something, I think Peach is pretty–who doesn’t–but Mario’s…a bit okay with me. He’s just isn’t…that someone who really captures my interest.”
“And that someone is me, right?” asked Bowser.
“Yes,” affirmed Marky. Marky went back to Cackletta. “We can beat you, just like how Sora, Goofy, and Donald beat Marluxia!”
“Huh? What are you talking about?” asked Bowser.
“Sora, a kid–needlessly and weird from me, a human–, Goofy, a dog, and Donald, a duck-goose–but keep the goose-half part from Donald, for I will tell him– are the heroes of the Kingdom Hearts games. Marluxia is the final boss in the 1st story of the Chain of Memories game. He’s also a human, but he’s an adult. Oh, and a duck-goose doesn’t look weird at all, if you ask me.”
“Quiet!” hissed Cackletta. “If you want to see Peach again, you’d better use this! EeYAHhyahyahyahyah!”
A flash appeared and then a card just fell down on the floor.
“Hmm…” Marky wondered. “This card is just like in the game. Cackletta was pretty cruel; she didn’t explain how to use this. However, it’s a good thing you have me, for I know!”
“How?” wondered Bowser and Kammy.
“You just hold up the card like this near the door… Oh!” Marky said suddenly. He closed the door behind them.
“What was THAT for?” Bowser asked?
“It will keep the intruders out, especially Mario, if I am in your perspective.”
“Mario. Ugh. Well, it’s a good thing he won’t be raining on my parade,” said Bowser.
“Or at least delay his entry. By the time he’s here, we probably are halfway through this castle,” explained Marky.
“Pretty smart,” said Bowser.
“But how are you sure you Mario won’t be here?” asked Kammy.
“He will be here, I think, but he has to look around for this place, starting at (points to Bowser) your castle! (no longer pointing)” explained Marky.
“Ha! And by the time he even gets close to here, I will already have Princess Peach! Bwahahahaha!” Bowser laughed.
Marky stood still due to the evil laugh, and the continued to the door. He holds up the card, and the door opened. The card was in front of the door, and it shows the island of Puerto Rico, along with the words “Puerto Rico” on top of it. Marky chose that card, and there was a flash. Bowser, Kammy, and Marky disappeared in the flash.
To be continued...
So, any improvements/insults/compliments/questions answers?
Oh, and anything tragic, touchy, or otherwise the sad stuff like in Final Fantasy will be avoided/interviened here, so if you like this kind of stuff, I'm afraid that you have the wrong story entierly. (I got that from the DVD cover of "A Series of Unfortunate Events" that I read at Sam's Club. I like reading, and I didn't buy it. I just left it there.)
It was a typical day at Princess Peach’s castle. But it could be typical as in something bad can happen.
“Ah, what a beautiful, sunny day!” said Peach, walking at the castle’s garden. She knelt to pick up a few roses, and then walked on.
Suddenly, a big purple blur flashed in front of Peach! She looked around curiously, but warily.
“Now what could that be?” said Peach.
Before she could figure out what the blur was, it grabbed Peach! “HELP!” she screamed. Luckily, a Toad was just happening to see the whole scene. I better tell Mario, thought the Toad. He scurried off.
A bit higher from the sky, Kammy Koopa watched everything too. Bowser must hear about this, she thought. Off Kammy went to Bowser’s castle.
Kammy flew through the highest window of the castle, straight to Bowser’s throne room.
“Your Highness! I just received news of Princess Peach!” said Kammy frantically.
“What?” Bowser replied, eager about her.
“She’s been kidnapped!” Kammy replied.
“WHAT?!” Bowser screamed.
“She was at the garden, and then a big purple blur got her! That’s it!” Kammy responded.
“Yargh! If I said this once, I’ll say it again! Under NO circumstances is someone allowed to kidnap her without MY say-so!” he screamed angrily.
“Even worse, I think Mario is going along to save her!” she said.
“Hurmph. Mario” he grunted. Every time Bowser carries out his plans, even if they’re saving-Princess-Peach plans, Mario always stops him (except for 2 occasions, but the first one was originally Mario’s, and the second one was carried out almost all by Mario and Luigi).
“Hurry, your Grumpiness! I know where she could have headed off!” she said.
Without responding or delaying, he went somewhere a bit outside the castle, and then he was outside of the window of the throne room, with the Koopa Clown Car, of course.
“Come on!” said Bowser! “I better save her so that I could kidnap her!”
“Yes, your Gnarliness!” she responded.
They both zoomed off, hoping to find the princess.
Meanwhile, just entering the Mushroom Kingdom, a certain kind of Vigoroth was cycling his way there. He had a blue painter’s hat, a white tunic–yet he could ride the bicycle without the tunic getting into his way–, and blue flip-flops. He also had a blue backpack with probably enough pockets to supply a 3-day 3-aprox.300-metre-mountain hike.
“I better go to Bowser’s castle,” said to himself the oddly dressed Vigoroth. “Mario is okay, and Peach is pretty, but my favorite Mario character–not to mention my favorite male villain–is Bowser, and I hope I get to see him as easily as possible. Hopefully I don’t have to ask Mario–Bowser will misunderstand and be mad at me.”
Suddenly, the Vigoroth spotted the Koopa Clown Car! I must follow it, thought the Vigoroth. Yet while he followed it, he thought something. Why a tough-looking turtle resort–or reduce himself–to clown-related things? He’d better ask Bowser, but not now. Bowser may need his help.
Then, Bowser spotted the Vigoroth!
“Hey, what are YOU doin’ following MY Koopa Clown Car?!” Bowser screamed.
“I wanted to meet you, so here I am,” replied the Vigoroth.
“Yeah, well, youse stay outta this, will ya? I hafta rescue Princess Peach so that I can kidnap her!” responded Bowser.
The Vigoroth paused for a bit, due to the rescue-to-kidnap situation. He replied, “Well, I think you need me because look.”
Bowser stopped, then looked at what’s at front. It was a brown castle with some kind of light-aquamarine triangles seemingly protruding from it. The top seemed like the attic from a haunted mansion. And the ground around it was a light purple. And the castle and soil looked liked it was floating. In fact, even the road leading to the castle looked like it was floating. The road was purple, also.
“Yeah, it’s a weird-looking castle. So what?” said Bowser.
“So it seems…like…” The Vigoroth paused to remember. “Like Castle Oblivion.”
“CASTLE OBLIVION?” Kammy and Bowser repeated.
“Yes, only it’s supposed to be in Kingdom Hearts, not the Mushroom Kingdom,” said the Vigoroth.
“KINGDOM HEARTS?” Bowser and Kammy said, amazed about the whole thing.
“Yes, I’ll explain it later, or it will be explained while we’re inside this castle, whichever comes first, or if they get explained simultaneously,” said the Vigoroth.
“Whoa, whoa, whoa, wait a minute,” said Bowser. “Are you SURE we should go in there?”
“Yes. This castle is, or probably a copy of, Castle Oblivion. It’s from Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories, I think, and I beat that game, so I probably can help you there. And besides, don’t you want to save Princess Peach?” the Vigoroth responded.
“The Vigoroth could be right, you know,” said Kammy. “After all, the blur did go into that direction.”
Bowser thought about it. After all, how can a weird creature with just as weird clothes know about something from a video game? But if he wants Princess Peach, he has to go in there.
“Oh, all right,” said Bowser, “but if Peach is not here, I’m blaming it on YOU!”
“I would have blamed myself anyways,” said the Vigoroth. “After all, it was my idea to go there, or maybe Kammy’s. Either way, I will be held responsible.”
All three curiously entered the castle, yet they were suspicious about the whole thing. The inside of the castle was all white. There were what it seemed like statues of roses, and there’s a white door on top of a few stairs.
“Uh, I forgot to say this,” said the Vigoroth. “ I am Marky Vigoroth.”
“What a kiddy name,” said Bowser.
“Yes, but it’s fine with me,” said Marky. “And as you would have guessed, I am a Vigoroth. It’s one of the probably 391 pokémon for now.”
“391?!” screamed Bowser, for that is a rather large number.
“Yes,” responded Marky. “I’m a bit paradoxical, though, because even though I am energetic, I’m actually a sloth. Hence Vigor-oth.”
“Uh…” said Bowser, thinking about it.
“Anyways, I’d better say what are my attacks. You may think a few are unorthodox, though.”
“Uh…” said now both Kammy and Bowser.
Marky took out his backpack and took out a frying pan and a booklet of Wario Ware: Touched!. He opened the booklet to a page where it shows a microgame that apparently has to do with blowing on someone’s ear.
“Yes, my attacks are frying pan-whacking–like Princess Peach, of course– and blowing on ears, also known as ‘whispering sweet nothings.’ However, that’s only the unorthodox half,” said Marky. “Tell me, Bowser, what are your attacks?”
“I slash, bite, stamp, and–oh, this is my favorite– use my flame breath!” responded Bowser.
“Then the first and last attacks are the same as mine!” said Marky.
“Oh!” said Bowser, flattered. “You must admire me, don’t ya?”
“Not exactly admire, and the slash just came with me, you know, (while pointing to his own claws) these, (no longer pointing) and the flame breath wasn’t because of you, but you ARE my favorite Mario character and male villain.”
“Wow… he may have weird clothes and attacks and have a kiddy-kiddy name, but he sure does know which attacks suit him!” said Bowser.
“I just put on these clothes because I like them, and I learned Flamethrower due to a Technical Machine, which is, in general, a disc that can teach you new attacks!” said Marky.
Marky looked at Bowser a bit more closely. “You look better that what the video game show you!” said Marky. “You look really tough. And I think you would do well in battle with your…–I hope this is a real word–burliness.”
“Burliness?!” said Bowser amazedly.
“Yes. Either turtles are supposed to be a little chubby (I can barely see the ‘chubbiness’ at all), or you’re just plain burly,” Marky explained, now a bit more apart from Bowser.
“And I better tell you this, Kammy. You look like someone worth asking. Also, I like you like this better than the Yoshi Touch and Go version. And before you ask, I do scribble around the screen, hoping to hamper ‘your’ progress in the game. But only that. Really!” said Marky.
“Hmm…” Kammy mumbled, thinking about the whole thing.
“Once again, you look better in real life. But I better tell you this.” Said Marky. He looked back. “We will need to work together to win though this castle. After all, I work on keeping this adventure log, which is actually some papers I put together now, to help you, Bowser works best at dealing out damage, and you, Kammy, have some usefulness due to that you can stay above the ground. And THAT is something useful.”
Suddenly, out of nowhere, a bewitching voice cackles. Bowser and Marky knew who she was.
“It’s Cackletta!” said Bowser and Marky.
“You’re right!” said Cackletta”. “And yes, I do have you precious Peach, because I plan to overthrow the throne and make it MINE!”
Immediately, Marky interfered. “Bowser-abuser! He already get his punishment from Mario, and you added more unnecessarily!” He looked at Bowser and Kammy. “If you want to know something, I think Peach is pretty–who doesn’t–but Mario’s…a bit okay with me. He’s just isn’t…that someone who really captures my interest.”
“And that someone is me, right?” asked Bowser.
“Yes,” affirmed Marky. Marky went back to Cackletta. “We can beat you, just like how Sora, Goofy, and Donald beat Marluxia!”
“Huh? What are you talking about?” asked Bowser.
“Sora, a kid–needlessly and weird from me, a human–, Goofy, a dog, and Donald, a duck-goose–but keep the goose-half part from Donald, for I will tell him– are the heroes of the Kingdom Hearts games. Marluxia is the final boss in the 1st story of the Chain of Memories game. He’s also a human, but he’s an adult. Oh, and a duck-goose doesn’t look weird at all, if you ask me.”
“Quiet!” hissed Cackletta. “If you want to see Peach again, you’d better use this! EeYAHhyahyahyahyah!”
A flash appeared and then a card just fell down on the floor.
“Hmm…” Marky wondered. “This card is just like in the game. Cackletta was pretty cruel; she didn’t explain how to use this. However, it’s a good thing you have me, for I know!”
“How?” wondered Bowser and Kammy.
“You just hold up the card like this near the door… Oh!” Marky said suddenly. He closed the door behind them.
“What was THAT for?” Bowser asked?
“It will keep the intruders out, especially Mario, if I am in your perspective.”
“Mario. Ugh. Well, it’s a good thing he won’t be raining on my parade,” said Bowser.
“Or at least delay his entry. By the time he’s here, we probably are halfway through this castle,” explained Marky.
“Pretty smart,” said Bowser.
“But how are you sure you Mario won’t be here?” asked Kammy.
“He will be here, I think, but he has to look around for this place, starting at (points to Bowser) your castle! (no longer pointing)” explained Marky.
“Ha! And by the time he even gets close to here, I will already have Princess Peach! Bwahahahaha!” Bowser laughed.
Marky stood still due to the evil laugh, and the continued to the door. He holds up the card, and the door opened. The card was in front of the door, and it shows the island of Puerto Rico, along with the words “Puerto Rico” on top of it. Marky chose that card, and there was a flash. Bowser, Kammy, and Marky disappeared in the flash.
To be continued...
So, any improvements/insults/compliments/questions answers?