Kitsune's "If this dies, you're going with it" Thread

[Kitsune]

I W A N T C R I T
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That'd mean no "Good, I like them, keep it up," or "6/10," posts.​

Trainer Sprites

Revamps

Fakemon

Maps
Korin Region
A smaller version of my house
Hook Cabin
Rosedew
PokeCafe
Plinia
My School

Guides
Recolor Guide

Avatars

Miscellaneous

To-Do
Fix Corte (Witch Hat Boy)
WBG Rachel (First Girl)
Fix 8th Girl
Fix May
Make Front Overworlds for all trainer sprites

Credit
Susan_Rocket (Suicune on Suicune Girl Avatar)

-Kitsune//End​

 

[PokeJosh]

I love it! You're really good. I especially like the korin region map. Keep it up!

-PokeJosh

 

[pnoiboi]

Is that inuyasha?????your sprites are above average

 

[Elementman-Novapoke]

The person with the witches hat:
It looks like they're wearing it backwards. Either flip the person around and re-shade them or flip the hat around and re-shade it. Other than that they're fine.

Edit: On the May and Brendon pic:
It looks like May has a huge forehead - put some hair on it!

 

[Kitsune]

PokeJosh, Pnoiboi - Please tell me specifically things I can improve on. I want crit.

Elementman-Novapoke - I'm away from my normal spriting computer, but once I get back, I'll fix them up. That hat has always bugged me, but I've never really noticed May. I'll get it fixed up.

 

[Elementman-Novapoke]

Another minor thing that I noticed is in your region there are too little towns/ places.

 

[Chaotic Pink]

The maps are good, you've took more time into them than most as alot of people don't think to add pokeballs and such.

The revamps are fine, shaded well and you've recolour the outlines.

The trainers are a little weird in places, but that has already been metioned. All I can add on these is with the girl wearing purple has weird looking eyes. To me they don't seem positioned right.

I love the avatars, the Lamon tea one especially, although with some of the writing (on the "Without you... I'm incomplete only) it seems a little small.

Overall, these are excellent. I'd like to see you do scratches though!

 

[zipzap713]

the trainer sprites are just a little small. other than that, they are good.
Revamps-very good. pikachus left side seems to haqve a little 2 much black on it. everything is good. no critic

 

[Kitsune]

The maps are good, you've took more time into them than most as alot of people don't think to add pokeballs and such.

The revamps are fine, shaded well and you've recolour the outlines.

The trainers are a little weird in places, but that has already been metioned. All I can add on these is with the girl wearing purple has weird looking eyes. To me they don't seem positioned right.

I love the avatars, the Lamon tea one especially, although with some of the writing (on the "Without you... I'm incomplete only) it seems a little small.

Overall, these are excellent. I'd like to see you do scratches though!

Wow, thanks for everything! I'll try to, as I said, get my trainer sprites up tonight.

Scratches? Hehe...Well, about that... >_>

I can't scratch for my life. Tonight I'll attempt a scratch sprite, but it'll need some, like, help. =\

 

[ellie]

om,g dey rawk do mooooore!!!1111







Just kidding

Inuyasha's eyes look really weird, probably because they're too light and there isn't enough white in the eyes.

On the eighth trainer (the girl with the black and red hair), the hair seems too flat. try adding some more light to it to give it more shading.

Btw, you should use all-color outlines more often; it looks much better.

Your revamps are pretty good, but the Pikachu looks like it has like no shading. Also, its ears aren't long enough.

Your avatars look good, but you need to credit Susan_Rocket for her Suicune scratch on the last one. :S

 

[Kitsune]

Chaos Emerald - xomg, y3sh dey d/o, coshcha merald!!1!!!!one!!W!en!E!!!!
I'll fix Inuysha tonight.

I was planning on making the Pikachu darker/Redoing it, anyways.

I'll fix the Red/Black girl.

It does look better all-color, doesn't it? I'll have to try it.

Yeah, I made that avatar for someone on my website and creditted her, then I forgot to here. =P

I'll do it now.

 

[*umbreon*masta*1*1*]

wow i think these are absolutly fantastic...ive looked 32 times and i seen nothing i think you could imrove ^^;447;

 

[Kitsune]

wow i think these are absolutly fantastic...ive looked 32 times and i seen nothing i think you could imrove ^^;447;

*Twitches*

I W A N T C R I T
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That'd mean no "Good, I like them, keep it up," or "6/10," posts.

Improve on what? Every person on this forum has room for improvement, I need specifics as to why.

 

[Malachite Treecko]

Well, the sprites are great, the avatars /-/| except the last, which I love.Korin region is a bit too archipelago for me.

 

[Kitsune]

OK, Right now I am...

Fixing Corte (Witch Hat Boy)
WBGing Rachel (First Girl)
About to Fix 8th Girl
Going to fix May.

I have looked at Inuyasha, who's eyes are supposed to be that way.

 

[spareux]

Good title.

Victreebel is missing the brown spots on it's... body-type thing.

 

[Kitsune]

Brown spot? I'll take a look into it later on, when I'm back to my computer.

 

[spareux]

Okay green whatever xd

 

[Kitsune]

OK, thanks. I'll get it fixed up soon. I think I'm gonna start spriting for a comic I might make...I know that it'll be in my school, with my teachers and such.

 

[Kitsune]

UPADATE: My School. I have made the second floor of my school, the first coming soon. I'll make an alternate version telling which room is which, and to which teacher it belongs.

OK, now I need an opinion: Should I leave on the red mats signifying a classroom entrance on the side wall or not? I don't like them, but what do you think?

And yes, although I have subtracted a few small areas, this a model of my schools. All of the rooms are accurately placed and such. Later on I will be adding a hall between those two staircases on the right wall of the upward hallway, which is our computer hallway. The hall going downwards farthest to the left is my hall, the Band Hallway.