Klonoa's Household Problems

[Metallic Mantis Reborn]

I doubt many of you out there know who Klonoa is, but hey, I may be wrong. To sum it up, he's a cat with big ears. and then there's Huepow, annoying sidekick. So here is (i think) The First Serebii.net Klonoa Comic. Hope you Enjoy.
Chapter 1:Bad Starts
Episode 1: Gardener
Episode 2: Swear

 

[Magical Trevor]

I don't mean to crit two hard but the sprites are a bit hard to see and the writing is a bit small

 

[Metallic Mantis Reborn]

Imageshack wont let me host anything bigger than that. But if you read the second comic, you'll see I reduced the total size so I could fit more detail.

 

[Blues]

I can't really judge the first one, because I can't read it at all. The sprites seem too small, but it's not the worst thing in the world. The backgrounds are fine, but what you need it TEXTBOXES.