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Koaltorb & Co.

K

kinglerking

<-OMGWTFBBQKFC?!
Okay if any of you read Odd-Dish or the Second Sppf comic contest you'd all ready know about this. For those of you that don't it's basiclly a comic about Koaltorb, a torkoal-voltorb mix, and all his friends at the totally sick, twisted f***ed up mix club on strange disturbing adventures. It's mostly randomness but there will be a plot now and then. Well enough of my yabbering, start reading!

BTW If you read, please post..... or this comic will die

Episodes
#1 Celebrate
#2 Domination
#3 Concert
#4 Time
#5 Spammer
#6 Doorbell
#7 Egg
#8 Lunch
#9 Flash
#10 Family
#11 Poor Soul
#12 Demands
#13 Blip
#14 Hatching
#15 Bubs
#16 Born
#17 WTF?
#18 JPEG
#19 Hospital

Current Episode: #19 Hospital


Koaltorb & Co. Fan-Mail:
#1 Why you love Milachi foo?
#2 Is this a Senor Cardgage attempt?

Fillers:
Winter Comic Contest Entry
Tyrougler's Movie
Tyrougler's ANIMATED Movie

Bios:
Koaltorb
Gladuck
Tyrougler
Milachi
Bouldeon
Spammy
Marrichu

Specials:
Easter 06
Earth Day
 
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Magical Trevor

Guest
this is so funny. I like te mixes and all but i dunno you might get some crit about the backrouns but for me over all 9/10
 
M

Mega

Guest
We'll only two of those episodes worked for me and those weren't so good.
 
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Bagonclaw

Guest
Episode#1: http://www.bghq.com or...
ME
To access custom paint colors, go up to the grey bar on top that says stuff like "open, edit, picture, Ect." Go to Colors and click. Select edit colors. There you go.
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Gladuck needs to be shaded more, along with his foot in panel 3. The same W/ Kolatorb's white shell ring thing. (Or whatever it is, I know little about turtles) Also, I don't think Koltorb would be smoking all the time, but if he is addicted, let the smoke move around. And last but not least, those green rings around him need shading. Now on to Tyrougler. In panel three, his eyes are very blocky. In the same panel, he needs to look like he is jumping, not standing in air. Again, in that same panel, same sprite, the left claw needs to be shaded so it does not look copied & pasted. Text boxes need to be smaller, as not to have a big empty space. Last panel was fine, text box-wise.

Episode#2: Quazatshrew is only a Sandshrew's head and arms on Rayquaza. Please put more effort into your sprites. The disturbing image of Koalorb on the... well, you know, needs to be shaded. For BGs see above.

Episode#3: Need I say anything about the backgrounds? You know the drill.
Humor: Bad.

Episode#4: Pics in different bittages don't do well in comics. Marrichu's tail can use more work. The bugged out eyes need shading too. Too random.

Episode#5: Bouldeon is only recolored! Edit it! Please! Bugged out eyes need shading.

My advice: Read the Do's & Dont's of sprite comics, and enroll in the comic maker's academy.
 
K

kinglerking

<-OMGWTFBBQKFC?!
Bagonclaw, Bouldeon is not just a recolour it's an espeon with the ears and tail of an umbreon, also I'm not the best spriter on the forums so take it easy! If you don't like this comic don't read it, jeez.

3 new episodes! Woo-hoo

#006 Celebrate again-http://img433.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ktcelebrateagain1ni.png
#007 Egg-http://img99.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ktegg4wf.png
#008 Lunch-http://img99.imageshack.us/my.php?image=ktlunch4vl.png

Mega said:
We'll only two of those episodes worked for me and those weren't so good.
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which episodes didn't work?
 
M

Magical Trevor

Guest
well EP 8 made me wonder these things; Will the egg have a brain of it's own? Will they eat the egg? is that message a real plot? I hope to find out soon
 
B

Bagonclaw

Guest
Bagonclaw, Bouldeon is not just a recolour it's an espeon with the ears and tail of an umbreon, also I'm not the best spriter on the forums so take it easy! If you don't like this comic don't read it, jeez.
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If you want to improve your spriting, go to fan sprites and post your sprites.
As for not liking it, I believe this comic ha potential. Mutten, I advise you to tell him how to improve, so he can make a higher calibur of comics. But, if he doesn't want to improve, it's not my problem anymore. I'll stop nagging you if you wish, but don't expect to get very good ratings on comics, except from your fanbase, which you will always hear the same thing from.
Later.
 
K

kinglerking

<-OMGWTFBBQKFC?!
mutten641 said:
well EP 8 made me wonder these things; Will the egg have a brain of it's own? Will they eat the egg? is that message a real plot? I hope to find out soon
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The egg doesn't have a brain
But the baby pokémon mix inside of it does.
The message is just on of those little notes that say 'please look after my baby... I can't be bothered'
Koaltorb just likes to exaturate a little
 
M

Magical Trevor

Guest
Episode 9 was funny but why ws Kingler king saying NO STOP oh and with the cancelling thing does that mean this comic is dead
 
K

kinglerking

<-OMGWTFBBQKFC?!
I was saying No stop to stop Quazashrew from eating the egg

don't worry about that cancelled thing, it's just something authors can say to make the characters do their bidding as you'll see in a couple of episodes time

New Episode - Feeling Sorry

 
M

Marril_Man

Guest
Whoa. Great comic! The Chico Time one was HILARIOUS. I was just about to ask what happened to the egg and its in a chocolate egg vault? Poor thing:p

Anyhoo keep making these comics they are so farmiliar to my old Comic.:)
 
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