Krazy Kanto

[Occorru]

This is my first sprite comic series so please give comments on what you think of my sprite comic skills.

Episode 1.

Episode 2.

 

[dragongirl]

The first one is really tiny and hard to read.

 

[Occorru]

Any other comments? And I know about the first one and I don't know what happened with it.

 

[Mex]

Episode 1 is unreadable because of small letters.

 

[Poke_master!!!!]

Its Pretty Good but could be longer.(2 panels extra)

 

[Occorru]

Mex, somebody already said that and im going to fix it after the next comic!

 

[Emerald master]

Well, to fix the problem, use imageshak.us it's better hosting for big images

 

[blackgoodbye]

there good id like too see them a bit longer you dont get much story in 4 panels

and are you going to fix the 1st ep or are you just going to make sure it doesnt happen again with the next 1s? couse id really like to be able to read the 1st 1

 

[Kay]

Not bad. The first is really hard to read.