its really cute. Though where the red is glowing around the ears it looks more like its coloring out of the lines. And the bangs should be a bit longer and flowy. But i'm not a proper art critique. But i really like it ^_^
Kawaii! Maybe a bit too kawaii for being part Kyogre
It's very good, but you've coloured out of the lines on the ears, so it looks like a red glow. Or maybe it should be that way?
Anyways. Keep up the good work!