Land, Sea and Adventure!

[Marril_Man]

This is a comic about a boy named Joey from Pacifidlog, he wants to leave but can't and he has never heard of Pokemon in his life. The rest is explained in the comic! I have found out how to do é! It does work and I will use it on comics 7 and up.

The Comic!
Prologue

Chapter 1- From Pacifidlog to the rest of the world!
Ep 1- Can't Touch it!
Ep 2- I choose you, Mochaball!
Ep 3- The Crazy Pushing Girl speaks smarts!
Ep 4- Goodbye Pacifidlog!
Ep 5- Hong Kong Cleffy
Ep 6- Sand=Dangerous in the hands of a Kid
Ep 7- Enter Some Dude who says 'larf' and 'PWN'

Specials:
80th Birthday of Queen Elizabeth!

Fan Stuff:
None

Bios:
Joey's Bio
Lillie's (AKA Crazy Pushing Girl's) Bio

Credits:
Spriters Resourse for most things
gamingw.net for most of the overworld sprites
Coronis for the Buizeru Battle Sprite
Me for the Buizeru Icon
Zephyr Island RPG for the Buizeru Moveset


Title will be made as soon as the Spriters Resource is up and running.

 

[Divine_Light]

W00T First poster!

Good sprites, each episode could have on e or two more windows but i'm not complaining, great story-line like in johto when team rocket came back, i don't realy get the storyline but so far 9/10

 

[munchlaxboy]

pretty good so far. nice storyline. funny. this could go far.

 

[Blaze Dragon]

Very funny, I laughed so much with that "crazy pushing girl"

 

[Marril_Man]

A new ep! This one is entitled... Ep 3-The Crazy Pushing Girl speaks smarts!
lol

 

[Saorio]

It's amazing! This could go very far. The only problems are:

The speech bubbles and font aren't perfect.
The battle match-up thingy in Ep-3 is a bit dull and boring.
The character bios are VERY dull.
You need to proof-read it at times.

Apart from those, I see this comic going places...

 

[Marril_Man]

I think I will put a space in every sentance for the speech bubbles. The bios aren't really important so I just made em blue and the battle thing was just made it a rush. i will probably edit it next battle.

 

[Pokemoder]

Very cool. I like your comic because it has a NEW 4th generation pokemon in it. I hop Joey and jimmy win the fight, good luck with later comics!

 

[Marril_Man]

Well he doesn't win in this ep Which is entitled- Ep 4-Goodbye Pacifidlog!

Hope ya like!

 

[munchlaxboy]

hey, nice update! sorta funny, it was pretty good

 

[Marril_Man]

New Episode! Entitled: Ep 5- Hong Kong Cleffy

Hope you like it Remember, the cute are not always cuddly. They are meanies

 

[kinglerking]

this is a really good comic so far!
but what on earth (or whatever crazy planet pokemon is set on) was that flying thing in episode 4?

 

[magmaman]

This isnt that good

 

[munchlaxboy]

ROFL! LOVE the update. I just loved,"Look mom, a dolphin! Son... that is not a dolphin. YES IT IS! OK, ok, it's a stinkin dolphin."

 

[Marril_Man]

I made the new ep! Entitled: Ep 6- Sand=Dangerous in the hands of a Kid

Hope you like!


"This isnt that good"
At least TELL me why it isn't good so I can see if I can make it better.

 

[Marril_Man]

Oh I also have a new special. Since I am from the UK there is alot of commotion about the 80th Birthday of the Queen, so I might as well make a comic 'bout it!

 

[Marril_Man]

No *twitch* Replies... *twitch* Well here is Ep 7- Enter Some Dude who says 'Larf' and 'PWN'

Please Post Peoples!

 

[Divine_Light]

Its a great cliff-hanger, Its not spelled larf its spelled laugh

 

[Marril_Man]

Thats part of the joke. Look at the title of the episode.

 

[Divine_Light]

Oh the penny has dropped he is using what i call "online geek slang"

The penny has dropped is a figure of speech or of type, i have had many people reply with what penny on other forums