This is my first story ive wrote so please leave a message at the end of chapter 1 with some good and bad points.
chapter 1
Lee Jordan was an average 14 year old boy of average height, he had brown hair with bright blue eyes. He went to a normal school just like any other normal boy. In all he considered himself, normal.
It was a Thursday morning and the sun was shining. Lee woke up with a smile on his face, he had a good feeling inside him, it was gonna be a good day.
''Lee breakfast is ready! shouted Lee's mum. Lee's mum had blonde hair and was single, Lee's dad had died when he was younger but he got over it.
''Im coming! Lee replied. He ran down the stairs and into the kitchen.he was having pancakes with syrup this morning, his favourite. He sat down and started eating immediatly, when he had finished he went back upstairs to get ready for school.
Lee met up outside his house with his friend Michael, they had known each other since primary school and were good friends. They arrived at school on time and when straight to there form for registration, when they had been marked in they went off to there first lesson, and so the day began.
Lee arrived home at the usual time of 3:20, he was tired after his long day of school and he was hungry, he grabbed a quick snack and then made his way upstairs to his room. the phone rang and Lee answered it.
''hey lee its mike''
''hi'' lee replied
''i was wondering if you wanted to come to the cabins with me in a bit?
''erm im not sure isnt that where that person got robbed and beat up?
''nar you've just been hearing things, come on itll be fun!
''i dont think so im really tired i think i might just chill out at home''
''suite yourself, how about tomorow after school?
Lee was getting impatient so he decided to break.
''sure, why not''
Lee put the phone down, fell on his bed and wondered what would happen at the cabins tomorrow, Lee had a bad feeling about it...
chapter 1
Lee Jordan was an average 14 year old boy of average height, he had brown hair with bright blue eyes. He went to a normal school just like any other normal boy. In all he considered himself, normal.
It was a Thursday morning and the sun was shining. Lee woke up with a smile on his face, he had a good feeling inside him, it was gonna be a good day.
''Lee breakfast is ready! shouted Lee's mum. Lee's mum had blonde hair and was single, Lee's dad had died when he was younger but he got over it.
''Im coming! Lee replied. He ran down the stairs and into the kitchen.he was having pancakes with syrup this morning, his favourite. He sat down and started eating immediatly, when he had finished he went back upstairs to get ready for school.
Lee met up outside his house with his friend Michael, they had known each other since primary school and were good friends. They arrived at school on time and when straight to there form for registration, when they had been marked in they went off to there first lesson, and so the day began.
Lee arrived home at the usual time of 3:20, he was tired after his long day of school and he was hungry, he grabbed a quick snack and then made his way upstairs to his room. the phone rang and Lee answered it.
''hey lee its mike''
''hi'' lee replied
''i was wondering if you wanted to come to the cabins with me in a bit?
''erm im not sure isnt that where that person got robbed and beat up?
''nar you've just been hearing things, come on itll be fun!
''i dont think so im really tired i think i might just chill out at home''
''suite yourself, how about tomorow after school?
Lee was getting impatient so he decided to break.
''sure, why not''
Lee put the phone down, fell on his bed and wondered what would happen at the cabins tomorrow, Lee had a bad feeling about it...
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