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Legendary Hunter part 1

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pokemon rulez!!!!!

Awesome Dialga!
Rate this then I will get part 2 up.

Goldenrod City,Johto,a city with many people,places,and pokemon.A young trainer named Jeff Techno with a dream is leaving Goldenrod on his first adventure for his brother Bill Techno to find a Legendary pokemon for his big brother to study.As he is leaving with is wonderful Eevee given to from Bill to help him catch his legendary. Jeff was reading a book on legendarys"Ah,so thats what a Suicune is,it preety awesome. Oh,that...Hidoran thing looks freeky to meeeeeee!" Jeff then goes flying face first onto the ground"What the heck?" he states as he looks behind him."Subom,Subomi", as Subomi states."Oh,WOW a legendary already,god,I'm so good or what!" Jeff says as he pulls out his Legendary book and turns to the index,"Subomi,Subomi,Subomi" he mutters looking for the word"Suicune,what,thats it no Subomi"he declaes.Then a Roslia and a Rozerado jump out of the bushes. Rozerado prepares for a Leaf Storm attack and Roslia prepares for a Solarbeam."Oh crap!" he mummbles.Suddenly his Eevee jumps out to take both hits at once.Eevee hits a tree and some Apoims run out of the tree."Wow,Eevees glowing,hes changing shape as well."Jeff says."Leffiaa!!'',states Jeffs newly evolved Leffia.The 3 evolutionary trio runs off."Nice,a new pokemon! Hello Leffia."says Jeff."Ringggg,Ringgg"goes Jeff's cell phone."Hello,Oh hello bro.What a Diaruga,I will be there in a flash!"
 

Yami Ryu

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Rate this? Sure. This is BAD. Rushed, written in the reply box, skimpy and short as hell... breaking alot of the rules for Fanfiction... And as Mary Sue as hell. Go read ADVICE FOR ASPIRING AUTHORS and RULES before you even dream of putting part two up.
 
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