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Life as a Pokemon Breeder

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Zbger

Fiery Blaze Lucario
HI ITS ME AGAIN YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
ok back to business.
Hi, I'm Zbger! Sooooo, this is a short story about the pitiful Pokemon Breeder that i always have a rematch to level up my pokemon in Pokemon Ruby.
Constructive critism will help me thank you
SPECIAL THANKS:
Dragonfree
Mrs. Lovett
elyvorg
Dormant
and of course YOU
LIFE AS A POKEMON BREEDER
Hi! My name is Isaac, and I'm a Pokemon Breeder
Life as a Pokemon breeder is not hard. Some trainer will give me their pokemon, then I will proceed to train them, then give them to the trainer.
But I didn't know that one day, my life will change.
DAY ONE
It's the same day, doing my job as usual. Then I saw a Trainer going out of the city, going to my place. Now at first, I didn't recognize that person.But when he got closer, I saw his face and I recognize it as the Champion.Now, he got close to me, and he said:
"Want to battle?"​
So, that's it! If you want to figure out what will happen, just stay tuned!!!
 
Psychic

Psychic

Really and truly
When I closed your first fic I asked that you be sure to read and understand the Fan Fiction Rules, since your thread was breaking a number of them. While you did take my advice and fix up the grammar somewhat, this is still breaking the rules. This is just way too short. Usually a chapter should be at least two pages when written on Microsoft Word, or about 1,000 words. You also need to fix your formatting - text should not be centered, you need to skip a line between paragraphs, and you have to work on your punctuation. I also mentioned before that you need to work on adding description.

Like I said last time, please read the Fan Fiction Rules, reread my reply to your previous fic, and take a look at other fics in this section to get an idea of what we expect here before you post again. If you continue to post rule-breaking fics, you may be infracted.

~Psychic
 
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