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Liiiick~

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Vavavoom

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Hellu. :3

I made an evolution for the big pink thing known as Lickilicky x3. The evolution is called Lickking (Lick + King. Get it? lul) <3 Here it is:

Lickking.png


I really, really need help, honestly :'3. <~ Not that proud of it.

Edit:
Vavavoom said:
Well... The tongue is, like, taking all the place in its mouth. :/ It's covering all the opening. x: Also, the tongue is not as flat as Lickitung/Lickilicky's. This one's more like a tentacle.
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Chelc

Well-Known Member
I'm horrible at c/c but I'll try anyways. :'D

IT IS SO COOL LOOKING. I love the huge tongue, and the polka dots too btw. Everything about it is amazing. I don't see anything you'd need to improve on.
 
K

Kyuubi-Chan

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Haii Vava~

The arm closest to us could need to be moved back a few pixels to look better, and the shading could be fixed on some places. Except that's its overall good. Keep up the work Vava. Can't wait for your new shop~
 
F

fuzyfuz

Child safety much?
the only thing i can find wrong is this: the eyes. I think they are too angry and evil-- other thaan that, it is sheer genius!
 
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Asuran

Well-Known Member
Hey, Vavavant.. I'll edit it to show you what it needs, I suck at C+C.
EDIT:
lickingrz5.png

There.
 
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Vavavoom

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Chelc: x3 thanks.
Amonitas: More shading? Where, exactly? o:
Kyuubi-Chan: Thanks. (Oh and yay for the shop thingy :3)
Fuzyfuz: The eyes are supposed to be like that, pupu ;3.
Asuran: Ask before editingplz. ;_; It's Vavavoom here, by the way... x:
 
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Rixo

Musical Trainer
I'm going to be honest, I am not even a spriter. LOL.
But to me, maybe it's just me, but the tongue coming out of the mouth does look slightly weird.

Hahah. The eyes scare me. : D
 
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Vavavoom

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Well... The tongue is, like, taking all the place in its mouth. :/ It's covering all the opening. x: Also, the tongue is not as flat as Lickitung/Lickilicky's. This one's more like a tentacle.
 
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.:Faithless:.

.:~Silent Strength~:
Add a darker shade at the top of the tongue, where it meets the face, so it looks like it's coming out of its mouth- if it has one ^_^ I love it, it's fantastic!
 
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Yonowaru in Chaos

gaspard de la nuit
Vavavoom said:
Well... The tongue is, like, taking all the place in its mouth. :/ It's covering all the opening. x: Also, the tongue is not as flat as Lickitung/Lickilicky's. This one's more like a tentacle.
Click to expand...

...which it seems to be vomiting out.

Kyuubi-Chan said:
Haii Vava~

The arm closest to us could need to be moved back a few pixels to look better, and the shading could be fixed on some places. Except that's its overall good. Keep up the work Vava. Can't wait for your new shop~
Click to expand...

I agree, it looks like it has two right arms and the 'left arm' is the right arm stretched across its chest.

But I love the idea and pose of it. Great job!
 
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Kyuubi-Chan

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It's spelled überness ;)

Vava, do you mind if I try my hand at editing to make it look better?
 
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