Lishus's Sprite Gallery! Please Take a Look!

[Lishus13]

This is just a lot of my recent work that I would like criticism on!

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My Masterpieces​

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Deoxtacruel

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Lugiolu

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Dragotina (Steel-Type Dragonair)

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Ninbleye

*****

Glisclax

*****

Shucklegon-2

*****

Teddiossom

*****

Yamleye

*****

Natowoodo

*****

Suntorb

*****

Azoink

*****

Cyndagull

*****

Shimel

*****

Torkiplume

*****

Koffwag

*****

Weezwag

*****

Lombpin

*****

Kipneton

*****

Mr. Jyime

*****

Arcitto

*****

Viralzagon-Z (Dark/Electric Type Porygon-Z)

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Incineragon-Z (Fire/Normal Type Porygon-Z)

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Torchoise (Fire-type Blastoise)

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Natorcist 1.0/2.0

*****

Peophina (Water-Type Ponyta)

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Koffrock

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Garchomp Chao

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Pichabuff

*****

Phanlekid

*****

Scichomp

*****

Larvitar Chao

*****

Magikern

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Aggpedo

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Weegon-->Kakugon-->Beelamence

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Shartedoise

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Terragross

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Tropaganium

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Mudwirtle

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Charcko (Pre-Evolution to Charmander)

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Evil Zangoose

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Lincune

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Balkullette

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Crawturne

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Kum

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Ponyta (Unicorn Forme)

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Volcoddler (Pre-Evolution to Entei)

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Slakchar-->Mongiroth-->Inferking

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Evile (Dark/Steel Type Mawile)

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Transparent Pikachu

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Glaladam

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8-Bit Ivysaur

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Leafebi

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Jolava

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[alli940]

i like both of the sharpedo fusions very much. great work

 

[goldfan]

I absolutely LOVE your work. Some of them are hilariously genius and make me chuckl. I'm not spriting expert, but these really made my day, so thankyou very much!

 

[dialga111]

first of all, I want to say hi to everyone, since I registered today and this is my first post. Hi people!

I may be new to the forums, but I have some experience with spriting, in my opinion I am a good critic, so I'll try to rate your works (by the way, lots of works here, it'll take a lot of time to rate each and everyone of them xD)

well, here we go!!

-deoxtacruel: looks nice, the only mistake I can point is in the shading. Tentacruel's "hat" (I think it looks like a hat) should me making the top of the head darker, you should reshade its head. (there are still some white you forgot to transparentize there)

-lugiolo: there is absolutely no shading visible in the white parts.

-dragotina: it looks really nice, I like the shiny effect you made!

-ninbleye: very nice too, can't see mistakes there.

-glisclax: it looks strange. You shouldn't fuse a big pokemon with a small one. If you so want, you should scratch the parts of one of the pokemon into the other

-Shucklegon-2: I like it! I can't see mistakes either.

-Teddiolossom: I don't know, it looks like teddiursa's head doesn't fit bellossom's body, it's not your fault, but it looks strange...

-yamleye: the outline from yanma's wings isn't recolored...

-natowoodo: I like it! Best work so far!

-suntorb: looks nice, but if you want to make it even better, you should try to re-color sunkern's body to make the bottom half white and the top bottom red, so it would have more of voltorb

-azoink: Wow! I really love this one! Now THIS is your best sprite so far!

-cindagull: the wings' outlines doesn't seem to be recolored...

-shimel: looks cute, but some of the outlines isn't recolored

-torkiplume: very creative! I like it a lot!

-koffwag: looks like a disguise! Really great! maube you should try to make its belly more rounded

-weezwag: same as above

-lobpin: lol looks like gulpin got a lotad hat and got scared when it looked in the mirror, very fun!

-kipneton: looks cute!! really great!!

-Mr. Jyime: looks great! can't see mistakes either

-Arcitto: I don't like it... you just erased arceus' body, recolored it and made points for eyes and mouth... you should scratch it if you want to keep this idea, make rounded curves to make it look a jelly, just like ditto

-Viralzagon-Z: I like it a lot! which program have you used to make the glow?

-Incineragon-Z: great too! No mistakes I can see

-Torchoise: looks nice, but too simple compared to the porygons

-Natorcist: I don't like them, I don't know why, I just don't like...

-Peophina: nice idea, bad sprite. the outline shape is good, but the shading and outline shading is all wrong, you should read some tutorials.

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it's late here and there are still 32 sprites left to rate, I am tired and sleepy, so I'll rate the other ones tomorrow, ok?

your sprites look great! In most of them I can badly see mistakes, really great art work!!

~Dialga

 

[Hyper Stan]

i need to say hats a long post
First of all work on shading for eksample the legs of snorlax (dont want to scroll up to the top to find the name) has the same shading because its the same legg but whit that shading there needs to be 2 suns 0.0
Also work on outline an example torterra/metagross
Cheers for a great effort in making a torterra by the way

 

[bob_is_cool]

they are all nice, but could you add more mudkip into the kipneton, and what is a "KUM" ?

 

[Frexel]

they are all nice, but could you add more mudkip into the kipneton, and what is a "KUM" ?

Muk backwards, with colours inverted I think o.o <.< Maybe..not..>.> A joke maybe? Tell me its a joke!
I think they all look awesome opossum o.o

 

[goinGreen]

Most of these look REALLY GOOD. A bit tedious to look at in the format you posted them, but they're great! The ponyta-redo-s are the most lacking, in my opinion, since there's so much to edit. I love the ponyta ideas (water and steel, was it?) but it's hard to keep the mane and the proportions, and whatever. They're really good.

Mr. Jyime looks like a Shoop Da Whoop kinda person, don't ya think?

 

[Jdrawer]

Seeing as it will probably fit your style, you should make a prevo for Nosepass. All you have to do Is cut off one of Probopass's mininoses and name it.


Anyway, They're good, but tedius to look at. Your ideas are ingenius and I hope to see more.

The only thing is (keep) work harder, and make them better. (Don't stop neither!)

 

[wilycoyote64]

KUM? that's sick-nasty! XD
i like the slackchar line the most. they go together well. and torchoise.
glisclax made me laugh.
i wanna see more stuff from you.

 

[[aka]]

Hey! Lishus13! Long time no see? xD
Anyways, this is some great stuff! How'd you do the zangoose?
Terragross is win!

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