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LoaFUA- rated R for language

Token

Well-Known Member
This is my first fic here, AU, and OoCness all over. Blame it on cheese. Anyway, not a oneshot, and rated for language (the F-word is said once.).
anyway, on with the fic!
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Life of a Completely F-ed Up Alchemist.
Chapter 1: Getting There

“Alphonse, I can understand transmuting our old house back. Even living in that hellhole,” began an extremly ****** off Edward Elric, “But what I dont get is why you had to invite them.” Fullmetal glared at his brother and the four other “people” with him.

“What’s the matter Fullmetal Pipsqueak?” grined the first of Ed’s most hated, the palm-tree headed Homunculus known as Envy. ”Arn’t ya happy to see me?

“Who’s a protazoa sized runt who exists on only the subatomic level you tropical headed freak?”

“Calm down Brother, They’re family.” Al sighed as the other three people sweatdropped. Envy and Ed were engaged in a fistfight, while another stepped foward.

“Boys, stop it.” yelled Sloth, quite clearly annoyed, “your setting a bad example for Wrath.” The afore mentioned boy however was enjoying himself, watching the fight with a bag of popcorn fused to his arm.

“Listen to your mother!” Hohenheim, the final cast member muttered, “She’s already got a headache and- Wrath, is that popcorn? Yummeh! Popcorn R0x0r5 my 50x0r5!” atwhich point Hohenheim riped Wrath’s arm off, and started chowing down.

“Dad you son of a *****!” The sin cried only to be hit with a golf club by Sloth.

“How many times do I have to tell you? Watch your ****ing language!”

“But you just said-”

“Stay out of this Alphonse, or I’ll make you rust again!”

Hohenheim stoped for a second, and looked foward at the approaching mob. “Honey,” he began, “Where are we?”

“Liore why-” At which point Sloth saw the stampede of po’d viligagers.

“Why are they so mad?” asked the freaked Hohenheim.

“Let see,” replied Ed, pulling his arm blade out of Envy’s leg, “These three geniuses destroyed the entire town, killed a few hundred people, and generally ****** ‘em off to make a Philosiphers Stone out of Al. Other than that, they love us.”

“Yay, Victems!” Exclamed Wrath as he plunged into the mob with a shotgun and a katana.

“¬_¬” Said Ed.

“¬_¬” Replied Hohenheim.

“¬_¬” Agreed Envy.

Alphonese however, disagreed. “o-O” said he, “I had no idea human skulls could be used as bowling balls when they are still attached to their body.…”
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Nextime on ”LoaCFA”
Episode 2: Moving in.
“Al, what are Gluttony and Lust doing in our house?”
“Well, Shrimp, Gluttony is eating mom’s stuff. The queston is, Why?
“ Beats me brother, but Mom’s not going to be happy.”
“BOYS! YOU ARE SO DEAD!”
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So, what do you think? it gets even more weired next chapter, along with actual discription. And yes, Wrath and Hohenheim are completly insane.

See ya next time!
Combusken;256;
 

Token

Well-Known Member
From now on, the fic should be updated after the 12:00 FMA episode. Im afraid that Moving In will be made chapter three, so in a week or less we meet more characters. Sorry Lust and Gluttony fans, but Im expanding on the rivalry of the boys, and Hoho Papa's character. Next week definatly! This chapter is about Ed's size. And yes, Ed, I did call you a flea and paramecium sized super shrimp. What ya gonna do about it? O-O oh. Gotta run!On with the Fic!

Life of a completely F-ed up Alchemist.
Chapter 2: On the Road Again. When are They Not?
"For all of my four-hudred-fifty-seven years, I have NEVER, and I mean NEVER, seen that much blood and gore, and I worked on the madness team!" Hohenheim was in shock. The already crappy city had, in the space of six minutes, become so utterly PWN3D, that even the sand on which it was based was mutilated. Ed and Envy sat in a corner arguing as usual, Hohenheim had no clue how they had managed to find one. Al was at Scar's "Clinic to Regain Sanity and Learn How to Blow **** the **** Up in Shades and a Trench Coat," and Wrath was getting the Oroborus droppings beaten out of him by a wooden spoon that Sloth made Ed transmute. From some poor dudes skull no less.
"Shut up and get some food!" the others yelled (in Wrath's case it was more of a sob), kicking poor Hoho Papa into a McChaos. The man picked up a total of food that amounted to eight hundred Trancs, (The equivelent of $1,500) to find that his family had transmuted food while he was gone. The eldest two sons, apparently involved in some sort of Eating contest, which, Hohenheim mused, Envy would definetly lose, grabbed half the pile each and downed the 750 rice Burgers each in a single bite.
"It's times like this I wish a had just died. Mom always told me not to mess with the natural scheme of life, but no, I had to kick peoples souls out and steal their bodies…"
Next time on "LoaCFA"
Episode 3: Moving In!
Ed: For real this time.
Hoenheim: Sorry for stealing the chapter. In exchange, I will reveal the brand new character appearing in next week's installment. It is
Corey: *Gags and Binds Hohenheim. Shut up you Baka!
See Ya!
 

Poison Master

A Local Person
Personally, I don't like it, not near enough description and far too short.
 

Token

Well-Known Member
Thanks for your review, and I'm working on the discription. Right now matter o'fact, im working on chapter three already. Won't be up till sunday tho. Ill post a sample of it next time i get a review.
 

Token

Well-Known Member
Yeah, i completely forgot about this fic didn't I? Anyway, I'll be taking a week off after this chapter to write up an Envy/Lust bro/sis one-shot. Instead of a chapter four preview, I'm gonna work on that so it will be great,okay? Anyway, chapter three.


"Finally!" cried Ed, his red coat covered in blood and dirt. It had the overall effect of making him look like he had been through a tornado. he had as well. They had just finished filming Conquerer of Shambala, and Alphonse, his dear, sweet, lovable little brother had needed to practice transmuting tornados, and one had actually caught Ed and the others, flinging them into some strange place called Konoha. "hopefully," he thought, grimacing, "that won't be on the final cut." they had finally made it to their house, and were ready to put all their stuff down.

As the other five caught up to him, Edward turned the doorknob. Which was locked of course. "On the negative side," began Envy, who was worried about only getting a few lines in this chapter, "Someone else must have taken the house while we were waiting for someone to get out of the frikkin circus."

"What?" shrugged Wrath, ignoring Envy's leer, "there was an all you can eat cotton candy buffet!"

Envy sighed, his contempt obvious. "what ever. On the bright side of things, Hagane no Chibi-san can finally reach a doorknob on his own."

"**** you"

"Edward! Apologize!"

"**** you too Sloth!"

"Excuse me? I am your MotherslashDaughter figure! Watch your tone!"

"Why, will it do a trick?"

"Nice one Son!" Hohenheim was met with a glare from Sloth. "I mean bad. Respect your mother." Sloth turned to Wrath, satisfied, as Hohenheim winked and slipped his son a twenty.

"Wait a minute! I thought you made up those Tranc things for money! doubleyou-tee-eff?"

"Ummm......" The author snapped his fingers and a black, circular piece of paper with "plot" written on it in red appeared. "Ninja vanish! Jikan wo Tomete!" With that, he jumped into the paper, and landed safely next to the fourth wall.

"Nice one Son!" Hohenheim was met with a glare from Sloth. "I mean bad. Respect your mother." Sloth turned to Wrath, satisfied, as Hohenheim winked and slipped his son a twenty.

"woah. Deja Vu!"

Anyway, Alphonse broke down the door and ran to the bathroom. He is still a suit of armor, so there was no reason for it. I guess he was just high or something. Yeah.

"Hi fellow homunculi of the L.E.G trio!" Envy cried embracing Lust and Gluttony who had appeared out of nowhere. "and hello fan-game created Homunculi who is not possible in the manga continuity because you are both the first and the last of us and it assumes that he is in fact in charge of us but in fact it is a completely different dude who pwnd Ed and Al's asses! Wow that was a long grammatically incorrect sentence!"

"Uuhh hi............" said the character that will be revealed next chapter "who the hell are you again?"

To be continued in two weeks!
 
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