lol, New pokes (Pencil + No colour)

[Raito Clouds]

Snifer (Sniff - er) Normal/Ice

~ SNIFER's are know to be very self-centered and cocky. The "rifles" on it's body are actually fur that has stiffened. It's nose is very senstive and will take or steal whatever excites its nose.

Criliea (Cry-lee-a) Grass/Rock (Or rock/ghost or grass/ghost)

~ Criliea were not discovered until seen clustered near a Cradily (dead) body. Scientist connot explane how they came to be from the Cradily body. It produces 3 different kinds of syrup in it's tentacle-like tubes: Spicy, Sweet, and bitter. The syrups are used to lure bug pokemon close, and for food. But they can only store so much. When spring arrives, the tubes disperce all syrup, and inflate. Carrying CRILIEA (by wind) from their jungle homes to the desert until fall where it flies back to the jungle. Scientist's do understand why the migrate to these 2 places often (No signs of breeding has been observed in either area). If CRILIEA are attacked, they either attack back with it's huge pincirs, or close them shut revealing a scary face.

Rate and junk. (Remember no number rates).

 

[Comis Patronus]

They're weird but creative. Needs more composition and a more detail.

 

[Tiffany]

Cool design. May I suggest cleaning up the lines and maybe outlining it with a ink pen so it will be easier to see? I agree with what Ratiosu831 said also.

 

[Raito Clouds]

Were to add more detail exactly? (thanks for the responses).