Long story behind this one XD

[Clockworkz]

Eh he heh heh ^_^;;;
Here's the deal:
I'm in an RP on Xeogaming, called Innocence Gone (which I'm making into a webcomic, as many of you know). My friend's character is a dude, and looks like this. Only is a dude. And looks dudely. I was joking around with him, debating why I only draw chicks. He said "Why don't you draw MY characer?" I said, ok, fine...
Gender swap FTW.
Base color here. Doubt I'll cg it; this is not a high priority pic.

 

[Shadow_Fox]

Lmao, hes a beautiful woman. Poor guy. Picture looks great, very nice line art. His/her left arm seems a bit long on the upper half but thats it.

~

 

[SeanLuigi]

...I thought he was a she....But its a cool drawing literally!^^

 

[Who Said Pikachu?]

He does make a pretty neat chick.
Bit of a booty on her though even if we can blame some of it on the trenchcoat. Her shoulders are also rather broad for a female with the arms doing odd things for how they're sat against the body looking rather spaghetti like. Once again, something we can blame on the coat but the fact her elbow is also a little high up on the closer arm doesn't help. Some crease lines in the coat at the arm pit would do something I can't name at the moment.. (Excuse me my brain is like fried at the moment), anyways, it'd help I think. (ah the misery, shoot me now x.x )
The thing I really need to say that niggles me is her boobs, they're just off. Ok, small boobs are fine, but small boobs aren't that round, well defined or close together, they're more like small flat cones. Bring them down a bit, spread them apart some and maybe pump some air in if you want. With where and how they are at the moment she has a -really- long waist.
The opening of her coat at the bottom seems odd to me, I think it's the way it's falling against her, namely the side that comes from the left, it shows no shape against her leg what so ever which you would be expecting at least a little since it's wrapping around her body/legs, also bringing the edge in to hug the body some might help . Similar thing on the right side where for some reason it kicks out away from her at the bottom. There's no breeze going on, at least not according to the hair so that should be a down edge, it does make it a little more interesting, but really,you'd go back to the shop and complain about the material having been stretched if it were real.

Anyways, neat picture, the idea's always a fun one and I like how it turned out. Very nice smooth finished looking image. It doesn't really -have- to have the shading, it looks fine as it is.

Happy hunting!
~Pika!