Look at this, and teel me how it is :)

[Bloody Banette]

Look at this, and tell me how it is

Zapdos @ Leftovers ** Vodka
Trait: Pressure
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Spd / 252 SAtk
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Rest
- Sleep Talk
- Thunderbolt

Dugtrio (M) @ Choice Band ** Ron
Trait: Arena Trap
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Aerial Ace
- Earthquake
- Hidden Power [Bug]
- Rock Slide

Snorlax (M) @ Leftovers ** Pisco
Trait: Immunity
EVs: 204 HP / 92 Atk / 136 Def / 8 Spd / 68 SDef
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Body Slam
- Curse
- Earthquake
- Rest

Starmie @ Leftovers ** Chela
Trait: Natural Cure
EVs: 40 HP / 216 Spd / 252 SAtk
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Ice Beam
- Rapid Spin
- Recover
- Surf

Weezing (F) @ Leftovers ** Tequila
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 196 HP / 60 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Haze
- Pain Split
- Sludge Bomb
- Will-O-Wisp

Jirachi @ Leftovers ** Fresco
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 252 HP / 116 Def / 140 SDef
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Light Screen
- Psychic
- Thunder Wave
- Wish

 

[Delta]

Steve´s legend posted the exact same team

Zapdos needs more Defense/HP

Thick fat > inmunity on lax since you have rest

44 HP EVs on Starmie for max leftovers recovery

Anyway, DDtar problem once dugtrio goes down

 

[Lugia34]

Hmm... Lax has some Gengar problems... but other than that great team...

 

[aipomkong]

This team has a HUGE Gengar problem, the only pokemon that doesn't take a super effective hit from it is jirachi, and I wouldn't rely on just one pokemon to beat gengar

 

[Fluorescent Adolescent]

This team was blatantly taken from the smogon article of "Team Building". Be more original and use your own foo' >:O! And by that, changing a few of the moves from the squad on smogon is not original >:O!

Anyway I like sleeptalking lax tbh. The curse version just asks for a phazer to switch in and is generally hard to set up on when playing a half decent player at least. Although, as for being the last pokemon on your team when your other pokes have fainted, he can become unstoppable ;x

 

[Bloody Banette]

It was taken from smogon I was testing it but I din't know if I didn't know how to use it or it wasn't a good team.
I'm kinda new in NB sorry...

 

[Fluorescent Adolescent]

It was taken from smogon I was testing it but I din't know if I didn't know how to use it or it wasn't a good team.
I'm kinda new in NB sorry...

No it's no problem.

I would suggest that you start with your own teams with which you are comfortable with and work your way up as a gradual process rather than to jump straight into a reasonably good competitive team. Sure you'l get those that lol at you or whatever, but those people are fags anyway. Just DIY and you'll get better ;/

 

[aipomkong]

Still has a huge Gengar weak

Swampert over Dugtrio imo, and switch to Calm Mind/Wish/Psychic/Thunderbolt Jirachi

it's not as if you can't beat Blissey anyway

 

[TOY MACHINE]

w/ serene grace might as well thundr instead of t-wave on jirachi