Looking for criticue on a few things please

[your_worst_nightmare]

Just as I mentioned in the title, im looking for people to criticue my artwork. Tell me if anything needs to be changed or added(if i dont mention it or someting), I want to know what you guys think. Ive been in a slump lately and I just picked my sketchbook up the other day. I tryed straying away from my origonal style but some of the things I have drawn dont seem so ok with me. I would like to know you guys think, feel free to say what you want and I dont mind if your honest with your criticue.

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First up we have a suicune I had finished not to long ago. The first thing I noticed I had forgoten to do was color the eye. Second The feet are to small on the front legs, and the right leg just looks a little off.(that was the hardest part for me to draw... go figure)

http://nightmare-in-death.deviantar...d-280292721?q=gallery:nightmare-in-death&qo=0

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Next up is this weird looking Jirachi. Honestly I just think everything is wrong about it...

http://nightmare-in-death.deviantar...y-280244220?q=gallery:nightmare-in-death&qo=2

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This Glaceon I had drawn I think looks ok.. but the perportions look a little odd to me. A little off like the Jirachi actually..

http://nightmare-in-death.deviantar...y-280244220?q=gallery:nightmare-in-death&qo=2

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Honestly I dont really find anything wrong with this Umbreon, maybe the back leg is a little too long but all-in-all I think it looks pretty good.

http://nightmare-in-death.deviantar...41?q=gallery:nightmare-in-death/13942756&qo=4

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The camra quality isnt the best on this one, so it does make it a little off looking. I have posted this one before a while back, but I didnt get much of anyones opinions. I do think Totodile looks a little strange tho with the shading I did.

http://nightmare-in-death.deviantar...7?q=gallery:nightmare-in-death/13942756&qo=11

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Finaly last but not least Oshawatt and Mudkip, I think Oshawatt looks plain out stupid.. enough said..

http://nightmare-in-death.deviantar...4?q=gallery:nightmare-in-death/13942756&qo=12

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Please do tell me what you think ;197;

 

[shipwrecks]

i like them =)

altough;
jirachi looks retarded or high on something
glaceon looks horse-ish


maybe you should have your artwork from the chat uploaded here =)

 

[your_worst_nightmare]

thanks and ya jirachi does look kinda stupid, so does glaceon @_@

on another note: OMFG ships your alive!!! O_O *glomp* :3

 

[PrismaticPrincessAnna]

Mudkip and Oshawott drawing is Lyrawesome <3
I love how you shade, nya~

 

[your_worst_nightmare]

thank you very much ^^

 

[~*Scyther*~]

i think they are VERY good! good work! but i do have to agree with shipwrecks on the jirachi..... :/ but i really like them. my favorite is the totodile and cyndaquil. i also extremely admire the way that you make the drawings original. most drwings are just copies of another drawing but i really like the way you change the poses and everything with them to make the artwork more unique and orignal overall great job

 

[your_worst_nightmare]

Thank you, and yes lol jirachi does look stupid. I always found it hard drawing people like things >_> and I try to keepthings as original as I can ^^

 

[Jinvaani]

You must be a perfectionist because I thought they were all brilliant.

 

[your_worst_nightmare]

Lol, well I do try to make my art as close to the real thing as possible but still keep my style in with the mix. ^^ ;197;