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Lost Love

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rybo5000

<- so cute <3
Ok this was origanally 'The Hunt' but i've read the rules and hopefully am now obeying them!

Basic Plot

An organisation of criminals formed recently and now call themselves Team Dark, these people illegally poach pokemon and now use them for their own bidding. So far every house in one town was robbed by Team Dark members, each house having possesions stolen, even their pokemon!

You

You are a pokemon who has had a freind or relative taken from them by Team Dark, you now set off on a journey across seas, mountains, volcanoes and many other dangerous places, trying to find your loved ones before it's too late.

Sign Up Below is the basic form of what needs to be explained.

Name: Choose a reasonable, normal name. Preferbably not your serebii screen name.

Age: Your characters age must not be under 12 or over 50

Pokemon: This is what pokemon you are, no rare or legendary pokemon. If you choose a 4th gen pokemon it can only be a pokemon that has an english name!

Relative: Who is your relative, what kind of pokemon are they ect.

How did you loose your friend/relative: Breifly explain how it happened, e.g: A Team Dark member burst into the door, he grabbed me and my father from out tank (we're krabby) but i was lucky enough to escape and ran into the woods for safety.
The story will begin from where this ends e.g this krabby's story will begin in the woods

Personality: What kind of personality have you got? Are you couragous, girly, manly, stupid?

Any other information you feel is relevant:

Example form

Name: Ryan

Age: 20

Pokemon: Togetic

Relative: 2 young Togepi

How did you loose your friend/relative: I was a rare pokemon living with my two togepi children in the Safari Zone. When two Team Dark members killed my wife and kidnapped my two children. I was hit by a hyper beam and knocked into the nearby river.

Personality: A strong couragous Togetic. A funny, caring person who's main focus in life is his two children who he would do anything for.

Any other information you feel is relevant: None

Rules

- Each time you post the characters name should be above the post in a sutible colour (e.g grass types in green, water types have blue)
- One post at a time, definetly no double posting.
- No rares or legendaries
- Stick to story line
- I reserve the right to change your sign up, cancel your sign up or do anything else written under the rules
- No spam or i will report you
- All normal serebii rules apply
- You can reserve a spot but sign up form must be filled in before RPG begins!
- Your relatives may talk but if they do only I will be writing it


RPG Will begin when 14 people have signed up
1. Ryan
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
11.
12.
13.
14.
15.

Done
Okay please sign up, wait patienly for it to begin then have fun! :)

Goodbye,
Rybo5000 ;385;
 

Razor Shiftry

Cynthia = Porn Star
oh dear...here we go again...who need some history dude...
 

Razor Shiftry

Cynthia = Porn Star
some suggestions :talk about team dark and their history, who leads them, why etc
explain where they are, are they in a region of the pokemon world?
where are all the pokemon being held? how have they escaped?
you need lots and lots of detail! minimum about 400 words apparently...
 

rybo5000

<- so cute <3
some suggestions :talk about team dark and their history, who leads them, why etc
explain where they are, are they in a region of the pokemon world?
where are all the pokemon being held? how have they escaped?
you need lots and lots of detail! minimum about 400 words apparently...

oh ok,
if a mod reads this please dont close i will update it using suggestions above
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
An organisation of criminals formed recently and now call themselves Team Dark, these people illegally poach pokemon and now use them for their own bidding. So far every house in one town was robbed by Team Dark members, each house having possesions stolen, even their pokemon!

This basically sounds like BASIC TRAINER PLOT against Team RANDOM! Which is basically outlawed by Dan if you can't make it interesting, original and have the talent to pull it off. Rybo, you do not. It will develop into a spam fest of noobs. Stop. Now. And go get better at writing first, and read the darn rules of the RPG forum before even posting here again :/ while I report this thread. AGAIN >.>

Also if these people are so bad- where are the cops? Where are the vigilante trainers? Where are the people that have guns and crap? So basically everyone is weak and stupid and pathetic and stayed in that one town to have their pokemon stolen? What are they? Idiots? Unable to leave? D: yes your once again poor description and rushed skills have crapped out on you again Rybo.
 
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rybo said he would edit it later
 

rybo5000

<- so cute <3
thank you robynblclark!
And yes Yami Ryu the people of the town are idiots! lol
and no it isnt trainer vs team random, its pokemon trying to find their base then attempting to break in and rescue their family!
will edit it in about half an hour, until then
LEAVE IT OPEN PLEASE MODS!
 

Lady Myuu

Damsel mostly Stressed.
no. :\ you have no idea how to rp do you? or even bothered to try and understand the rules to follow. Take the advice given and learn something. Cuz your working your way towards another ban.

I seriously doubt you can edit this to where it abides the rules. But I'll let you try.
 

Razor Shiftry

Cynthia = Porn Star
no. :\ you have no idea how to rp do you? or even bothered to try and understand the rules to follow. Take the advice given and learn something. Cuz your working your way towards another ban.

I seriously doubt you can edit this to where it abides the rules. But I'll let you try.

now now, no need to sound cruel, at least he's trying which is a good start
 

RaZoR LeAf

Night Terror
Ok this was origanally 'The Hunt' but i've read the rules and hopefully am now obeying them!

At first look I'd say your not.

Basic Plot

An organisation of criminals formed recently and now call themselves Team Dark, these people illegally poach pokemon and now use them for their own bidding. So far every house in one town was robbed by Team Dark members, each house having possesions stolen, even their pokemon!

You

You are a pokemon who has had a freind or relative taken from them by Team Dark, you now set off on a journey across seas, mountains, volcanoes and many other dangerous places, trying to find your loved ones before it's too late.

Three sentences...
4. RPG Length
RPG plots must consist of a minimum of approximately 400-600 words. Since paragraphs can be defined as any length, a word count is better suited to making sure they are of adequate length. This amounts to about half a page on Word
. Team Dark sounds exactly like Team Rocket.

Sign Up Below is the basic form of what needs to be explained.

Name: Choose a reasonable, normal name. Preferbably not your serebii screen name.

Age: Your characters age must not be under 12 or over 50

Pokemon: This is what pokemon you are, no rare or legendary pokemon. If you choose a 4th gen pokemon it can only be a pokemon that has an english name!

Relative: Who is your relative, what kind of pokemon are they ect.

How did you loose your friend/relative: Breifly explain how it happened, e.g: A Team Dark member burst into the door, he grabbed me and my father from out tank (we're krabby) but i was lucky enough to escape and ran into the woods for safety.
The story will begin from where this ends e.g this krabby's story will begin in the woods

Personality: What kind of personality have you got? Are you couragous, girly, manly, stupid?

Any other information you feel is relevant:

Example form

Name: Ryan

Age: 20

Pokemon: Togetic

Relative: 2 young Togepi

How did you loose your friend/relative: I was a rare pokemon living with my two togepi children in the Safari Zone. When two Team Dark members killed my wife and kidnapped my two children. I was hit by a hyper beam and knocked into the nearby river.

Personality: A strong couragous Togetic. A funny, caring person who's main focus in life is his two children who he would do anything for.

Any other information you feel is relevant: None

No rare pokemon you say, how fortunate for you that Ogetic are just appearing on every route in your version of pokemon. Hell they're not rare in the slightest.

Rules

- Each time you post the characters name should be above the post in a sutible colour (e.g grass types in green, water types have blue)

17 different Forum colours make this incredibly annoying.

- No rares or legendaries

*cough* Togetic *cough*

- I reserve the right to change your sign up, cancel your sign up or do anything else written under the rules

The rles do not say you can change other people's forms, only that you can tell them what to change. If they don't want to change it, then you can turn them down.

RPG Will begin when 14 people have signed up
1. Ryan
2.
3.
4.
5.
6.
7.
8.
9.
10.
11.
12.
13.
14.
15.

Done
Okay please sign up, wait patienly for it to begin then have fun! :)

Goodbye,
Rybo5000 ;385;

You haven't read the rules, because they clearly state what an RPG should contain, and you don't have that. You don't have the length, you ignore your own rules on character creation. You claim to be editing later, but this is not an excuse. If your RPG is not ready, then do not post it. Since LadyMyuu is giving you then chance this can remain open. For a while.

I suggest nobody signs up for it though, not until it's got some kind of approval for staying open.
 

Lily

you were the one.
I don't think there is a need for this to be opened when the owner is banned..

@ the one who reported it (not all):

It's not called special treatment, 'though it may seem that way to you, I'm sure. =/
 
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