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LOST Season 1

PkmnTrainerJ

Well-Known Member
Note: This is an alternative version of LOST, starring none of the normal LOST cast, but using the LOST island and other things.

Chapter 1: ...And Found

Most of us don't have the good fortune of knowing exactly where we are going in life, what we want to do, when and how we want to do it if we do. We are, for lack of a better word Lost.

None of us will ever be as lost as the apparent survivors of Oceanic Flight 815. The plane that was supposed to land in Australia, never made it. It's been a few days now and I'm starting to get worried.

My brother was on that flight, and I don't know what's happened to him. I haven't heard a thing in days. Well, saying that, there have been rumours. Rumours that the plane crashed. Rumours that some of the people on the flight survived. Rumours that my brother could still be alive have reached my ears, but I have no evidence to back this up.

I do believe Flight 815 did crash though, and that he is still alive, and I will find him. I'm setting off today to find my brother and nothing will stop me.

Meanwhile...
Joseph sat on the beach, the waves tickling his feet whilst the remains of the plane lay not far from him.

He brushed his long hair out of his face, as he often had to do, and though he didn't like to admit it, he was missing home slightly.

"So, they say they've managed to clear out the dead."

Joseph glanced over at a female passenger whom he had sat next to on the plane.

"We're having a mass funeral and sending them out to sea." She spoke with some sadness in her voice, but seemed to be stifling back actual tears.

"What do I care?" Joseph expressed his liking for other people for about the thousandth time in his life "It's not like I knew any of these people."

"So, you wouldn't care if I died?"

"No, that's...not..i..."

"I'll see you at the funeral Joseph."

Joseph returned back to his view of the sea, with most of the waves now far away, and pulled a piece of paper from his pocket.

He stared at it for a few moments, and then screwed it up and threw it towards the sea in anger.

The waves had now turned violent again, and Joseph took a few steps back. As a wave returned to the ocean Joseph felt something touch his foot and almost leapt up, thinking it was a jellyfish or worse.

He looked down at his right foot and saw something he instantly recognized.

His older brother used to carry around a handgun like this all the time, though it didn't seem to be his it looked awfully familiar.

Joseph studied the gun for a while, clicked it out and saw it only had one bullet. No matter, maybe one bullet was all he needed.

Joseph stowed the gun in his jean pocket and walked over to the funeral.
 

PkmnTrainerJ

Well-Known Member
Note: In case you didn't get it, flashbacks are in italics.

Chapter 2: Trust

"Joe!"

Joseph was too busy snuggled in his bed to move to do whatever it was the mean voice wanted so he just decided to lay there a little while longer.

Also, Julie was in his bed, and though he wasn't sure where the relationship was even going at this young age, he had decided to just ignore whatever crazy thoughts were running through his head.

"Hey stranger..."

Julie was slightly awake and rolled over to hold Joseph, but he slid out of the bed revealing his nakedness to whoever could have been looking through his bedroom window.

No sooner had Joseph gotten on a dressing gown, Julie was fast asleep once more, and Joseph headed off to explore the origins of the angry voice.

"What is it big brother?" Joseph rubbed his eyes of 'sleep' whilst speaking.

Joseph's big brother was just leaving the house, in his police uniform and with all his gear.

"Joseph, do me a favour."

"Anything, bro."

"I'm out of town for the next three days, please take care of everything. I know I can trust you."

"You can trust me."


"You can trust me."

Joseph, suddenly realising that he had spoken at a funeral hoped his voice wasn't too loud.

Sarah patted Joseph on the arm.

"You holding up okay?" She whispered to him.

"Yeah, I'm fine, it's just, I never even knew these people you know..." He whispered back to her.

"I don't know. I never found my cousin, I don't know if she's here, burnt beyond all recognition or whether she landed somewhere else on the island."

Joseph felt instantly guilty, but why? He never cared about people. Why should he care what this Sarah chick was doing with her life?

A man came running to the funeral, which was being held on the beach further down from where the plane crashed.

"hff, pff...Hey, the plane..."

"What? Did it crash?"

A few chuckles from the crowd gathered, as well as a few frowns.

"It...it's gone."

"Whaddya mean 'gone'?" exclaimed Sarah, as if she was trying to ask someone an ocean away.

Everyone from the funeral made their way to the beach, and as Jerry had said, there was no plane.

No marks of said plane ever having crashed, no signs of it being dragged away, nothing.

"Where is the plane?"

"Maybe, on this island, it's best not to ask..." said Joseph, a little fear in his voice. "Remember what happened on the first night here?"
 

chrisivy

Well-Known Member
It was a bit confusing...Ok well I hope you continue. I got hooked some how...YAY. First post.
 

Kitsune

This Place is Death.
Nice. I'm hoping for updates on this frequently ;)
I hope you don't mind, after I finish the fic I'm in the process of writing now, I was going to make my own fic from one of the other survivor's point of view.
 

Yami Ryu

Well-Known Member
... this is bland, boring, and doesn't hold a flicker of an ember to the show. You barely describe anything, your characters are pretty bland too, and shallow. I mean come on what's the point in making it 'Lost' when you have none of the original characters, and most likely none of the plot? That's what was so great about LOST- characters and plot.

This has nothing in the way for characters and plot. I suggest you ignore the mindless praise you've recived, and go read Advice for Aspiring Authors, and not make this seem to write up in the reply box.
 

Kitsune

This Place is Death.
(Mine wasn't mindless appraise, it was just me hoping it'll improve. He specifically said that this'll cross over into the storyline. If it doesn't, though, there's no way in hell I'm reading it. Same opinion about having none of the original characters.)
 

RaZoR LeAf

Night Terror
If anything, a Chapter should be the equivulent of half an episode of Lost, if not more. To properly reflect the show, you should be ending every chapter with a big twist or revelation that makes people desperate to read the next one. So far it is none of these.
 
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