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Love and Loyalty

Faerie

MONS
PG-13 for violence and some later swearing. Wondering why I rasied the rating?

Hooray! After an unnessicarily long wait (sorry about that ^^; ) Love and Loyalty is being rewritten! Chapter 1 is finished! As of the day I'm wririting this (August 1, 2005), Chapter 2 isn't done, but I really couldn't wait to get it up, because I know that several people are looking forward to reading this (and others have read the origional), so here it is!
Whoops, I almost forgot--The account I used to have, Puchiko Girl, was deleted because I was unable to log on. I tried getting new passwords, but it said they were invalid. Just wanted to confirm that so I didn't get accused of plagerism or whatever. O__o;;
I shall rate the chapters individually. :eek:

Table of Contents
Chapter I: White Rabbit
Chapter II: Painful Discoveries
Chapter III: Code Red
Chapter IV: Threes
Chapter V: Twin Blades
Interlude: Prophecy
Chapter VI: Song of a Bloodstained Mirror
Key | Red - PG-10 or PG-13/White - PG or under

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Love and Loyalty

Chapter I: White Rabbit (PG)​

Rosoku looked around him. He couldn't help but marvel at the overwhelming goings-on around him. The whole of Lilycove City, it seemed, was packed to the square inch with people. He expected no less, though--This was the Ho-oh Festival, after all. The celebration for the legendary Pokemoh Ho-oh, who had (according to legend, of course) reincarnated three Pokemon killed in a fire into Suicune, Raikou and Entei. It was also said that Ho-oh watched over humankind and Pokemon, only to reveal itself when Pokemon and man lived in harmony...

Not that Rosoku believed in any of this junk. No, he was too serious of a man to idle himself with fairytales and the like. He had only come here because he had some free time, and he hadn't been to the Festival since he was very small.

He surveyed the area quickly, then made a desicion that he knew he'd probably regret later and headed towards Lilycove Square. It seemed to be more crowded than the other areas; Rosoku had to lift himself onto his toes just to be able to see. The enormous crowd was like an ocean, the current pushing in all directions. There was an island, though--a small, unpopulated table. After a while of worming his way through the tightly packed mass of people, he finally reached his destination.

He had just begun to go into a daze, wondering what to do next, when he noticed someone standing next to him at the table. It was a woman; she had long, blond hair and soft blue eyes, which both blended well with here pale skin. Rosoku stood still for a moment, transfixed, when she too turned to look at him. Much to both of their surprise, both of them flushed and turned away quickly.

Rosoku's face was still quite red. What...Was that? he thought, holding his hand to his chest. This had never happened before. He managed to muster up enough courage to turn to the woman and say:

"E-Excuse me."

The woman turned to him; she was blushing also. "Oh. Um...Hello."

Rosoku let out his breath and attempted to start a conversation. "My name is Rosoku. You...You are?"

The woman smiled and bowed slightly. "Umi. It's nice...To meet you, Rosuku-san."

The two conversed for a while, and the longer they talked the more smoothly it went. Eventually, neither of them were aware of the world around them, they were so wrapped up in the conversation...Or was it each other they were lost in?

Despite this, of course, Rosoku never blew his cover. He couldn't afford anyone finding out that he was in Team Magma, expecially not her. Sure, when he was working he wasn't afraid to reaveal it (not like he could hide it with the uniform on). But if anyone outside the Team added two and two and linked his identities...Well, he didn't want to think of the possibilities.

Suddenly Rosoku was caught off guard. "Rosoku-san," Umi said quietly, "Well, would you like to...Go around the festival? You know, to get to know eachother better. Becuase...I'd really like to meet again, sometime."

Rosoku blinked, feeling the rush of emotions return. The two had become fast friends, but he had never expected this. All the same, he accepted and allowed her to take his hand as they headed towards the middle of Lilycove's Town Square.

At first the two started out shyly; occasionally there would be an embarrasing silence, broken even more awkwardly. Eventually, though, the two became more synchronized. Rosoku felt as if he had left Earth, and was in a secluded wonderland of pure happiness...

"Hey, are you two listening?"

Rosoku and Umi looked up, startled. A very irritated-looking salesman was glaring at them, tapping his foot angrily, his hands akimbo. "It's about time," he snapped. "The festival ended five minutes ago!"

The newly-formed duo gasped. Rosoku checked his watch. Surely enough, it read 4:49 AM. He quickly and reluctantly said good-bye to Umi, who nodded in response. The two dashed off frantically.

Normally, her hurriedness would have been suspicious to Rosoku, but now was not the time. When he was sure she was out of sight, he ripped off his overcoat, revealing his Team Magma uniform, and pulled on his hood. He released a Charizard, the mark of the Team branded onto its forehead. "The Hideout. Now," he commanded tersely as he boared the enormous winged fire lizard.

Rosoku was too nervous about being late to think about it now, but he really wanted to see Umi once again. He would; but it wouldn't be in the way he expected...
 
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xXSaberXx

xxxXsightless
TWOOT! o.o I must say, bravo, BRAVO! *insert standing ovation here*

>P A short chapter, but all in all, exceedingly well done. Your descriptions lacked nothing and yet gave no excess in the way of wordy length. >3 Unlike meh! Haha, much loves to Umi......I have a sneaking suspicions she is.....[SPOIL]In team Aqua. o-o;;;[/SPOIL]

I don't think I was here to read the orignal version, so kudos to the new (and hopefully better) one! :3
 

Faerie

MONS
Hooray, my first reader! ^__^ I'm glad you like it. Yeah, I've changed it a lot since the origional version, and I think it's improved a lot. I'm glad you like the characters! I changed the names since the origional version. Rosoku used to be Pheonix, and Umi used to be Lily. Also, I stayed with the tradition of name definitions--Rosoku means 'candle' in Japanese, and Umi's name means 'sea' or 'ocean'. BTW, you'll meet Umi's brother Ame in the next chapter. His name means 'rain'. >:3
And I can't tell you if your suspicion is correct, 'cuz there are always people who look at spoiler tags that aren't directed towards them. *glares at them* xD Anyways, thanks for the input!
 
K

Korimura

Guest
... I looked...
Oh well! So far, this is going great! -_- Short yes, but that's to be expected for a prologue and all...
 
D

daddio301

Guest
she is [spoil]in team aqua[/spoil]

Faerie goes to my school and is friends with me and she told me
 

Faerie

MONS
Koimura: Thanks for the input! ^__^ Yeah, I know the chapter's short. It was longer on lined paper though. I'll try to make Chapter II longer.

Franklin: Yeah, but please don't tell them what's happening...Oh well, I guess now they know. They would have found out in the next chapter anyways. ^^;;
 

Shiny Spoink

Soul Trainer
its great!!!I usually hate stories but that story was actually worth reading (probably because it was about pokemon). I just think it could use a little more humor.
 

Faerie

MONS
Again, thanks a lot for the input. ^__^ The next chapter is almost finished, so expect it up by Friday at the latest.
 

Shiny Spoink

Soul Trainer
yay!(10 more characters)
 

Faerie

MONS
News. How amazing. [/sarcasm]

PROGRESS UPDATE: Wewt. Chapter 2 is coming along smoothly, and I think I'm about halfway done with it. It's going to be a heck of a lot longer than Chapter 1, which was almost 3 pages on paper, but was barely over 1 on Word. Go figure. Guess the computer is rather picky when it comes to typing up things. :rolleyes: Anyways, the second chapter will cover two or three events, most likely spread out over the course of...Oh, I don't know, seven pages or so. You can bet, though, that this chapter will be completley different than the other chapter, in all terms. Not only will we be learning several new things about familiar characters and meeting new ones, but as new plot twists unravel, new mysteries yet to be solved reveal themselves!
...God, this sounds like a book review. xD
 

Shiny Spoink

Soul Trainer
(to self) please have humor please have humor please have humor...
 

Shiny Spoink

Soul Trainer
good(need 10 letters...um...why not!capture a wynaut!)
 

Faerie

MONS
Chapter 2 Almost Done...

PROGRESS UPDATE: Still workin' hard on Chapter 2. Sadly, it won't be up today (Friday) as promised, but it will be up on either Saturday or Sunday, you have my word. ;) Additionally, I'm trying to decide on a better name for the second chapter. I might use the one I currently have (Laugh While you Can), but I'm pretty sure a better one will come to me. Eventually. Coming up with names is harder than it looks...;__; Meh. Chapter 2 will have several more genre-elements than Chapter 1, which pretty much focused on introducing the main characters. Chapter 2 introduces you to Umi a little more thuroughly, and Chapter 3/4 will center around Rosoku.
 

Shiny Spoink

Soul Trainer
will there be wynauts singing the wynaut song?
 

Typhlogirl

keep battling on!
WOOT.

Team Magma and Aqua!!! YAYNESS!!! *dances*

There should be more fics about deez two. ANYWAY. Sounds very good so far. Well written. I am looking forward to more of this fic!! ^_^

- ;157;
 

Quackerdrill

say yes to love
Good start, though I have my gripes:

-Sorta short, but I am not exactly one to say that, am I?

-The two of them bonded... um, pretty fast. Kinda unrealistic, but it definitely helps move the story along. XD

-Wish that there was a tad bit more insight on the character's minds, I would have liked to hear what was going on in there. I mean, you have a ton of stuff about the situation going on (i.e. not giving away that he's Magma-fied)but it would have been interesting to hear their thoughts about each other, ya know?

Otherwise, I liked the characters and the overall flow. I am definitely looking forward to reading some more! Don't worry, I'm not rushing you! XD
 

Faerie

MONS
Chapter 2 and Some News!

:D Thanks for the input, guys. xD And you don't have to worry about rushing me for more, because Chapter Two's already finished. xDD So, I'll just get on with it and post the next chapter! And yeah, I changed the name...
NOTE: I will be gone for six days, until Saturday or Sunday of next week, and I expect to get the third chapter done by then. So here's the next chappy:

Love and Loyalty

Chapter II: Painful Discoveries (PG)​

Umi sighed boredly, drumming her fingers on the table she sat at. Ever since she had been accepted as a grunt leader of Team Aqua, her job had gotten more and more tedious. The war between them and Team Magma had rapidly become worse; this meant more missions for the admins and the SSS--and, consiquently, less and less for her and the other Grunt Leaders.

She opened her eyes, just wide enough to see the screen in front of her, Still nothing. Umi knew well that her chance of survival was significantly lower while on a mission, expecially since she was only at the second rank...Still, she would like to be on missions more often than she already was.

"Hey, Umi," a familiar voice called, "Come see this!"

Umi turned around to see Ame, her brother, waving to her from his seat across the room. He was grinning broadly, clearly in a very good mood. "Check this, Umi," he called again. "It's hilarious!"

She walked over to him, wondering why he was in such high spirits on a dull day like this one. Ame, seeing her expression, laughed and brandished a sheet of paper in her face. "See this?" he asked happily.

Umi squinted at the paper, wondering how he could expect her to read text on a moving target. "Bannai? You mean the guy Izumi took on at the Weather Institute? What about 'im?"

Ame stopped waving the paper, however maintaining his grin. "Well, it turns out the person he disguised as to sneak in to the Institute was a woman. Crazy, I know, but completley true!

"As if that wasn't enough," he continued, "Both of the information discs were fake, so he got about as much of the information as anyone: none."

Umi unsucsessfully tried to hide a snicker. "Is that the best they can do? Honestly, Team Magma is going awfully low nowadays."

Ame nodded in agreement, now smiling so widely that Umi could almost count his teeth. Today was turning out not to be as bad as it had started.

Suddenly Umi noticed someone standing behind her. She whirled around, and when she noticed who it was, reddened with embarrasment. "Oh! Sh-Shizuku-san! You're back already?"

"Well, I'm standing right here, so you'd think I would be," Shizuku commented airily, taking the paper from Ame withought cracking a smile. "What's this we have here? Something about that Bannai idiot?" Now he looked up at Ame, clearly amused. "When did you find this out?"

Ame inclined his head to one of the highest-ranking members of the Team. "Just about an hour ago, sir."

Shizuku handed the paper back to Ame, who took it shakily. "This is great! I sure picked the wrong day to be gone." And with that, Shizuku turned and walked away.

Umi worriedly turned to her brother. "Did you see that? Shizuku-san's pant leg was ripped, and he was limping. Are you sure he's..." she trailed off nervously.

Ame shrugged it off lightly. "You worry too much, sis. He didn't look to badly injured; besides, he's one of the SSS trio. There's nothing to get into such a tizzy about."

Umi agreed reluctantly and walked slowly back to her chair. As she sat down, she wondered if, maybe, Ame was mistaken. With the war at hand, Team Aqua needed all the fighters possible. If Shizuku wasn't able to recover fully by the next battle, the results could be disastrous.

Still, she thought, Team Magma had no more data on the two Titans than they'd had months before. In that sense, we're still in the lead.

Additionally, the SSS trio was a force to be reckoned with. Shizuku was able to keep a cool head in almost any situation, making him a skilled fighter and schemer. Izumi had very strong legs, enabling her to jump great heights and deal powerful kicks. Ushio specialized in arm strength, and so accordingly had deadly throwing aim. With these three on their side, victory wasn't just a remote possibility.

Now feeling more confident, Umi let her mind wander. Naturally, the memory of the Festival floated back to her. I wonder if I'll be able to see Rosoku again, she thought. It's not like it'll be any time soon, but it would really be nice just to talk to him one more time...

* * *​

The next day, Umi's worries had returned. Shizuku really had been in bad shape yesterday, and she was sure something terrible would come of it...

Suddenly she remembered something. Wait a minute, she thought. Wasn't I supposed to go on a mission today? Oh, that's right; Ushio had found out about the use of some sort of scanner, and we were going to retrieve it from an old shipwreck.

At that moment, Umi heard voices coming from the hallway.

"Are you sure it's a good idea to follow through with this withought Shizuku?" a female voice asked.

"Don't worry," another voice replied, which was clearly a male's. "It is likely that you'll run into Team Magma while you're there, but there's no doubt that you, some admins and a few grunt leaders can handle 'em."

The woman sighed. "Yes...But if they know about the Scanner, they'll know we're also after it; that means they will obviously send two of the Fireheads to retrieve it. We can't have any more serious injuries; with the war going on, it's too dangerous of a risk to take."

"Well, at least one of the three of us has to be at the hideout unless there is an absolute emergency, and Shizuki still hasn't woken up, so my going is out of the question. Besides, we've kept the information as confidential as possible; not even the admins know about it."

"I suppose you're right. Still, if the Scanner works, we will obtain the Red Orb soon. What if Shizuku hasn't woken up by then...?"

"It will take a while for the orbs to reveal themselves. Doubtless Shizuku'll have woken up by then. Besides, he's only been in this coma--or whatever it is--for a day," the male replied. Then he added slyly, "You really have too much of a sort spot for him."

"Oh, just shut up!" cried the woman's voice, causing the other person to erupt with laughter.

The female cleared her throat indignantly. "Anyway, you do have a point. There is nothing to get so worried over."

After that, there was silence. Umi reflected on what she had just heard: Did something happen to Shizuku? Had he collapsed like they said? Did the Scanner have something to do with the Orbs? Her mind was reeling.

Suddenly she realized that she had been overhearing two of the SSS trio, Izumi and Ushio. It was strictly against the Team's code of conduct to eavesdrop on those higher-ranking than you; what would happen to her if someone found out?
 
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