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Lugia's Curse

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Rubika

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Introduction

It began when humans and pokemon were in harmony, and each respected others. But one was very different. His name was Kaguto. He dis-liked pokemon very much, and was a fairly good 'wizard'. He did, though have a Lugia, which he adored very truly. He knew that Lugia, was very, in it's way, powerful. So he set aside a quest for him and Lugia. "Lugia," He paused. "My dearest friend, when all inferior pokemon shall die I will come for you," Kaguto assured his friend. He took a stone and made a collar with a pendant, which was the stone. It brilliantly shone on Lugia's neck. But Kaguto never came back, for a few years later he was sent to jail for 'hatred talk of pokemon with civilians'. Kaguto soon escaped, but.. Let's just say, the next morning a body was found in the hidden woods of pokemon.

Many decades later, Lugia awoke from a deep sleep by children. He growled, for he did not like children, especially young ones. Where is Kaguto!? He quietly hissed in a hazy whisper. But the children cheered away. Lugia flew away, creating 'The Winds of Death'. Many innocent ones died, and thousands of pokemon were injured. A few teenagers, which had seen Kaguto and Lugia as toddlers, were determined to find out what happened, from beggining to end. They were ready. They didn't know how, but they would, could, show Lugia, what was happening.

And now, they were set; six pokeballs, two-thousand pokedollars, a potion, and a best friend.
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Your starter can be any basic pokemon, any starter pokemon, but it can't be basic ones that don't evolve(such as Absol), got it?

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Name: Karli
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Personality: Shy, calm, and creative.
Description: Fairly tall, thin, shiny red hair, denim jeans, and a red t-shirt.
Starter: Vulpix, Vixen, lv.5, Female.
Other: None.
 
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flygonrulz

Don't leave me!
Sound interesting but needs to be longer. Needs how they can do it and other stuff. Plus in the sign ups you sorta forgot the first thing...name.
 

RaZoR LeAf

Night Terror
Rubika said:
Introduction

It began when humans and pokemon were in harmony, and each respected others.

When was that then? Last week? Or 40 thousand years ago?

But one was very different. His name was Kaguto. He dis-liked pokemon very much, and was a fairly good 'wizard'. He did, though have a Lugia, which he adored very truly. He knew that Lugia, was very, in it's way, powerful.

That last sentence is worded very badly. Maybe you should make your mind up about this guy. He's a good wizard who hates pokemon but likes one pokemon. Contradictory much?

So he set aside a quest for him and Lugia. "Lugia," He paused. "My dearest friend, when all inferior pokemon shall die I will come for you," Kaguto assured his friend.

Start a new line when someone is speaking.

He took a stone and made a collar with a pendant, which was the stone. It brilliantly shone on Lugia's neck.

Badly worded again.

But Kaguto never came back, for a few years later he was sent to jail for 'hatred talk of pokemon with civilians'.

OK, so jail means that it's in fairly recent times, not in the medieval past, a place that a wizard would be more suited to.

Kaguto soon escaped, but.. Let's just say, the next morning a body was found in the hidden woods of pokemon.

How did he escape? Was it his body? Was he killed? Suicide? Unidentifiable?

Many decades later, Lugia awoke from a deep sleep by children. He growled, for he did not like children, especially young ones.

Lugia went to sleep? When? Why? Why was he woken by children?

Where is Kaguto!? He quietly hissed in a hazy whisper. But the children cheered away.

The children did what now?

Lugia flew away, creating 'The Winds of Death'. Many innocent ones died, and thousands of pokemon were injured.

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A few teenagers, which had seen Kaguto and Lugia as toddlers, were determined to find out what happened, from beggining to end.

Funny time scale you go going on here. They saw Kagato and Lugia as toddlers, then Lugia went to sleep, then Lugia woke up many decades later (as you said), and those toddlers came out os suspended animation having barely aged 1 decade read to confront Lugia.

And now, they were set; six pokeballs, two-thousand pokedollars, a potion, and a best friend.

Where'd they get the money from? Though I suppose if they can afford to be put into stasis to remain teenagers for 50 or so years, they can afford to take that much cash with them.

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Gender:
Personality:
Description:
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Name: ?

Age: 14
Gender: Female
Personality: Shy, calm, and creative.
Description: Fairly tall, thin, shiny red hair, denim jeans, and a red t-shirt.
Starter: Vulpix, Vixen, lv.5, Female.
Other: None.

This form is breaking the forum rules.

Please correct your RPG and answer all my questions, by editing them into your first post AND replying to it. If it's not fixed or reaches a higher standard then it will be closed.
 
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Rubika

Guest
I'm busy now. By the looks of it, it's not active. Might as well close it.
 

RaZoR LeAf

Night Terror
If I close it, then you must sumit your next RPG to a mod, preferably me. You also only posted it today. Not active? Try waiting a bit, so that people can actually see the topic.
 
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