Machonix

[DreadSkaterxx]

me and my friend are...........so-so spriters and every once in a while we have our own little spritin contests. well we had one and we cant decide whos is better. so please judge.
Mine
http://img470.imageshack.us/img470/1323/steelgonchamp1sj.png

His
http://img478.imageshack.us/img478/6386/steelflychamp6ff.png
Rate them from 1-10 please and give us some advice if you wish to share it.

 

[Leon]

I'd give yours 7.5 and His 6.5, as yours looks sorta unfinushed, because you could put machamps lower arms instead of steelix' lower spikes.
Yur friends is OK, but machamps top right arm is missing a bit and steelixs head is wierdly placed.
But all in all a promising start from both of you!

 

[PureFyre]

Both are ok. But they aren't great. I'd say his is better, but not by much. Keep working and you'll be kick-***!

 

[dragonfangirl]

There are both okay. but your friend sprite is the shading a little bit messed up.