Madness

[Magical Trevor]

sigh* a new comic for you al to crit at. I won't to make a good comic for once. Well this is about a few of my bids (and me) who all live together and it's chaos. Well as you all know my stupid computer has forgotten how to do comma's so there will be a few wramer mistakes. And i'm sorry if there is any spelling mistakes (i type way to fast) Yeah and since the spriters resource has crashed it'll have to be normal backrounds. anyway here. Oh and PLEASE POST!!!!!

Bios:
http://i1.*******.com/oaaper.png
Northerners coming soon

Comics:
http://i1.*******.com/oabtio.png: Mutten's little brother's hat
http://i1.*******.com/oaar7a.png: Muttens real hair
http://i1.*******.com/oabsx4.png: Maxxa's new job
http://i1.*******.com/oan635.png: Only trying to tell him the movie
http://i1.*******.com/ofawp3.png The striper contest
http://i1.*******.com/oftzq1.png What we do on Mutten's birthday
http://i1.*******.com/ogyycl.png Don't F**k with Mutten's heart
http://i2.*******.com/orhvyq.png Life is good!

Current Episode:
http://i2.*******.com/orhvyq.png

 

[Controller of Flames]

Learn to spell! Oh wait you might not understand that so...

Lern too speel!

(See thats how you spell in your comic sometimes it's quite annoying)

 

[Magical Trevor]

Learn to spell! Oh wait you might not understand that so...

Lern too speel!

(See thats how you spell in your comic sometimes it's quite annoying)

yeah i'm sorry I'lll try and type slower

EDIT: new episode http://i1.*******.com/ofawp3.png

 

[Mirage knight]

Its good, But if you use that site i gave you to get backgrounds they might look better, can i just ask a question. You said you were makeing mirage, and a few other characters, what did you mean.

 

[Magical Trevor]

Its good, But if you use that site i gave you to get backgrounds they might look better, can i just ask a question. You said you were makeing mirage, and a few other characters, what did you mean.

I said I was drawing mirage for fun. Oh and I might stick with thiso ne because I couldn't find backround the right size for over worlds

 

[ForeverFlame]

This reminds me of PokeChow somehow. Hmmm...
Anyway, I prefer this even more than all of your other comics put together. You officially broke the record for the most comics, too, I'm sure.
I really like the humor, and the PG-13ness of it all. A really nice change!

 

[Magical Trevor]

This reminds me of PokeChow somehow. Hmmm...
Anyway, I prefer this even more than all of your other comics put together. You officially broke the record for the most comics, too, I'm sure.
I really like the humor, and the PG-13ness of it all. A really nice change!

yeah i know i loose intrset in alot but I really enjoy doing this one so it'll live longer then most of my comics. Well I think there might be anouther one up tonight. Oh and thanks forever flame it reall ymake sme feel happy

 

[Magical Trevor]

well i'm sure you'll all love this Episode http://i1.*******.com/ogyycl.png

 

[maxxa]

here mutten m8 u asked for the trainers

and i slightly edited the names

 

[Neopolis]

well i'm sure you'll all love this Episode http://i1.*******.com/ogyycl.png

You're sure? Well, you got it wrong... Most of the shading looks wrong, and for some reason the sun is triangular. And last but not least, spelling and grammar needs work. Don't you give me that 'but i'm not english!!", because I'm not English either. Oh yeah, and the jokes aren't funny either.

(By the way, they actually censor 'Don't funk with my heart' in certain countries.)

 

[Magical Trevor]

new EP http://i2.*******.com/orhvyq.png

 

[The first Buizeru]

Are you even GOING to reply to Neopolis's C+C? I like the comic, the new Ep is quite cool

 

[Neopolis]

Are you even GOING to reply to Neopolis's C+C? I like the comic, the new Ep is quite cool

Maybe I should try a different tactic.

OMG THIS COMIC RULEZZZZ

Anyway, the new comic was strange. Alcohol jokes are not funny. Are you even old enough for alcohol? That's some serious stuff.

 

[Mutten jr]

Maybe I should try a different tactic.

OMG THIS COMIC RULEZZZZ

Anyway, the new comic was strange. Alcohol jokes are not funny. Are you even old enough for alcohol? That's some serious stuff.

well duh NO! it's just a character he made up for a comic and named it the same name as his User name

 

[Dafearo(svensk)]

Crits ahoy!

Bg: Too large related to the characters, 2-tone and there's too few of them...

Plot: Too random!!!

Humor: Too much sex and alcohol.... I'm serious, they aren't funny!

Characters: Atleast you made custom characters.... Though they're overworlds which the background isn't....

Picky things:

The "Muttens secret" joke: u should use that joke later in the comic since it's not funny until then(not HA-HA funny, but Hm-Hm funny.).

The strip joke: Wow, they're having a strip bar AT HOME(sarcasm.....)! And shouldn't they atleast take they're hat off?(No wonder the girls don't like them....)

 

[The first Buizeru]

Crits ahoy!

Bg: Too large related to the characters, 2-tone and there's too few of them...

Plot: Too random!!!

Humor: Too much sex and alcohol.... I'm serious, they aren't funny!

Characters: Atleast you made custom characters.... Though they're overworlds which the background isn't....

Picky things:

The "Muttens secret" joke: u should use that joke later in the comic since it's not funny until then(not HA-HA funny, but Hm-Hm funny.).

The strip joke: Wow, they're having a strip bar AT HOME(sarcasm.....)! And shouldn't they atleast take they're hat off?(No wonder the girls don't like them....)

I guess your right, but, I still like it!

 

[Neopolis]

well duh NO! it's just a character he made up for a comic and named it the same name as his User name

I'm not saying that. I 'm saying he doesn't know how serious alcohol is. It's not something to make fun off.

 

[Magical Trevor]

I now how serios it is I just use it for a few jokes

 

[Neopolis]

Thank you for illustrating my point so effectively.

 

[Mastercougar]

I would say, smush the panels together and remove all that extra white. It may be hard to notice in a hyperlink, but look at how your current comic looks on the main page.