Okay ... here we go.
- It's too wide, or at least it is at 600 x 800 resolution. Bring the menu + content in more.
- You have Text as your Website Title. Try making a nice Banner for it instead.
- Get rid of the Red (Contrasts too much), Yellow (too distracting), and pure Blue (too dark against the blue background) text on the main page. Try using the Light Blue seen on " Home " for the Headers (change " Welcome "''s color to that and White for your page's body text.
- Add more Content to your front page to make it more exciting and catch the viewer's attention. Maybe you should try explaining what projects your website offers right on the front in a blurb or paragraph, add some graphics, or even some news updates.
This Page: http://sites.google.com/site/mastercspaperwork/home/links-fourms
I'll just post an example of what you should do instead of trying to explain it. Change all the links on the page to something like this:
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<a href="http://www.serebiiforums.com/member.php?u=109407" target="blank">Serebii Forums</a>
The page looks kind of empty otherwise. Maybe you can add some images at best or even a description (a few sentences) of what each of those websites are and why you like them enough to link to them.
This Page: http://sites.google.com/site/master...me-the-desk-of-hardest-working-captain-espada
Is almost exactly the same as your Homepage. Since it looks a little better then what you have maybe you should use that page as your home page and make some of the changes I listed above.
This Page: http://sites.google.com/site/mastercspaperwork/bleach-club-gts/sprites-banners-icons
Put the sprites in a Table if you could so they have even spacing.
To add more content to the page and make it look more " Full " maybe you should add a description of what each sprite is and who you might have made it for.
This Page: http://sites.google.com/site/mastercspaperwork/claims-groups
" Serebii " is spelled wrong. I guess the rest is fine except minor formatting issues.
This Page: http://sites.google.com/site/mastercspaperwork/fan-fictions
You list Three Fanfics but only have two links on the list. I see the third but it'd be very easy for someone just glancing to miss.
For this page you should really include a summary of the Fanfics. The user for your sight would want to know what they're reading before they click on the link.
This Page: http://sites.google.com/site/mastercspaperwork/fan-fictions/kon-s-revenge
I'm not going to critique your actual fanfic because this is the wrong place for that. I'll just help you format it better so it's easier to read. People who read / review a lot of fanfics will criticize even a good fanfic if its hard for them to read.
Remove " Kon's Revenge! " from the White Text in the body of the page since the same thing is said in the page's title (it's redundant).
Chapter1: Plan In action!
Bold " Chapter 1 ". The title should read " Plan in Action ".
Whenever you skip down to the next link (press Enter) while writing skip two spaces. Skipping complete lines to separate your dialogue and paragraphs makes a story easier to read and eliminates the " wall of text " effect that may be unappealing for readers.
This Page: http://sites.google.com/site/mastercspaperwork/las-noches-forum
It's blank. I know, but you should probably include a link to Las Noches Forum on this page in case they don't see it on your Links Page. Not everyone who goes to a site takes the time to look through every single page to find what they want.
This Page: http://sites.google.com/site/mastercspaperwork/system/app/pages/sitemap/hierarchy
It's a site map. Your site doesn't need a site map yet because it's so small. It only took me 10 minutes to look through your entire site.
Overall you should just keep working at it and add more interesting content to want to make users come back again and again. Good Luck.