Manafi Sprite!

[Justineer]

I admit it... It isn't very good at all. It's kind of bigger than it should be, I'm lazy so I didn't completely recolor the borders, it doesn't have a dynamic pose, and originally I saved it on Paint, so it's more screwed up than it needs to be. It's my first sprite, so advice is very welcome.

 

[Char1016]

It is good but not that good, you may make it a little smaller. Very big hands.
5/10.

 

[Torchic23]

Much work is needed O.O

Like fidani said, the arms are a little too big. I t seems a little too flat and a little too dull, it needs a lot of work

 

[Magical Trevor]

That isn't even a sprte. That's just a drawing on MS paint ad the JPG make sit worse. You defently need work on your sprites

 

[Justineer]

Yeah, I know. It is my first sprite ever. I'll take that advice. ANy more?

 

[Cursed]

Well, *surpresses maniacal ranting* it's custom, at least.

 

[Justineer]

How should I save my sprites so their quality is best?

 

[ellie]

Save it as PNG.

Getting past the JPEG-ness, the first thing wrong is that it's mirror-flipped with the left side made a little longer. The pose is much too stiff. The arms and head things are different lenghts. The "feet" aren't meant to be so dynamic, they're more supposed to look like little lumps that could be feet. And the whole thing is unshaded/

Overall, you have potential, but you need to work on it quite a bit.

 

[KirbyXD]

It is good but not that good, you may make it a little smaller. Very big hands.
5/10.

You can't rate a sprite using numbers. It's banned.

On topic: That's not a sprite, arms too big, and save it as PNG. These things have already been told to you but just a reminder. It doesn't have any shading either.

 

[Justineer]

Save it as PNG.

Getting past the JPEG-ness, the first thing wrong is that it's mirror-flipped with the left side made a little longer. The pose is much too stiff. The arms and head things are different lenghts. The "feet" aren't meant to be so dynamic, they're more supposed to look like little lumps that could be feet. And the whole thing is unshaded/

Overall, you have potential, but you need to work on it quite a bit.

If your saying I made one half and flipped it, no I didn't. Thanks for the advice and telling me what format to use.