Manafi

[PureFyre]

Marafi. I like it, but not that much anymore. After seeing the Marafi sprited by Waterluner I realized how crappy mine was. Waterlunar if you check this thread out please, give me some tips and tricks!

 

[waterlunar]

Um, 1st I have to say Im a he, not she -.-; quote my title next to the avatar x.x

The eyes first of all should be more circular, it looks very cubic...o.0 The "ribbons" should be clearer and thicher, also try having them not attaching to each other. Dittering isnt a good way to shade this sprite, due to that it is small and its smooth since it is water-ish. The rock on the body is good, and the shading is fair, just fix what I said =)

 

[PureFyre]

Ah! I'm sorry >.<;

Ok, I'll work on that.

 

[maxxa]

here is my manafi sprite what do you think?

 

[-:Buro-kun Tsubasa:-]

It really, really good! It just looks a bit lumpy, give it a re-shade and a clearer outline and It'll be even better!

 

[maxxa]

ok whos is that mine or purefyres?
i kind of think purefyres is quite choppy it has random black dots on the outline make it all colour and at some points it has no colours at all (the outline)

 

[Aqua_Charlie]

Maxxa, do you know how rude it is posting your sprite in someone elses thread and saying its better then theres? its also against the rules. ¬¬

 

[Black Marauder]

Apparently, he doesn't... Anyways, I suggest you go with what waterlunar said, HE is a good spriter.

 

[maxxa]

yh waterlunar rocks ( coronis beats him by a margin sorry)

 

[PureFyre]

Maxxa please remove your sprite from my thread. if you would liek to showcase yours, pleae make your ownthread. -.-;