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Manafi

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KirbyXD

Good Night!
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I made a Manafi sprite cuz' I was bored. It's not the best sprite. Please use constructive criticism. I know the head looks weird and the little antenna things look weird too.
 
N

Naetoru & Stitch

Sending out an S.O.S
Looks Good!
 
K

KirbyXD

Good Night!
Thanks for not ignoring my thread. Most people just look at it and don't post. Is there anything you like/disliked about it?
 
U

Untitled

I'm a Guy FYI
i like it alot.....since the new pokemon has came out everyone has gone manafi crazy!!
 
M

Mimori Kiryu

Well-Known Member
I really think the style you did it in is adorable ^^ I really like your Manafi/Manaphy. ^_^
 
E

Electrode

< give me my hands
your wright it is wierd it's good though the head seems too squashed and the anteana are fine so you dont need to worry about them
 
J

JuicyPaperclip

<!Seizure Enducing!>
Love your sprite and love Manafi!! Definately one ill raise!! I also hope that the new sprites are the three starters!!!!
 
D

Dewgong

Ace Trainer
The shading is all right and so is the color selection. The main problems of the sprite are mostly the outlining. There is black in a lot of random places on the sprite so you might want to balance the black outline by putting in at the farthest right side of the lines. You may also want another color for the outline, a lighter color. I don’t like its head piece much. The bottom ball is better off with an outline on it, not just one color as the shade. There is also something on its right eye that bothers me also. On its right circle the darkest shade is covering it. You can fix that by putting the lightest shade of yellow on the northwest side and the darkest shade near the lightest one. Also, shouldn’t the head be onion shaped? Overall it’s a god sprite but you there are lots of errors that you need to work on.
 
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Pichuscute^-^

Guest
I think that is a split fin, but it`s supposed to look like that. I think that is awesome!!! I`ll give it 9.99999999999999999...etc or 10 out of 10. Keep it up.
 
E

Electrode

< give me my hands
Pichuscute^-^ said:
I think that is a split fin, but it`s supposed to look like that. I think that is awesome!!! I`ll give it 9.99999999999999999...etc or 10 out of 10. Keep it up.
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anyway it's coming along nicly but its anteanna is now very wierd with the differn't head (>_>). The anteanna I just relized that your anteanna top on our right is on couler fix it please that throws the whole sprite off so your comic along with it just listen to what people say and it'll be perfect ;)
 
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