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Ejunknown

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Yep, you heard right. Manga/Anime. Since I've started learning to draw anime and used a Manga book for help. I'm odd like that. XD

I'm new at this. I've created a few other images, but they are in my sketch book and can't be scanned in without them being taken /out/ of my sketch book, which I don't really want to do. They will be scanned in later though, with my other images.

Constructive critism preferred, I'm not that good and am still learning, so I need all the help I can get. Xp Flames will hurt my feelings. Thanks. :)

Click here for it. :D

Yeah, I posted the image and it stretched the page severly. >.>;; So click the link. XD

If the link doesn't work, click on the link to my Deviant art account in my sig and click the latest deviation. Thank! XD
 
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henzy

DERKA DERKA
Ejunknown said:
o_o It does? D; Let me fix it...

Edit: Fixed it, and clicked on it and it worked. Fingers crossed. Xp
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Bah! Link is still broken, but I'll get on my DA account and look at it...seeing as you have begun to stalk my page. =3 I thank you for that! <3

Critique: The eyes are very nice, but you may need to make the nose and mouth bigger so the face is more anatomically correct.

The shoulders are a bit small, and you may need to add more detail to the hair.
Other than that its very nice for your first try. Better than I was when I first began drawing anime. My characters had no shoulders! XD
 
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Ejunknown

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XD I love that picture of Archie, what can I say. XDDD Your welcome. :D

Link is STILL broken? DDDDD: Ok, I'm just gonna edit it with "If the link doesn't work, click on the link to my Deviant art account in my sig and click the latest deviation". Xp

Thanks! :D Yeah, I managed to get them in the right place, but not the right size... I will have to borrow that book from my freind again. XD I have no idea how big to put the shoulders. I just put them there to make the image look more complete. :x Will also have to find that out... XD

Thanks for the help! :D <333

XD Rated myself 3 star for average. XD
 
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henzy

DERKA DERKA
Ejunknown said:
XD I love that picture of Archie, what can I say. XDDD Your welcome. :D

Link is STILL broken? DDDDD: Ok, I'm just gonna edit it with "If the link doesn't work, click on the link to my Deviant art account in my sig and click the latest deviation". Xp

Thanks! :D Yeah, I managed to get them in the right place, but not the right size... I will have to borrow that book from my freind again. XD I have no idea how big to put the shoulders. I just put them there to make the image look more complete. :x Will also have to find that out... XD

Thanks for the help! :D <333

XD Rated myself 3 star for average. XD
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No problem! If you want more helpful critiques just ask me anytime!
.... Maybe I'll draw you another Archie picture without his bandanna... just because I'm nice. =3
 
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Spookz

Lumos
The eyes are probably the best part, though they're far apart. I noticed there were no ears, which is kind of strange. xD Experiment with some shading too, it's amazing what a bit of shading can do to a picture. That's all I see aside from some things Henzy mentioned. Keep working on it, it's very good for a beginner!
 
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Ejunknown

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>.>;; I hate drawng ears so I tried to put the hair in front so it would cover them. XD Thanks! I've found out more about the proportions of the face, so the next one I post should be better. :D I'll try shading when I color it, which I might start today and fix the mistakes if I can while I'm at it. :D Thanks again! :D *hugs*
 
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