Manga Cover Progress Thread

[Clockworkz]

The progress thread for my Manga book cover.
Comments, crits welcome.

The original sketch: Here

It became a great piece of lineart.

Several miscellaneous fixes were made, and coloring experiments were done. Francine's base color, as well as hair and eye CGing were completed just tonight. I was surprised how good her hair came out. Her total shading (as well as everyone else's base color) are yet to come. Lookie

I'l update this as more progress is made.
EDIT: Thanks for caring!!!!!! </sarcasm>

 

[Clockworkz]

CGing on Francine has begun. Head, right arm/hand finshed, as well as collar areas and chest.

 

[Uber peanut]

The forearms on the man holding the gun should not be more muscled than his biceps\triceps. It makes his arms look very unrealistic. The folds in their clothing are very well done. Nice job on that.

The man in the coat looks cool, though his wrist seems a bit too thick.
The woman's weapon in her left hand has the handle placed differently than it should be. The handle should by in perfect allignment with the blade. (unless you chose to draw it that way; in that case, disregard what I said.)

The coloring is very nice, but more shading is needed.
All in all, a very nice picture. I can't wait to see it fully colored.