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Master Spriters Sprite Comic Thread! Weeeeeee!

How good are my comics

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M

Master Spriter

Guest
Latest News: Issues four and five now in! Sorry for the delay, I've had little time to do them. I also increased the box size because it looks better, and I can get more characters and text in. I left Issue four the same, so I didn't have to redo the backround and all.
I shall update this post when I do more. Keep an eye on it.
Issue's one and two
Issue three
Issue's four and five
Hope ya like!
Oh, and please be aware that some of the votes above were made for a previous, more Pokemon based comic that I did, which WAS really bad.
 
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M

Master Spriter

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Where the hell IS everyone!? Don't they even care!? *sob* If you look, please could you say something!? At least one person, dammit!!
 
M

Master Spriter

Guest
I was hoping for a bit more than that, but its pleasent, nevertheless. Thanx.
 
B

Beco

Beware...
Good start, it could become a great comic.
 
E

Electrode Destroyer

Guest
Not very good. I can't really comment on it, but I don't think this one will be good if you continue it still.
 
Y

Yumi Yuko

Guest
...it's okay...I guess...
 
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B

Blueray

Wario = PWN
It's... It's....
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1.You gave no information to why you have every legendarie pokemon that has an overworld sprite...
2.Why was brendan in the desert?
3.It looks like a copy of A town called litteroot but with sonic/you as the author.
4.It's... badly made... the sonic sprites aren't well shaded.
I'll think of more later...
 
M

Master Spriter

Guest
I worked hard on those Sonic sprites, so don't diss em'! I'd like to see you do better. Yeesh, give me a brake, I just started this. As if most people hating you at school wasn't enough.....................):
 
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Blueray

Wario = PWN
Master Spriter said:
I worked hard on those Sonic sprites, so don't diss em'! I'd like to see you do better. Yeesh, give me a brake, I just started this. As if most people hating you at school wasn't enough.....................):
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Hey I'm not dissing your comic. I'm giving things that you could work on. And you got it easy. You have the least amount of things wrong out of the comics I've done the problem listing time for! :D

Edit:
What's this about people hating me at school?
 
B

Blueray

Wario = PWN
Master Spriter said:
I meant ME, you prat!
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Then why did you put you? o.0
 
S

Solid Kirby

Back, I guess.
Master Spriter said:
Yeesh, give me a brake, I just started this. As if most people hating you at school wasn't enough.....................):
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BAD EXCUSE! *Attacks with swordfish*
Really, It needs work, Jokes, Unfunny. Sprites, Could do better. Plot? Absolutely none.

Look at some other comics for reference next time. >.>

Oh, and to answer the question, Blueray HAS done better. He's the author of Life Through Roboffet's Eyes. and several other comics. Next time think before you talk. >.>
 
S

Solid Kirby

Back, I guess.
How's about you be a little more SPECIFIC NEXT TIME?

And don't call me a ****. The only one who's stupid and incopitent here is you.
 
M

Master Spriter

Guest
*sighs* Everyone hates me now. And probably for good reason (in their eyes. If only they knew me better). If someone doesn't say something good about this soon I'll just give up and leave this thread to its own devices. Anyway, I'm planning to try to introduce Kirby into my comic (resulting in getting rid of the annoying '?' as hes currently called, but I could just refer to him as Brendan. Oh well. Comments?(such as 'I think you should/shouldn't add Kirby because...blah, blah blah blah, blaah blaaah, blabablaah...'
 
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Blueray

Wario = PWN
Devil Guardian Ganon said:
Blueray HAS done better. He's the author of Life Through Roboffet's Eyes.
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Right now LTRE is ind of a skeleton in the closet...
There are so many errors in that thing that I've almost given up on it...
but MS don't get so bummed out...
It's called constructive critiscism...
 
F

Fallen Angel

Guest
MS, they don't hate you. As Blueray said, it's 'constructive' critisism okay? Don't eat yourself up.
I don't think there's anything wrong with it personally, but I think you need to go into 'story mode' rather than mucking aound chasing after various nobodies. o_O Okay? Okay. Everyone's happy. LOLLIPOPS FOR EVERYONE! *starts raining various delicitable sweets* :p
And also, start off without all the legendaries. I think that would be better.
 
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