The obliverater
emerging hero
Ultimate Dojo
Episode one - The Beginning in the region of Sepal
It's about Jetixon finding the greatest of pokemon and Eorick also fufilling his dream and it got new moves new gym leaders the4th generation pokemon and new groups of people. It's not like I don't like a comment but tell me wether it's a good beginning.
“Yes I’m eleven today and that means I finally get my first pokemon,” cheered Jetixon as he got out of bed. Jetixon got changed and run downstairs to share the news.
“Mum why didn’t I go at the age of ten,” asked Jetixon curiously.
“Because you wanted to go on your journey with Eorick your friend remember,” replied Joanna (mum).
“Oh I better get him,” said Jetixon.
Jetixon runs out and finds Eorick also leaving his house.
“Well are you ready to be a trainer,” asked Jetixon.
“Yep! I sure am,” replied Eorick.
The two friends go to Prof. Bortick’s lab to get their pokemon.
“You’re in terrible luck, I’m in a good mood so you can have six each,” said the professor looking quite pleased.
“OK! I will have Treecko, Torchic, Cyndaquil, Totodile, Eevee and Tyrogue please,” said Jetixon.
“And I’ll have the others’” said Eorick boldly.
“Good and oh! I almost forgot both of you get poke-dexters,” said Prof. Bortick as he gave them strange devices. “They are machine pokemon encyclopaedias.”
Jetixon and Eorick come out of the lab to find their now and only arch rival and his two mates. Will they battle is the question we’re looking for.
sorry I haven't finished but I'm working on it.
Episode one - The Beginning in the region of Sepal
It's about Jetixon finding the greatest of pokemon and Eorick also fufilling his dream and it got new moves new gym leaders the4th generation pokemon and new groups of people. It's not like I don't like a comment but tell me wether it's a good beginning.
“Yes I’m eleven today and that means I finally get my first pokemon,” cheered Jetixon as he got out of bed. Jetixon got changed and run downstairs to share the news.
“Mum why didn’t I go at the age of ten,” asked Jetixon curiously.
“Because you wanted to go on your journey with Eorick your friend remember,” replied Joanna (mum).
“Oh I better get him,” said Jetixon.
Jetixon runs out and finds Eorick also leaving his house.
“Well are you ready to be a trainer,” asked Jetixon.
“Yep! I sure am,” replied Eorick.
The two friends go to Prof. Bortick’s lab to get their pokemon.
“You’re in terrible luck, I’m in a good mood so you can have six each,” said the professor looking quite pleased.
“OK! I will have Treecko, Torchic, Cyndaquil, Totodile, Eevee and Tyrogue please,” said Jetixon.
“And I’ll have the others’” said Eorick boldly.
“Good and oh! I almost forgot both of you get poke-dexters,” said Prof. Bortick as he gave them strange devices. “They are machine pokemon encyclopaedias.”
Jetixon and Eorick come out of the lab to find their now and only arch rival and his two mates. Will they battle is the question we’re looking for.
sorry I haven't finished but I'm working on it.
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