harryheart
Well-Known Member
Just have to clarify something someone said here.
Have you ever heard someone say, 'I feel your pain' its a rather common phrase to be honest. Its all to do with empathy, putting yourself in someone elses shoes and knowing how they feel. Or Roxanne, maybe has lost 2 pokemon in one day, therefore having past knowledge of what it felt like.
And don't use words you don't know the meanings of. That isn't an oxymoron, my above explanation renders any chance of it being 'a contradiction' (what it would be if I didn't point out the point on empathy) moot. An oxymoron is a phrase or couple of words which are complete opposites, Loving Hate, Peaceful War, Chaotic Order, Military Intelligence. You catch the drift.
The part you are referring to, without reading it myself, seems perfectly in order to me.
Thanks for clarifying that for everyone, as it was a phrase I heard at school that day so I thought that would work in the story.
I hope so too! This has the possibilty to be an amazing read that attracts a lot of people (which it is already! ). Keep up the good work!
Same here I really hope that it keeps attracting the readers even after the big plot twist. Thanks for the heads up, that has given me a boost of confidence.
Have you already thought of the stuff that would happen in Max's Hoenn Journey or some of it?
Yeah, I have planned out the entire story and the major chapters, the less important ones have a plan but not as in detail. The first 6 chapters have been planned thoroughly though! The order of his wins and Pokemon have been thought of, and surprisingly it is more difficult than one would first think.
Thanks for all your reviews. Keep them coming!