Hi Raymon
Firstly i would like to say how good this chapter was.
I am enjoying this water type tournement a lot. There are some really good battles going on. So Max was back in action in this chapter, Marshtomp vs Walrein. If im honest Max is incredibly lucky when it comes to tricky battles. Im not complaining, i must commend you on the most impressive strategy i have ever read. Glad to see them progress (max and marshtomp) and am looking forward to Barrys battle. Good work Raymon, continue as always.
Hi=)
Thanks!)Glad yu liked my strategy. Good luck to you, too)
Eh, hi ! Nice to meet you !
First of all, I have to admit, your story isn't bad (I took 2 hours to read it all through chapter 37) and I'm very interested ! I hope the next chapter air soon ! Oh and, by the way, I love how Marshtomp's development is doing, keep going !
I like your writing still, keep doing it as you're doing.
Hi!)Nice to meet you too!
Thanks for reading all of my story, I am happy I could interest you)My chapters don't air, it is not the Pokemon series (But I wish my fic would have been real. Eh, dreams...)Anyway, thank you very much
I don't have much time for a better review today, but this chapter was really good! I liked both battles, and the way Marshtomp learned Muddy Water was pretty original haha XD It's also awesome to see Blastoise
I have one question: By now has Ash traveled through Unova or not? I cant remember if you said it in a chapter before haha
Yeah, it was pretty original XD
Ash hasn't traveled through Unova yet. He just returned from Sinnoh League.
Hmm, this battle chapter seems a little shorter than the others but good all the same. It is good to see Marshtomp learn Muddy water, i would think that it is going to become Max's main battling Pokemon now with its epic moveset. As for recharging subject, i respect that your fic is hugely based on the anime but the anime doesn't always get stuff right and is easy to improve upon. Admittedly, it would seem strange having hydro cannon recharge after round 4 but not before so i wouldn't recommend changing it now unless you add it in in the previous chapters, but that could really change the flow, so its really just something to bear in mind for the future. Also, it would be good to see more scenes that aren't battles, like all the characters having a meal before a round or something - it would just be a nice change from battle after battle after battle. Anyway, on to the mistakes:
Yeah, it was a bit shorter, but it was still pretty large (5 pages A4 MW)
It is one of Max's strongest Pokemon at the moment, but it is so, because of my development of Marshtomp. I know the team Max will use in the league, and I will say, Marshtomp won't be his only powerhouse. And Swamert, if it evolves...I won't you tell whether or not it will happen
Well, moveset isn't that epic:
-Mud Shot
-Muddy Water
-Dynamicpunch
-Tackle
But it is pretty good
I will try to add some off-battle scenes. And thanks for pointing out the mistakes, need to correct them=)