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maxxas pichu pixel art
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Psychic
Really and truly
It's actually pretty good!
You captured the shape and pose very well, and the expression on the face looks just right.
The shading is also pretty good, but I think that three places need to be fixed; on the head where the shadow is, the shadow should be a bit more rounded- it should be a bit thicker on the left and to make it more round on the right side, take away a little bit. I don't think there should be a highlight on the tail- I don't think there is a way for the light to hit it properly, so either take away the highlight or make it a lot smaller. The last place is on the main body- the highlight shouldn't be that big, so trim a bit off on the right and bottom.
Other than that, it was very well-done. Keep up the great work!
~Psychic
You captured the shape and pose very well, and the expression on the face looks just right.
The shading is also pretty good, but I think that three places need to be fixed; on the head where the shadow is, the shadow should be a bit more rounded- it should be a bit thicker on the left and to make it more round on the right side, take away a little bit. I don't think there should be a highlight on the tail- I don't think there is a way for the light to hit it properly, so either take away the highlight or make it a lot smaller. The last place is on the main body- the highlight shouldn't be that big, so trim a bit off on the right and bottom.
Other than that, it was very well-done. Keep up the great work!
~Psychic
Kinginsoar
Advanced Spriter
ARE THESE SCRATCH?! Maxxa, you don't know how good at drawing you are! The Pichu has a perfect shape and is an excellent scratch, though the shading looks a little weird. The Buizeru is just excellent, nothing to say, period.
GREAT JOB!!!
GREAT JOB!!!
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you've gotten way better than ur first attempt, maxxa! I like that pichu pose.and the buizeru is reaalllyy well shaded
i suggest trying charizard.
you've gotten way better than ur first attempt, maxxa! I like that pichu pose.and the buizeru is reaalllyy well shaded
i suggest trying charizard.
Psychic
Really and truly
The Buizeru (normal pose) is also very good! It's very well done, though again, your shading needs some work;
on the leg on the left, the highlighted spot shout be smaller- once it's make smaller, move it over more to the left. Also make sure it stays tall and not too wide or you'll ruin the shape of the surface.
Once again, the shading on the head isn't really round enough- try to make it more rounded and more smooth, especially the shadow on the yellow muzzle (should go further to the left and a bit bigger). Also, some of the shadows on the head don't make sense- you have a shadow on the orange fur higher up, but it doesn't continue on the yellow fur! Watch out for that, as your shadows MUST remain constant.
Other than the shading, it's very good!
Nice job on the backsprite as well! But again, shading is a bit meh.
On the gold band around its neck the shading doesn't quite work out. On the second-lightest shade of yellow, the curve goes all weird. The lightest shade shouldn't go down so low, though it's long enough. Also, there should be a tad bit more highlights on the head. The highlight just above the eyes should be more round to show the shape of the Pokémon's head.
But again, other than those small shading problems, it was pretty good!
I suggest you read through my posts properly and try to edit the sprites. Though they're good, they could be better so I advise you try and edit their shading in the ways I suggested. Goodness knows they should look better!
Good luck, and again, keep up the good work!
~Psychic
on the leg on the left, the highlighted spot shout be smaller- once it's make smaller, move it over more to the left. Also make sure it stays tall and not too wide or you'll ruin the shape of the surface.
Once again, the shading on the head isn't really round enough- try to make it more rounded and more smooth, especially the shadow on the yellow muzzle (should go further to the left and a bit bigger). Also, some of the shadows on the head don't make sense- you have a shadow on the orange fur higher up, but it doesn't continue on the yellow fur! Watch out for that, as your shadows MUST remain constant.
Other than the shading, it's very good!
Nice job on the backsprite as well! But again, shading is a bit meh.
On the gold band around its neck the shading doesn't quite work out. On the second-lightest shade of yellow, the curve goes all weird. The lightest shade shouldn't go down so low, though it's long enough. Also, there should be a tad bit more highlights on the head. The highlight just above the eyes should be more round to show the shape of the Pokémon's head.
But again, other than those small shading problems, it was pretty good!
I suggest you read through my posts properly and try to edit the sprites. Though they're good, they could be better so I advise you try and edit their shading in the ways I suggested. Goodness knows they should look better!
Good luck, and again, keep up the good work!
~Psychic
Kinginsoar
Advanced Spriter
Is that scratch?! It's awesome! It has some nice colors, and looks very well done. Great job!maxxa said:i have now done a bouysel back sprite you like?
