May the Bike Rider (now with *BEWBS*)

[H.M]

Those are handle bars...with PROSPECTIVE!! or something. Shitty background also!!

and the flag is not comming out her butt thankyoueverymuch!

sorry for the white strip on the right, I misjudged the canvas size. :<<

 

[Magical Trevor]

The backround is neat. but the flag on the bike makes it ook wierd. But te rest is good

 

[Ho-oh Lover]

Oh I really like this one, like the sketchy-ness os shading

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[H.M]

Thank you for your comments so far.

 

[unownmew]

that looks pretty good. ^_^
the side of her face with the eye winking seems kind of out of proportion or something, and her, er, breasts, don't flow extremely well, or don't come down enough too look acurately proportioned... o.o;
And the arm closest to us widens out a bit too much, but otherwise, overall, a very cute, and pretty well done drawing. ^_^
I really like alot of your art. Please keep drawing, please.

(wow, one of my few posts with actual critiscism in it. o.o; and its not because the pic isn't as good as your others, its because I want you to improve)

 

[H.M]

that looks pretty good. ^_^
the side of her face with the eye winking seems kind of out of proportion or something, and her, er, breasts, don't flow extremely well, or don't come down enough too look acurately proportioned... o.o;
And the arm closest to us widens out a bit too much, but otherwise, overall, a very cute, and pretty well done drawing. ^_^
I really like alot of your art. Please keep drawing, please.

(wow, one of my few posts with actual critiscism in it. o.o; and its not because the pic isn't as good as your others, its because I want you to improve)

Nice to see ya again, Mew and thanks for the crit. The pic was done a bit quickly so some stuff are weirdly drawn (lol lopsided bewbs lol).

 

[unownmew]

Nice to see you too. And no problem.
well I think its drawn pretty well for being drawn quickly.

May I PM you again? (since the other one seems to have disappeared ^^; )

 

[H.M]

Nice to see you too. And no problem.
well I think its drawn pretty well for being drawn quickly.

May I PM you again? (since the other one seems to have disappeared ^^; )

Thanks, unfortunely, it's stuff like a 30 minutes crappy doodle/oekaki of May/Gardevoir's boobs would attract more attention then a 2 hour oekaki of somthing not from Pokemon....minus boobs.

As for PMs, go for it.

 

[unownmew]

XD, yeah, that's very true. but if I see art like that from you, I'd still comment, because you're a great artist, and my friend, and it's likely too look very good.

Ok, I shall. ^_^

 

[Jason Park]

It's pretty good, but you shouldn't make the flag like a triangle (unless it's made out of metal or something!). But good job!

 

[HB5squared]

I'm not an art expert but her breasts are uneven the right one looks like it is falling!

 

[Clockworkz]

I have the same complaint.
For oekaki... it's decent. Not great, not terrible. It's in that weird grey area of decent that's incredibly hard to classify.
The flag looks exuberantly out of place, her eyes are too big for her head, and the breasts are lopsided. Not to mention, I really don't like the lip action going on there. It doesn't fit. I'm seeing the face as an 18 to 20 year olds head on a 15 year old body, and that's freaking me out.
That's my bit. Work on it.

 

[H.M]

Heheh, thanks for your comments.

All I could say is, I didn't really like this oekaki much, so, it was really a quicky. :\

 

[Infinity]

What did I tell you about receiving comments on a particular *ahem* style of art? Eh, eh? Whatever you're getting crit anyway. The neck seems to be slightly unnaturally long. Her right arm needs a curve at the elbow. I can feel your angst in this pic. For being quick it's not bad, but I know you could do a hundred times better.

This is one of the times where I hate being right. Only you and IP should understand what I am saying.