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MD~Duoble G~(spoilers for some readers!)

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Jukain:)

Heart & Soul...
Got bored, made a comic.

This comic is about MD. If you've played beat murky cave in MD, you will know that gengar breaks the spell on gardevoir, but she loses her memory. This starts about a few weeks after that part, when they got to know each other again.

Here a the comics:
Episode one: The Truth
Episode 2: A Rude Facade

If you think I have somthing to improve on, tell me. What I mean is that instead of saying "Y()u $u(|<" acctuly tell me whats wrong.

Next comic will be: Tomorrow
 
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Sola

i dont feel so good.
Pretty cool. I love MD. The only problem I can realy find is the font changing. Maybe a different font would work better. Keep up the good work.
 
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Jukain:)

Heart & Soul...
thanks, the next ep will be tomorrow. I am glad that I chose the MD idea I had over my journy idea. XD I'll will try to keep the same font next time, too.
 
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Pramo270

Kiwii!
It's ok, you could make better effects tho...
 
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Raichu-chan

Derp
<3 You get cookies for having Gengar in your comic. He owns my soul. *throws every kind of cookie she can think of at the comic maker*

Buuuuuut....As much as I love Gengar and the potential of this comic, you could have put a little more effort into the effects.

Also, Gardevoir wouldn't know to ask Gengar about her past, because she doesn't remember him. I don't think Gengar would be able to confess to her that easily about who they really are either. =P Though most people tend to disagree with me, Gengar DOES have feelings. *everyone gasps :0*

See, you have to make the characters feel more....real. Think about what they would really do in their situation. Gengar would probably have a bit of trouble talking to Gardevoir, even though it's been several weeks since her curse had been lifted. He would probably feel really ashamed and guilty as he speaks to the psychic. Gardevoir would most likely be minding her own business, thinking about how she can't remember her past and what it must have been like. Then, Gengar shows up and starts a conversation with her as he builds up the courage to confess.

Basically what I just said is, think more about the character's personatlity, put more effort into the effects and you'll have a really cool comic full of Gengar lovey love <3 Myah. *runs off with Gengar to bake cookies*
 
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Jukain:)

Heart & Soul...
I took all of your advise and added it into the episode 2. Enjoy!
 
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Raichu-chan

Derp
More yummy Gengar goodness! X3

Better. Now try to use different facial expressions. Your comic will be taken much more seriously if you can portray the character's emotions well. If a character is happy, make them look happy. It isn't hard at all to change a normal face to one matching the emotion the character is feeling. Gengar should be the easiest to edit, IMO.
 
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