megaman.exe.:a comic without megaman

[~Kage Itachi~]

i might need to re-edit them/resize them soon so just look at the and post your comments
Kid Grave is now the host of all the tournemts and is the leader of the net navi Net Savers who gives out the missions and chooses teams.
Laserman is deleting all of the betraying or former darkloids
since then (when regal was gone) former loids joined up with these teams and help give information about the dark chips and other loids.


before the comic:
http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/9338/beforethecomic8zk.png
1.http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/3039/comic11gb.png
P.2http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/6143/comic1p29ga.png
2.http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/9687/comic21vh.png
P.2http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/9062/comic2p29up.png
3.http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/9635/comic39lm.png
P.2http://img486.imageshack.us/img486/7058/comic3p28rf.png
4.http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/2120/c46fl.png
5.http://img417.imageshack.us/img417/5305/c57qy.png one more panel to upload
6.http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/7055/c62nt.png
6.2http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/2073/c6p21qd.png
7.http://img477.imageshack.us/img477/1497/c78oh.png
i'll post more later.

can some one tell me how to resize these things

 

[Silver Fusion]

Use Imageshack.

It's very odd having a Rockman.EXE comic without Rockman in it.

However I feel that its about Atsuki and Burnerman.

I take it that you like the Rabid Cupcake.

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

i tried imageshack mine is to big

the story's about Team BurnerMan(BurnerMan,DrillMan,FlashMan,ShadeMan,WindMan) try to destroy nebula a fusion of duo+nebula grey will appear later on+ rockman with his team have more comics to make so later.....

 

[Silver Fusion]

That makes no sense.

Nebula Grey is an evil program. Its hard to explain.

Its like a fusion of Dr. Regal, Wily Program and Hikari Tadashi Program.

Duo is an ultimate power. Duo came to Earth in his Asteroid to activate Earth Erasure. Earth Erasure was activated becuase people became too greedy and evil.

A fusion of the two would create a Nuetral being or Nothing.

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

i thought nebula grey is that lion beast thing in MMN BTN:5 ToP/ToC
but any way duo and NG are destroyed and regal gets there data and fuses them together to make an ultimate being/Navi thing

 

[Silver Fusion]

Indeed that is Nebula Grey.

If Nebula Grey is destroyed that means Regal is too.

I'm confused. Either way, maybe you should upload each panel as a separate image. That way the comic wouldn't be resized I think.

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

btw i haven't finished mmn btn:5 ToP but i don't care let me finish more comics.

 

[Blues]

I think I know your problem abouto the resizing, just make the space to paint the panels only. You can do this by going to the bottom right corner and placing the cursor on it (you'll see a blue dot). Then, just drag it up. Now, onto the comic...

You panels aren't the same size, your textboxes aren't alligned with the picture, and you're using two different versions of game sprites.

You also need to work on your spelling and grammar. I hardly see anything capitalized...

Your story is going WAY too fast, you haven't explained what Laserman does, and we're supposed to just guess what Shuruyo is doing standing in cyberworld. This comic does have potential, but you need to slow things down.

Overall, I'd give this an average 7/10, work on those things I said, and this comic could turn out pretty good...

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

Kid Grave is now the host of all the tournemts and is the leader of the net navi Net Savers who gives out the missions and chooses teams.
Laserman is deleting all of the betraying or former darkloids so ok then....

 

[Blues]

You're supposed to state that in the comics, what if someone doesn't read the replies? You must explain things more...

 

[Tai]

...

This makes no sense. Isn't Shade Man like evil? Or did he turn good?

Sorry Im too lazy to finish the games, and only get about 10% done and stop.

Can you explain this a bit more? And in the the comic?

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

Comics 4-7 will be done by 8:00pm tonight with some bonus things

 

[PokemonInferno]

I like it since I'm a big fan of Megaman.EXE and I kind of get the story though.
BTW isn't Magnetman's attack MagnetMissle?

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

i just give them different names

sorry to DP but 4-7 are now up the extra thing will be posted soon

 

[Silver Fusion]

Ok.

The plot is moving way too fast. Explain whats happening. Why do you have 3Darkloids (Evil Navis) on one team?

What is Laserman doing? [SPOIL]Shademan was deleted by Laserman in the last episode of Axess[/SPOIL]

Why are you using NT Warrior Dub Names?

English Japanese
Burnman Burnerman
Fridgeman Coldman
Kid Grave Shuryou Gospel

Actually all of Team Burnerman are Darkloids or from Net Mafia Gospel apart from Windman.

 

[Blues]

Stuff just happens randomly, with no explanation. You still havn't worked on your grammar at all, and you have no Atsuki sprites. Atsuki is also using Netto's PET, which makes no sense...

Shademan got deleted in 5, and all those other navis have operators. Duo wouldn't just fight someone without proper cause. Shademan would NEVER go good, which makes this even more messed up...

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

well i think different look at most pokemon/other comics they don't go as the story went such as someone dies they put them in there comic so who cares not me ok also i forgot to put the person sprite now shut up and let me make more comics!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Blues]

We're giving crit, if you can't take it, you shouldn't be making them. I'm trying to help you, and all you do if try and make excuses...

 

[snare]

Eep, I'm a Rockman nut too, y'know. <_<;;

I'm sure you're happier not knowing the rancid inaccuracies in the plot, but my ol' pally Silver already covered most of them. e.e; Ack, I never watched the dub, I had no clue Coldman's name was Fridgeman...ew.

Hmm, it seems like it's Axess AND Exe 5 at the same time, I'm way behind, I forgot what happened in Axess. e.e; I'm already into Beast and EXE 6. <_>;

Anyway, it was mentioned that you're moving the plot much to fast, with very little character insight...and lack of emotion too, sorry but it's true. Slow things down a bit and maybe read up on some current Rockman tidbits.

I'm very sorry to say that the text is quite sloppy. You can always use a spell checker/google to find any spelling errors, that would help.

I'm rating the thread a three, in vain to boost it a little and you get an A for effort. Also, I understand it's hard to make a sucessful Rockman.exe comic.

 

[~Kage Itachi~]

season 2 is Team Shadowman