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Megaman S:Battle of the Favorites

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Magneto

Master of Magnetism
Hey, I've decided to make a comic!(Can't be too hard)
So, here's Megaman S! Z, S, and the rest of the gang all want to know, who is my favorite?
Sect. One:The Rod of Magicyness
0.Introduction
1.Ep.1:Vile
2.Ep.2:Civilization
3.Ep.3: The Sith Lords
Thats all for now, props to spriters resource for all sprites.
Please comment people!
 
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Mastercougar

The Infinite Fire
Hmmm...I think what your textboxes need are tails. That, and open your characters' mouths. Then it'll look more like they're really talking.
 
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Magical Trevor

Guest
well the sprite sare good and you mde a joke out of the intro which is good. And yep you cn't let the main character die. I think i'm gona get to like this comic
 
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Rikori

Lucas, gib meh soda.
[Not a review.. kinda obvious.]

Why did you do TWO threads with one comic? =/ Thats counted as spam, ya know. It can get you banned. If I were you I would delete atleast one of them.
 
B

blueguy

used Metronome!
Rikori said:
[Not a review.. kinda obvious.]

Why did you do TWO threads with one comic? =/ Thats counted as spam, ya know. It can get you banned. If I were you I would delete atleast one of them.
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A simple mistake won't get a person banned. Most likely, he/she accidently pressed the button twice. This may have occured owing to the time when Serebii was slowed down yesterday, and the user may have gotten impatient. Everything's taken care of, because I have already reported it. [EDIT - And you can't delete your own threads, BTW.]

As for the comic... I'm not really a Megaman fan, but there a few things I could advise you on graphically. 1) The navy background doesn't really work to your advantage. 2) There is often lots of empty space in your speechbubbles. 3) The title is very plain, and the gray does not suit its navy counterpart. Aside from that the grammar is pretty good...
 
M

Magneto

Master of Magnetism
Thanks for the advice, dudes.
Comic three is up! I don't like tailed speech bubbles, but I have opened mouths, and changed the Navy to Black.
 
M

Magneto

Master of Magnetism
Hey, Episode 3:Sith Lords is up! Check it out!
 
M

Magneto

Master of Magnetism
comments please?
 
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