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Megaman-Shadow of the Distant Foes

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SerenadeSP

My Loyal Feraligatr
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SerenadeSP

My Loyal Feraligatr
Thanks and here's the next comic!

Comic#2:Return of an enemy

I forgot to state that this takes place after the end of EXE6 so Diveman already got deleted and Falzer and Greiga are gone too.Well what do you guys think about this one?
 
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ĦÅж ΫōỰ

Comic Lover
Wow that was the worst thing i have ever red
 
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Pokefan26

Woot! SSB!
Can't you guys explain yourselves!?

The only thing your saying is "wow this is awesome", "this sucks", or making useless posts without giving a FULL explanation. It isn't telling the creator why you like it or why you don't like it. It's spam.

Anyway, the speech bubbles aren't so good. I suggest you look at other megaman comics to see how they're done. The rest is ok, good job.
 
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Blues

Monkey Dragon
Ah, I like what I'm seeing. Your story so far seems good (though there hasn't been enough to judge really, but you should pace yourself with updates), ane the battle is pretty good. Now for what you need to work on: First, you have breathing panels (panels that differ in size throughout the comic), I suggest you work on that or at least give the panels borders. Second is the resizing. Netto seems resized in the first comic for no reason, and it makes it look odd. Again with the background with Diveman, though I think I see why you did that (so it looks like there's more space, right?). The only other thing that needs improvement are your textboxes, they bleed into each other, so I suggest giving them borders also (I like the way you used them, though. They wold look better with a border).

Your comic is done really well for your first time, so just work on the problems I said. If you do, I can see this comic becoming popular.
 
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Deoxys Trainer

Bewaaaaaare!
It's good... but the pictures need work. They're all fuzzy. Also the speech bubbles seem like they are in the way.

Why not do them like Sabata does them?

But other than that, it's great!

;386-a;
 
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SerenadeSP

My Loyal Feraligatr
I'll work on the speech bubbles and as for the background for the internet,that just happened and I couldn't get it to stay the same size when I transfered it from Word to Paint.And for Netto,I guess I used the wrong sprites for that background.I'll try to have the next comic up later and then we'll see if I improved.
 
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Shadow246

FOR BRAWL!
This comic pretty good for your first one. The only thing you should really work on in the speech bubbles because they look a bit weird. Also, what're those purple and black spots in the 2nd Comic? Oh, wait, I haven't played EXE6 yet...

-;257;
 
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SerenadeSP

My Loyal Feraligatr
Well,in EXE6 the black and purple spots are PART of the game.Sorry for not making any new comics over the weekend.When my dad's around I have some trouble getting on for long.I'm working on the speech boxes and as for the background being streched,I can't fix it.I'm guessing it's so streched is because so much stuff comes with the one area.Anyways I'll try to work around it.Because right now Megaman's battling.The next comic WILL be coming tomorrow,I promise....
 
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SerenadeSP

My Loyal Feraligatr
Solar Boy Nick said:
today is today,right?
Click to expand...
......Well.....duh......

Anyway,Here's the next comic.

Comic#4:Navis aren't as stupid as they look...

Yes,Diveman out smarts Megaman.But for how long??? I made the borders for the panels.I'm still having no luck on de-streching the internet.So I guess that will be the one flaw in my comic....I hope you guys still enjoy it nevertheless.......
 
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Deoxys Trainer

Bewaaaaaare!
It's still pretty sweet. I wonder how Mega will get out of this predicament....

;386-a;
 
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