Memento Mori: Even the Pure Fall

[Guywhoiam]

Memento Mori: Even the Pure Fall
GMs:
Guywhoiam
Niihyl
Pokefan0234

Rated PG-15 for Language, Violence, and other Miscellaneous things somebody is bound to post that is inappropriate for children.​

Welcome to the Sign-Ups for Memento Mori: Even the Pure Fall! This is the sequel to Memento Mori: Even Gods Must Die. If you want to read what happened in EGMD, read this. If you do not want to read it, it will be explained in the plot summary for this RP. But first, the rules.

Rules:
1. Although it doesn't need put, standard forum rules apply.
2.You are allowed NO MORE than two characters.
3.Godmodding or Powerplaying are allowed on occasion, but if you do it too much, I will have your characters legs cut off. I am not even joking about that.
4. Bunnying is not allowed unless other player agrees.
5. Occasional Spelling/Grammar mistakes are fine, but too many and we'll have a little talk. I will make some exceptions to this if it is part of your style(such as with mine, I capitalize important words that I want to bring attention to, that would not normally be capitalized).

I will add more if I, or the other GMs, think of any.

Now for the part you've been waiting for!

Last time in Memento Mori:

Long ago, in the beginning, Arceus created the Universe. Centuries later humanity would find itself under siege from an unknown adversary, and Arceus would commission the titan, Regigigas to fashion a sword made from the same material used to create the other Regis. Once Regigigas completed this task, Arceus blessed the sword and gave it to a mortal man – Thermidore. Thermidore fought alongside Arceus and the Regis to vanquish this foe. They were victorious, and Thermidore founded The Order. They would stand forever vigilant and wait for the next time the world was threatened.

Millennia later Arceus would find himself threatened by Giratina, the old god. Giratina manifested itself as an old man named Gin and deceived a group of young people into helping to kill Arceus. After traveling back in time, the group acquired the Azure Flute and fought with the Azure Cult who tried to get it back. Many of the group perished during the struggle, but a few managed to make it back to the future. They then had to endure many tough trails on the Earthly and Heavenly Stairs to reach Arceus.

Once they did, however, Giratina revealed its true nature, killing Arceus and taking his place. Those who helped the old god would be spared, by being sent to the Reverse World as Giratina recreated the universe in its image. The group managed to find Giratina and kill him. This left the universe in an ever deteriorating state. They eventually found a staff which was also forged by Regigigas; it was made from shards from Arceus’ plates, and was named Titan's Will. They fought amongst themselves before one eventually conquered the rest and used the staff to recreate the world as it was before Giratina tricked them all. This includes resurrecting Arceus, AND Giratina. For without the later there would be no balance. Arceus now keeps a watchful eye on Giratina so that it will never happen again.

A few months later…

The Leader of The Order, the Master, acquired Titan’s Will and the Gigas Espada, and now seeks an old Order device called the Infinite Devil Machine. The IDM is a machine said to have been created by Regigigas as well, and can be used to create matter itself. The leader of your branch of The Order, the Lord Captain, will not allow this. He came before the Master and pleaded with him not to pursue the IDM, but his plea fell upon deft ears. The Lord Captain returned to his fortress in northern Johto to continue his duties.

Current Day

However fearing the LC’s interference, the Master had the rest of The Order besiege your fortress on the day you were to be knighted. His men took you, the other would-be knights, and a few others involved in your ceremony away and had you thrown in prison. The Master thought that this act would keep the Lord Captain at bay, but he was so very, very wrong. The Lord Captain broke your branch of The Order off from the others and became a separate entity. Declaring war upon The Order, the newly formed “Knights of the Threshold” will attempt to free you. The Lord Captain sends the only warship they have to a small island south of Sinnoh. On this island is the castle of The Order, where you are held. On board the ship, the Judge’s Steel, are KofT troops and Pokémon Hunters who were contracted as mercenaries.

You sit in your cell, as days pass by. You get to know some of the other people in the prison. Some are Pokémon Trainers. Some are Pokémon Rangers. Some are even Aura Guardians. It turns out that they too were thrown into this prison for fear of what they might do to stop the Master.

But then, somewhere in the dark, a light or just a spark…

Sign-Ups

That is the general idea, but note that I was a little vague on a few details for story reasons. Now for the SUs. I have came up with six different character ideas you can choose from, or create you own. Every one will be the same in regards to story. No one character will be more important than another.

Knight of the Threshold – (KofT)
-After the Master pulled his bold move to imprison those who would stand against him, one of The Order’s branches broke off and started calling themselves the Knights of the Threshold. Their goal is to stop the Master.
-If you play as one you start off in a prison cell with most of the other players.
Equipment/Pokémon: One melee weapon, three Pokémon.

Knight of The Order –(KofO)
-Knights of The Order stayed loyal to the Master and will assist him in activating the IDM.
-If you play as one, you are not captured, but instead will start off fighting the KofT in the castle’s halls.
Equipment/Pokémon: One melee weapon, three Pokémon.

Pokémon Trainer –
-Pokémon Trainers travel the world seeking to become Pokémon Masters. Obviously.
-If you play as one you were captured for a reason up to you, so long as it makes sense. You start off in a cell as well.
Equipment/Pokémon: Six Pokémon, nothing special

Pokémon Ranger –
-Pokémon Rangers do good acts… and stuff. They can use their capture stylers to temporarily use a Pokémon’s skills to aid them. Sorry about the bad description, but I don’t really know how to describe them, and we all know what they are.
-If you play as one, you were captured because you got in the The Order’s way somehow; make sure the reason makes sense. You start off in a cell.
Equipment/Pokémon: One Pokémon, capture styler, usual abilities of a Ranger

Aura Guardian – (Limit 3)
-Like Sir Aaron, these noble warriors can control the power of Aura. They have many special powers and can use Aura to help them in most situations. There are very few left in this world…
-If you play as one you were captured because The Order fears that which they cannot control, and so they hunt you. You start off in a cell.
Pokémon/Powers: One Pokémon, power of Aura. (Those who do not know what an Aura Guardian is, read this. Ability to read minds/Actions is not allowed, and Telepathy can only be used between Guardians. I will only allow three AGs, and watch your characters closely. Godmodding will be regulated, but not completely banned.)

Pokémon Hunter – (Limit 3)
-Pokémon Hunters hunt rare Pokémon for clients who pay enough for them, going so far as to steal them if necessary, and by using any means. Due to the nature of their work they may have encountered, and caught a legend. Due to Interpol agents like Looker, they haven’t received much work as of late and have had to resort to being mercenaries.
-If you play as one you start off by breaking into the prison to free the captured ones. After the prologue you get to choose your side, but during the beginning, you are KofT.
Equipment/Pokémon: One regular Pokémon, one medium sized or smaller legend (Optional) and one ranged weapon. (Make sure that your SU with the legendary Pokemon is GOOD! I want a detailed story on how you met them. No "He just happens to be here" kind of stuff.)

Other –
Come up with your own ideas! But be warned, I will be kind of strict as to balance out your character.

Note: Anyone can change allegiance after the Prologue, but not what kind of character you are. There are so many choices so that there is diversity, better interactions, and an even more epic story.

Sign-Up form:
Name:
Character Type: (Trainer, Knight, Ranger, etc.)
Knightly name: (only if Order or Threshold)
Age: (If either type of knight, must be over 15. Hunters must be 18+, and everyone else can be any age.)
Gender:
Appearance:
Personality:
History: (Including what you did to make The Order mad at you/got contracted by KofT/why you sided with The Order)
Weapons/Equipment: (Be realistic. By that I mean don't give yourself rocket launchers or Gatling guns.)

The following must be done for every Pokémon owned.
Pokémon:
Pokemon's Nickname: (If any/Optional)
Pokémon’s Personality:
Pokemon's History: (For Hunter's legendaries. How did your Hunter meet the legend? Why is it with you still? Or, if a non-hunter wants to do this that is fine too.)
Pokémon’s Appearance (Regular? Shiny? Wearing clothing?):


Any questions? Also, tell me how I did with organizing this post. I am good at writing actual RP posts, but writing this Sign-Up got me a little flustered.

Reservations:
capitalh
Lawmaster - Aura Guardian
Niihyl - Pokemon Hunter
Pokefan0234
Universe Chaser - Pokemon Ranger

Accepted RPers:

Guywhoiam - Sir Guy - KofT

 

[Monster Guy]

I'm bringing back my characters from the original. xD Being able to give them a full team of six makes my life easier. (Now I just need to decide on them. xD)

*Goes to prepare a Sign Up*

 

[Pokefan0234]

Oh yeah, MM is back! Since I'm a Co-GM, I suppose I can reserve myself... so I will! Haha! XP

And now to figure out where in the world Daniel fits into all this...

 

[capitalh]

i'll reserve if it's ok. I'll be the first newcomer then .

 

[Guywhoiam]

Alright, Capitalh, you are reserved!

 

[lawmaster]

reserve an aura guardian please

 

[Guywhoiam]

All right, I can reserve that for you Lawmaster.

 

[Niihyl]

Whee, here's me again. And this time, since I'm not the only one GM-ing, I don't think it'll have to move faster than the speed of light, dropping everyone along the way...

Lilith'll show up of course, and then I'll want another character... Ah well. I need another selfish monster. Reserving me a Pokemon Hunter.

 

[Guywhoiam]

I've been too busy the last few days to sign myself up. I was really hoping to have some people join by now but hey, what can you do, right? Anyway, here is my character.

Name: Nathaniel Phillips
Character Type: Knight of the Threshold
Knightly name: Sir Guy
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Appearance: A little over 6ft, long dark-brown hair, full beard of same color, Glasses, wears jeans, hiking boots, a t-shirt, and a French highwayman’s coat. Has a metal guantlent on his arm left which can project a bluish-green energy shield. On his left shoulder is a pualdron which is the power source for the shield.

Personality: Guy has pledged his life to the code of Chivalry; however, he has perverted the code to what he personally views as “right”. This perversion is what helped caused the rebellion within The Order. He is sociable, but does not like being around others for extended periods of time. He never talks about himself, because he is modest, but if somebody asks, he will answer truthfully. He does dislike children, and has trouble talking to them since he views them as “Too young to know any better, and too stubborn to listen,” even though he is only 19 himself.
His goal in life is to leave his mark on the world before he dies. And this may be his chance. During the Dark Trial on the Earthly Stair, Guy's personality split. Now he may swing erratically between good and evil.

History: Guy was a Knight in The Order for a long time before Giratina attempted a coup on Arceus. He traveled the world carrying out missions for The Order as well as competing in each region’s Pokémon League. Except Hoenn, he has yet to travel there. Guy has captured many Pokémon, and fought against "evil" organizations multiple times.
Gin chose Guy to be one of the people to slay Arceus, but got more than he bargained for when Guy resisted. When Giratina killed Arceus and destroyed the universe, Guy was not amused, and enraged at the others who thought Giratina was telling the truth and helped him.
Later a battle would be fought that Guy ultimately won, sparing all but an abomination known as Musica. Then together with the others, Guy helped to create the universe again, reviving Arceus.
Guy gave up his god powers, and forced the others to do the same. When the Master attacked his branch of The Order, Guy was the one who told nobody to resist. Now Guy sits in his cell, waiting patiently for something to happen. But what that thing turns out to be, he did not expect… not even close.

Weapons/Equipment: Guy’s weapon is an Energy Shield Gauntlet. It can be compared to the Jackal’s shield gauntlets from Halo. The shield style is much like a tower shield, so that his whole body can hide behind it. After enough of a pounding, the shield WILL fall and will take an hour-or-two to recharge. When Guy gets up-close he will melee his adversaries with it.


Pokémon: Rhyperior (female)
Pokémon Nickname: none
Pokémon’s Personality: Rhyperior is brave. She is very vain and thinks very highly of herself. She is one of Guy’s most powerful Pokémon, and lives to fight. She seldom listens to Guy’s commands, therefore Guy seldom gives them and he allows her to fight the way she wants. She also disliked every nickname Guy came up for her and so does not have one.
Pokémon’s Appearance: Due to being a female, her top horn is slightly smaller than a male’s.

Pokémon: Gliscor (Male)
Pokémon Nickname: Scorn
Pokémon’s Personality: Scorn is lax, and takes everything in stride. He is Guy’s newest Pokeymanz, but is already as loyal as can be. Scorn is constantly showing off, going more for style points than actually being effective. Guy already plans on entering him in contests when he travels to the Hoenn Region.
Pokémon’s Appearance: Normal

Pokémon: Feraligatr (male)
Pokémon Nickname: Tidal Fury
Pokémon’s Personality: TF was Guy’s very first Pokémon. TF is quirky, and can endure just about any punishment. His one weakness, however, is eating. He will go out of his way to get a bite to eat, even if not hungry.
Pokémon’s Appearance: Normal

And for more info on Sir Guy, here is my SU from Gods Must Die to supplement this new sign up.

...

I accept myself.

 

[Floorman]

Name: Leonardo "Leon" Volchar

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Character Type: Pokemon Hunter

Appearance: Leon has shaggy brown hair and bright green eyes. He is six foot seven. Most of his height is in his legs, and he has long arms. He has a pretty bad scar across his forehead. He wears a green bandana over his head, to hide his scar. He wears a flannel jacket, and blue jeans with a belt. He carries a handcrafted blowgun he made out of mahogany. On his belt he carries two small pouches of darts for his blowgun. His blowgun is slung over his back on a black leather strap when not in use.

Personality: He is very cocky and sure of himself, usually for good reason. He is exceedingly naive due to his age, and can be very childish. When the going gets tough, however, he knows to get serious. He believes that if someone is given his trust, they must keep it. He considers betrayal to be one of the worst crimes one can commit. When not in the heat of battle, he is a joker, and enjoys crafting. He makes his darts by himself, and sharpens each one meticulously. He takes his crafting very seriously, and if you don't want to get on his bad side, then don't bother him while he's working.

History: Born into a family of Pokemon hunters, he was trained in the art from a young age. His father took him on a hunt for the first time when he was 6. He continued to go on hunts, and eventually started to assist his father. Then, when he was 14, he had an accident. He and his father were hunting a gardevoir and had it cornered when suddenly, a gallade appeared, and attacked the two. His father took it down as well, but not before it had cut a deep gash in Leon's head. Abandoning the hunt, his father got him to the emergency room, and saved his life. He was still left with his scar, however.

After he turned 16, he became a hunter in his own right, and quickly rose to be one of the best in the business. He was contracted by the Order of the Threshold because of a friend he had within their ranks. The two went way back, and used to be the best of friends, until they chose different paths in life, one, an illegal hunter, and the other a knight of the order. His friend was captured in the initial attack by the master. He was contacted, and agreed solely because his friend was in jeopardy, he could care less about the dispute between the Knights of the Order and those of the Threshold.

Equipment: He fights using his blowgun, and he carries two pouches of darts, some of which are tipped with sleep powder from various pokemon. He also carries a few empty pokeballs for capturing his prey once it is down.

Pokemon: Flygon

Name: Mendel

Personality: Mendel is energetic and carefree when let loose, but when he is locked in battle, he follows directions from his owner exceedingly well. He knows how to be serious, but he usually chooses not to be.

Appearance: No different than a normal Flygon.

 

[Guywhoiam]

@Floorman

No legend? You can substitute that with another regular Pokemon if you wish. I also like your use of a blowgun instead of a firearm. Very refreshing. The only complaint I have is your history. I would like a little more in regard to how you were contacted by KofT. What is Leon's motivation? Is it money? Power? Or is his friend within the KofT's ranks somebody needing rescued, and not the one who contacted him? It has also been decided that you need to flush out his personality some more.

Elaborate on the history a bit and I'll accept it. But for now, Pending.

I also want it to be noted by anyone thinking of joining but not for lack of sign ups that there is about 5 people that are claiming to be reading Gods Must Die before signing up. That said, don't worry this RP WILL be happening.

 

[Universe Chaser]

Hi, I'd love to reserve as a Ranger. SU will hopefully be up before Sunday.

 

[Guywhoiam]

Ok, it will be reserved for you, UC. Even if you miss the beginning, if I get enough people to join by Sunday, you will still be able to join. Depending on where we are in the story, you might have a custom intro.

 

[Universe Chaser]

That's mighty fine of you. I'd get it in earlier, but I'm in Yosemite with no access to a computer, only my iPod. As soon as I get it done, I'll edit it into this post.

 

[Floorman]

I edited it, and got everything taken care of. At least I hope I did.

 

[Niihyl]

Name: Heretic (Original Name: Wil Elyon)

Character Type: Pokémon Hunter

Age: 26

Gender: Male

Appearance: Heretic is not a tall man. He is less than six feet tall, only five foot nine or so. He has a light build, but very well muscled. Scars lace his entire body, and he is missing the middle and ring fingers of his right hand. His skin is a dark olive shade, and his hair is deep black. His hair is kept in a long ponytail. Clear green eyes glare out at the world from behind simple oval spectacles. Rough stubble graces his chin and cheeks, but he has no moustache or beard. He is usually smiling kindly, which is rather unnerving.

His choice of clothing is quite odd. He wears an all black, buttoned up church cleric’s cassock. It is a black robe, which reaches down to his ankles. The robe buttons all the way to the bottom. A white collar is close around his neck. A black sash is wrapped around his waist.

His oversized rifle is always with him, which clashes with his clothing and smiling appearance.

History: Wil Elyon was born in a war-torn country. A small one, away from the major continents of Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, Sinnoh, and Unova. He grew up alone, always under fire. An idealistic and brave child, filled with heart, he joined the army at age 16, ready to change the world and make it a better place.

He was shot on his first day of action and left for dead. Not out of cruelty, or lack of empathy, but necessity. The warfront simply had no medicine at all, and couldn’t spare a bullet for a mercy killing.

He was taken in by a small monastery there. Still a child, he was allowed to stay, and was raised as a priest. He was happy, for a time. Four years he stayed there, still in a war-torn world, but in a secluded zone of peace. Here, he kindled his love of music, learning to play the organ, and singing baritone in the choir.

But… it wasn’t the life for him. It was calm and peaceful… but for a young boy with a heart of fire, it was boring. He left, and made his way to the major continents. The muse of the monastery, Meloetta, took it upon herself to go with the boy. He was an adult now, but still only twenty.

Together with Meloetta, he became a traveling musician, trying to see the world. He witnessed many cruelties as he traveled, crimes, and sins. His heart closed shut, and he grew bitter and cynical over time. To think that so many people would happily assault him as he slept on the streets, too poor to find lodgings. So many would find a reason to rob him, attempt to steal Meloetta away, or look down on him.

Money… it was something he had never had before, but he gained a taste for it. He had taken up a Pokémon Hunter’s job just once, because he was dying of starvation. Meloetta captivated a wild Garchomp with her dances, and they brought it to their client. The payoff was large…

And Wil was hooked. He forsook his vows, and decided to become a Hunter. Why bother helping people when the majority of people were bastards anyway? He started off with this belief… and slowly lost that as well, becoming nothing more than a monster. Greed was all that drove him now.

And through this, Meloetta began to lose her voice, eventually becoming entirely mute. Miserable, Wil coaxed and begged, but not a sound could be heard from her. Her mouth closed just as Wil’s heart had.

He continued his work, and the conflict between the Knights of whatnot were brought to his attention by a girl… a girl named Lilith Czernobori. She hired him to help her break in to some stronghold and rescue some people. Although rescuing people wasn’t generally in his job description, money was money.

Personality: A man who was once a priest… is now the utter opposite. Greedy, he cares for money and valuable objects above even others’ lives. Wrathful, he will without mercy destroy anyone who angers him. Prideful, he is vain and selfish. Slothful, he will only do something if it benefits himself. A hedonist and a nihilistic cynic, he is incapable of seeing good in the world, and where it exists, he looks down on it as weakness and stupidity.

He has a ruthless intelligence, characterized by logic over ‘good’ or ‘evil’. For logic is utter selfishness, which looks after only itself. He cares for no one but himself, although an exception is made for his Pokémon. He feels no remorse for murder, and sacrificing innocents to achieve his goals. No crime is too horrible for him to commit.

Perhaps the only thing he cares for other than himself is his Pokémon. He is constantly in agony over the silence of Meloetta, and cares for his Hydreigon as his only companion. His love of music is also an unexpected light, as he has an excellent singing voice and is very skilled with the piano and organ.

Despite his utter lack of morals and humanity, Heretic comes off as rather affable. Always smiling, and even friendly, at least when not angry with you or hired to kill you. This friendliness takes on a darker light when he is just as smiling and serene when doing harm.

Weapons/Equipment: Tac-50 ‘Genesect’ class Anti-Materiel Rifle

The ‘Genesect’ class Anti-Materiel Rifle is a large black metal sniper rifle, with a rectangular counterweight on the end of the barrel. It does not take bullets, rather it uses Gems as ammunition. Each gem can be used once to fire an elemental shot. The rifle also accepts Drives, which provide infinite ammunition. The only Drive in Heretic’s possession is the Chill Drive, which lends an ice-beam esque effect to his gunfire.

Pokémon: Hydreigon

Pokémon Nickname: Astaroth

Gender: Female

Personality: Just as vicious as her master, Astaroth is a ferocious beast. Ever hungry and vicious, she’s quick to head towards combat and killing. Her master has to restrain her sometimes, because of her bloodlust. Interestingly, the mother’s instinct is exists in her. She won’t harm baby Pokémon, and will care for them, sharing her kills with any youngling.

As a Deino, Astaroth was requested for a Hunt. The client refused to pay afterward, so Heretic killed him, and took Deino as payment. They have fought together always since then.

Appearance: Slightly scarred, and with unusually large wings.

Legendary: Meloetta

Pokémon Nickname: None

Gender: Female

Personality: Cool-headed and serene, Meloetta is a kind being. She is peaceful by nature, and gentle. She is immensely saddened by the darkness in Wil, and has lost her voice. Although saddened by his actions, she stays with him always, waiting for the day that he rediscovers the light.

~~~

I don't accept myself. I don't trust myself enough for that. My fellow GMs, check this out if you please.

 

[Monster Guy]

Mon's Sign Ups

My computer is refusing to cooperate. :/ Now I have to retype these two Sign Ups again (On a Wii.) Here's what I have so far.

Name: Marianna "Mari" Vilum

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Player type: Pokemon Trainer

Appearance: Mari is of average height for her age (I'd say 5,8.) She has long red hair that goes to her waist, and is usually tied into pigtails. Her eyes are light blue, and her skin is fair. Her outfit tends to change, but she usually wears a red shirt with a black diagonal stripe going through it, a blue miniskirt with black knee length tights under it, and red shoes. She wears a necklace that consists of a gold chain, with a small black music note shaped charm (♪) and as well as earrings shaped like this. She also wears a few red and blue bracelets on her left wrist. She carries a red and blue purse, which contain money, her pokeballs, and other essential items.

Personality: Mari is pretty much a girly girl, she enjoys doing contests, musicals, and things of that nature. She also likes Pokemon she thinks are cute and/or pretty, though not all of her Pokemon fit this. Yes, she does battle. Her strategy is to toy with and annoy the opponent (Usually, by Inflicting lots of status conditions.) She is not shy in the slightest, and is rather blunt and outspoken, she often says things that offend people from time to time. She also acts somewhat selfish and spoiled at times, but she is nice somewhere deep down. She also flaunts her wealth, and uses it, along with the fact she is girl to charm and influence people. She also likes music, and hopes to follow in her mother's footsteps one day.

History: Mari was origihally born in Rustboro city Hoenn. Her father is a businessman, and her mother was a singer, both were quite wealthy. Her mother died while giving birth to her younger brother (who also died.) When she was young. Aside from this, she lived a glamorous and drama free life. Since her father was rich, she practically had everything a girl could want, and since she was an only child, she didn't have to share any of it. She got expensive things (Including rare Pokemon) from her father as gifts to compensate for his lack of being able to spend time with her due to work. She often brought these things to school and flaunted them. Mari became popular because of the awesome toys and cute Pokemon she had. However, deep down, she knew these friends were only interested in the things she had, and would drop her like a bad habbit if she suddenly lost it all. The one thing she really wanted, was a real friend.

For the most part, Mari acted like a spoiled brat, untill one day, she met a special someone. Someone who was genuinely nice to her, and didn't care about the things she had. This boy's name is Tim. She had taken him out of the trash can after some bullies threw him in there. She had never understood why, Tim was the nicest boy she had ever met. Later, he returned the favor by fixing her favorite toy those same bullies broke. They've been best friends ever since. Mari had to move to Castelia City when she got to the fifth grade, due to her father's business, but the two still keep in touch, very often. She makes no secret of the fact she has a crush on the boy. Often blatantly flirting with him, which makes him blush, then quickly change the subject.

One day, Tim received letters from someone named Gin Ariat, asking for help to prevent Arceus from destroying the world. Tim accepted, and brought Mari along (Though Mari was reluctant to go at first. She had suspicions about Gin, like why he would ask a bunch of random kids to "kill" a god.) After meeting the others, they had to do seventeen trials, one for each Arceus plate to reach him. Mari did not do well on most of them, while Tim did fine, which made her regret coming. When they finally reached Arceus, it turned out they had been tricked. It was revealed that it was Gin (Who was actually Giratina) who wanted to recreate the world in his own image. He slayed Arceus right there, and trapped Mari, Tim, and the other heroes in the distortion world, while while bringing about the end of civilization as we knew it.

Eventually, they managed to escape the Distortion World, kill Giratina, and save the world. But the entire time, she felt like Tim's useless female sidekick, and she didn't like this one bit. After this, she is trying to be more self sufficient. She has caught Pokemon on her own, without help from others. Tim and Mari were recently kidnapped and put into a dungeon. They wanted Tim, but Mari just happened to be there.

Pokemon

Wigglytuff
Gender: Female
Appearance: She wears a big red bow on the back of her head, but looks like a normal Wigglytuff otherwise.
Personality: Wigglytuff is Mari's first Pokemon, she's had her since she was an Igglybuff. She was a gift from Mari's late mother, Wigglytuff was the offspring of her mother's Wigglytuff. She acts like an extension of Mari's personality. She is also a bit of a flirt, and likes to use Attract/Cute Charm to get her way. Much to the annoyance of other Pokemon.

Togekiss
Gender: Male
Appearance: Like any other Togekiss. He sometimes wears a Kings Rock on top of his head.
Personality: Mari recieved him as a Togepi egg. She loved it immediately because he was adorable, and he quickly evolved. Togekiss is Flamboyant and outspoken. He is also self centered, and has a huge ego. However, he can battle, and he likes to use the ParaFlinch strategy to annoy opponents.
Note: He's gay. xD

Breloom
Gender: Male
Appearance: Like any other Breloom. Occasionally wears a Toxic Orb necklace around his neck.
Personality: After being beaten by a trainer with a Breloom, Mari just had to have one. So she asked her father. Unfortunately wild Breloom do not exist, so she got a Shroomish instead. Mari was disgusted with Shroomish at first, and was rather mean to him. However, after some bonding, she grew to love him, and he evolved soon after. Breloom is the most sane and down to earth of Mari's Pokemon. He often does not get along with them.

Milotic
Gender: Female
Appearance: Like any other Milotic.
Personality: Knowing that Feebas evolved a Milotic, she had to have one. So she reaserched their location, then spent many hours in fishing in the rain trying to find one. Eventually, she did suceed, and evolve it much later on. Milotic is the nicest Pokemon you could meet, but she is painfully shy, and has low self esteem.

Crobat
Gender: Male
Appearance: Like any other Crobat.
Personality: Crobat was an accidental capture. She encountered it as a Zubat completely at random. He kept using Mean Look and Supersonic on her Pokemon which caused them to hurt themselves. In a fit of rage, she threw the nearest object at him, which happened to be a Pokeball. It was captured in a second. She hated him at first and still does, but he does not seem to notice this, and he has proven himself on a few occasions so she keeps him around. Crobat is naive and somewhat dopey. He often comes out of his Pokeball without Mari asking for him.

Wobbuffet
Gender: Female
Appearance: She has red lipstick, like all female Wobbuffets do. She is also shiny colored (Pink.)
Personality: Mari found battled and captured her as shiny Wynaut while in a dark cave, because she thought it was cute. Wobbuffet only acts dumb, but she is far from it, and uses this act to lure foes into a false sense of security, so they can be shocked when she beats them later. She is actually a very coniving and manipulative Pokemon.

 

[capitalh]

Name: Jed Stockholm
Character Type: Knight of the order
Knightly name: sir Stockholm the of the fourth
Age: 20
Gender: male


Appearance: A regal uniform is needed to keep up appearances a mainly white with blue sleeves and pants that cover his sandals. His skin is pale from being confined in the castle for most of his days. Also mutable whip marks on his back from his first oppressor’s actions. He has the fourths mark on the back of my hand but is covered by the white gloves that Jed has.


Personality: Jed is a person who means the best but has often been restricted so now has little opinion on choices. He feels that if he did have something to say it would be immediately shot down and forgotten by the group. Although he does know when the odds are in his favor that they might listen. Jed likes to think things through from pros to cons but this does cause him to lose focus of the situation. He does have a flintching reaction when he sees a whip. He is although not shy and is willing to meet other people.


History: A small town of Resnmore is where he was born and for the first seven years everything was fine until Jed's parents were killed and he was enslaved by the said killer. After another good four years the law caught up to him and he himself was executed. Then there was him, where does he stand in this, well the master had heard of Jed and let him in. He had no idea why because it was a bit better but not by much and Jed knew that it couldn’t be for political reasons because he never played the poor orphan card. He made him into a soldier and eventually the fourth highest specializing in bows and arrows in which he gave Jed the miracle bow that he said “was used by our best sniper” but he has heard from the prisoners that it was a stolen gem from a village. It has a round piece of glass that allows my to see further to where Jed's about to shoot and a small small groove that he can line up for accuracy.


So now he am doing prison guard duty but the at least two things happen. 1. he liked to collect the stories of who pass in and out maybe that actually deserve to be there realizing their mistake or 2. He found a a small passage that a “criminal” used to escape so Jed opens it to let the ones that don’t deserve to be there get a out of jail free card. The master doesn't care who comes in or who comes out he is just hungry for blood. His life living in the dark not knowing anything on the outside or why he is even here but at this place hoping that one day a “light” will shine through the darkness of the unknown.
Weapons/Equipment: The miracle bow , a medium quiver, twenty-five arrows. Two pokeballs and one hyper potion

The following must be done for every Pokémon owned.
Pokémon: Electross
Name: bolt-w
Pokémon’s Personality: bolt-w (nick name “wild bolt”) is , as the name applys, a very energetic Pokémon who can be unpredictable unless commanded, often accidently using discharge when happy. His is quite loyal to Jed due to bonding. He is calm enough to listen to orders and effectively do only when is in battle situation which energy is directed onto the unlucky few that has tangled with bolt-w.
Pokémon’s Appearance : Has a brand of the fourths symbol on its forehead (the symbol being a fancy looking bow resembling the miracle bow)

Pokemon: dodrio
Name: 276
Pokemon personality: 276 (his ID) was once a messenger for the order but I had caught him after he nearly broke down from exhaustion. He has been broken by the order and is almost no personality or spirit. I have been trying for months to get a smile but no dice.
Pokemon’s appearance: Has a brand of the fourths symbol on its foreheads (the symbol being a fancy looking bow resembling the miracle bow)

 

[Niihyl]

capitalh: Hmm... not bad, but not excellent. Double space between paragraphs for easier reading please. Work on capitalization at the right times, and write out your numbers, "two" instead of "2". It's usually preferred that it's done that way.

Also, what is this 'Miracle Bow', and what does it do? What does the Miracle Bow look like? You just called it a fancy looking bow. Wooden? Recurve? Compound?

Personality is a little short... and it would be nice if you didn't randomly switch between first person and third person.

Pending, unless I get overruled.

 

[capitalh]

I edited and fixed it.