Memory Lake (Pokeshipping/Contestshipping) PG-13

[PikamasterADV]

ok this is good and all but seriously a guy thats 14 falling for a girl thatsn 15!?!??!?! OK thats just weird.Id like it if you changed the ages around thx!

I was actually thinking about this as I clicked the topic.

I'm actually of the opinion that age shouldn't matter. I mean, as far as we know, Ash is still 10 years old when he loses in the Hoenn League (as far as Anime Canon goes, that is). Unless the characters say something definate about their ages, we have nothing to go on.

As far as I know, we have NEVER recived canon ages for anyone except Ash (who was 10 as of EP001), May (10 as of AG001), and Hikari (10 as of DP001).

From a romantic perspective, love is ageless. It would be as believable for Ash and Misty to hook up if they were 14 as it would be if they were 10. To me, at least.

 

[MistyLover]

Chapter 6

Well, everyone, i worked especially hard on this chapter, and i proofreaded the chapter twice

This one is much more descriptive, very good indeed.

I dedicate this fic to Mina

Here you go;

CHAPTER 6: Mixed Signals​

“MAY?!” both Ash and Misty said at the same time.

“Yup, that’s me!” said May happily, her usual energetic self.

Misty ran and gave May a huge hug, “This certainly is an unexpected surprise!” said Misty, still not letting go of her friend; it showed that they have become very close.

“Misty, you can let go now.” muttered May, almost out of breath.

Misty gasped, “I’m so sorry, it’s just so good to see you again.”

May beamed, “I’m happy to see you too.” replied May gladly.

“You never told us that you were coming!” said Ash gleefully.

“Pika, pi!” cried the little mouse, and jumped into May’s arm and licked her cheek.

May looked at Pikachu fondly. “I missed you too, very much in fact.” She said heart-warmingly to the Pokemon.

May saw Mina, they both stared at each other.

“Hi.” said Mina in a toneless voice.

“Hi.” replied May in the exact same way she did.

“What are you doing here, Mina?” asked May curiously.

“I’m going to the Battle Frontier, I’m participating in the tournament too.” said Mina determinedly.

“But where and who is your partner?” asked May once more.

“Actually, my partner is going to be on the St.Maria, so I will be able to meet the mystery person then, and then know where I get my Battle Frontier Symbols from.” answered Mina.

The whole group hasn’t entered Viridian Forest yet, they were all stalled by May’s unexpected appearance.

They all did so.

Viridian Forest was the same as they had all remembered it. It was still beautiful, with large trees ranging from small to big, thin to thick. Some trees were so high that it actually barren the sun’s rays from entering the forest. Gorgeous flowers in many varieties were surrounding the trees, very beautiful in many colors. The fresh waft of air made the flowers sway making it look simply divine. Countless styles of plants were everywhere. Almost making it look like a rainforest.

Ash let out a deep sigh.

It certainly made Ash think, this area was where he first caught his first Pokemon, Caterpie that had evolved into Butterfree already, it left Ash so it could mate and produce babies in the mating season. He also caught Pidgeotto here and it too had evolved into Pidgeot, the striking bird had stayed in the Viridian Forest to protect the Pidgeys and Pidgeottos from a flock of Spearow and Fearow. Ash sighed, he missed both Pokemon terribly, and one of them, hopefully, in the same area. And more importantly, it was the first time Misty camped with Ash.

Ash looked at Misty, they both smiled to each other.

Mina, apparently, was not pleased at all.

“We should walk until night fall.” commented Ash, still lost in thoughts.

Everyone agreed.

So for six hours, not once stopping, they walked and walked, not even taking a break. Ash and Mina were ahead, and Misty and May were lagging behind. Ash and Mina were talking about battles, and May will soon begin to start questioning Misty.

May grabbed Misty’s hand abruptly, and they both stared at each other. May cocked an eyebrow, the moment she did that, Misty knew what she was going to ask.

“So, what’s going on between you and Ash?” asked May strictly.

Misty blushed a dark shade of red. “Nothing at all.”

“Why not?” asked May sadly. “It is so obvious that you guys have feelings for each other.”

Misty chuckled, “Ever since Miss Love Cloud joined us, she has been flirting with Ash since she laid eyes on him.”

May looked at Misty sympathetically, “I know, she actually gave Ash a quick kiss on the cheek after the match.” she added passively.

“She did WHAT?” screamed Misty loudly.

Ash and Mina turned back to look at them.

“Anything a problem?” asked Ash inquisitively.

Misty looked at him, “No, Ash, nothing at all.” she said quietly.

Ash smiled warmly at her.

“Aww, what a beautiful love connection!” said May loudly, a huge grin on her face.

“MAY!” screamed Ash and Misty; they both averted each other’s gaze, blushing furiously.

May giggle uncontrollably.

Misty was angry. She nudged May, “What are you trying to do, send mixed signals?” said an angry Misty.

May ignored her.

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They finally set up camp.

The night was simply breath-taking. Countless stars were twinkling, illuminating the sky completely. May and Mina were cooking the dinner, vegetable soup, and chicken. Ash and Misty were counting how many stars there were.

Misty looked up at the sky, looking at the starts, pointing at them, trying to see if they would reveal a shape. Misty’s hand started from a top star, and slowly moved her hand in a crescent way to the left, and Ash started to move from the right side, and he too, phenomenally, his hand was moving in a crescent way. They were still going in the crescent way, and Misty and Ash’s finger met.

Misty looked at Ash, love written all over her face, “It is a shape of a…

“Heart.” completed Ash.

Both stared at each other, not one of them felt like moving their face from one another. None of them ever wanted this moment to end; they felt like they were in heaven.

“You know, only people who see a heart shaped constellation means that they are in love.” said May quickly, she has been looking and listening to everything that they were saying.

Ash and Misty blushed, yet again, madly.

“Well, dinner is ready!” said May.

“I’m not that hungry.” said Ash. “I want to stay here.”

“Me too.” said Misty, she too wanted to stay here with Ash.

May looked at them, she smiled, knowing that deep down in their hearts, that they were meant to be.

“Here you go, Mina.” said May kindly.

Mina did not respond. She simply stared into open space.

May poked Mina.

Mina jumped, and removed two pieces of paper from both ears. “What?” she said angrily.

“Your dinner is ready.” said May, looking at Mina curiously.

May out of the blue understood. “Misty thinks Mina is a threat to her, and Mina thinks Misty is a threat to her.”

She looked at Ash, and chuckled, two girls falling for him at once, and he is so dense.

Mina looked at the sky, it was a moonless night, yet, it was so full of light.

Mina yawned, “I think I’m going to get some sleep.”

She bid Ash good night, and didn’t say anything to either Misty or May.

“Excuse you.” May whispered to herself.

Mina snuggled into her sleeping bag and immediately went off to sleep.

May just continued to observe the two people. Both were wide awake, talking about everything, and still, they haven’t done any physical contact.

May just thought of a perfect plan, she grinned widely to herself. She got up, and held a freezing cup of water in her hands, she tip-toed slowly to where Ash and Misty were both still gazing at the stars, and May did it.

She poured all of the water over Misty.

“AAHH!” Misty screamed loudly.

May quickly turned her head in the direction of Mina, she was still fast asleep.

“Oops.” May said stupidly.

Ash gasped, “Mi-May, why did you do this?” asked Ash perplexed.

“Don’t just stand there, give her your shirt, Ash, or she’ll freeze to death!” exclaimed May.

Ash looked at Misty, she was drenched, and he immediately took off his shirt and gave it to Misty.

“Th-Thanks, Ash.” Misty seized the shirt and put it around herself.

Ash smiled at her.

“I’m still freezing, your shirt isn’t helping much.” said Misty, shivering uncontrollably.

“Well, I know for a fact that if two people press on each other they become warm.” said May deviously.

Ash and Misty blushed deeply. “Okay.” They both said at once.

Ash stood up, May had to make Misty stand up.

“Well, come on, don’t worry, I wont be looking, but could I just picture you, please?” asked May uncertainly.

“NO!” both Ash and Misty screamed at once.

“Sheesh-kabab.” retorted May quietly.

Ash stared at Misty, “Well, we should get started.” said Ash, blushing a lot.

Misty nodded, “All right.” she said, she too blushing uncontrollably.

Ash and Misty moved closer to each other, both could feel each other’s breath. Ash slowly placed his hand on Misty’s hip, and Misty did the same. Now was the moment of truth, the two teenagers pressed their bodies on one another. The moment was simply beautiful. They could both feel the other’s heartbeat. Misty felt warm the moment her body pressed up against Ash’s body. Ash was avoiding Misty’s gaze, and she did the same. Slowly, Misty got warmer. She leaned closer to Ash, their faces not an inch apart. She leaned more and more to Ash, and looked at him, “Thanks.”

And she left Ash, standing clueless. “Welcome…” he said to thin air.

No one ushered a word out of their mouth after the event. All went to sleep.

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Sunlight pressed against the teenagers face. All got up quietly, and ate breakfast, no one saying a thing, yet again. They were all heading to Pewter City right now.

Ash and Mina, again, were ahead of the group. Misty and May were walking behind them. All day, Ash and Misty were avoiding each other; apparently, both were still awfully embarrassed about last night’s episode.

“Thanks a lot May.” Misty said to her sarcastically.

“Well, you’re very much indeed welcome.” she smiled happily at Misty.

“Wow, she is certainly very naïve.” Misty thought to herself.

“That wasn’t a compliment. You sent very mixed signals.” Misty told May sternly.

“Misty, chill, what’s the problem, I am positive if one of you talks to the other, things will get back to normal.” suggested May.

“Oh yeah, like you and your rose boyfriend.” retorted Misty.

May blushed. “Well, were only talking about you and Ash, not me and Drew.”

“So you admit that there is something between you and Drew.” said Misty normally.

May blushed again, ignoring Misty’s smart remarks.

They both laughed loudly.

“Why are you and Misty avoiding each other?” asked Mina.

Ash blushed, “Were not, just-

“What?” said Mina abruptly, waiting for Ash to answer.

“Nothing!” answered Ash.

Mina shrugged; she knew something happened while she was asleep yesterday.

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Ash saw a sign that made his spirit soar. They have reached the end of Viridian Forest, and were now currently in Pewter City.

“Yes, were one step closer to the Battle Frontier!” exclaimed Ash.

“I’m one step closer to a hot bath!” said Misty happily.

“I’m gonna call my family!” said May energetically.

“Whatever.” murmured Mina quietly.

They all walked to the Pewter City’s Pokemon Center. They walked for half an hour, and finally arrived at the Center, they entered from the sliding doors.

“Hi, Nurse Joy!” all said together.

“Hey, you guys. What can I do for you?” asked Nurse Joy kindly.

“Could you restore our Pokemon for us?” asked Ash.

Nurse Joy nodded, and all handed their Pokeballs to her. “It might take a while, so you guys could spend the night here, if you want.”

All beamed at Nurse Joy.

They all had a cool, refreshing soda to drink. Ash and Misty were still avoiding each other.

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Nurse Joy appeared, “You guys can have your Pokemon back.”

Misty and May dashed to get them, Ash, behind them. But Mina just continued to sit in the table.

Ash, Misty and May got their Pokeballs back, and thanked Nurse Joy politely. Mina took her Pokemon later. They all went and took a room, there were two.

“I will bunk with Misty.” said May, smiling at Misty.

Misty, however, did not return the smile, “Then who will be sleeping with Ash?” she asked hotly.

“I will!” said Mina.

“I don’t think so, sweetie.” snapped Misty.

“Who ever made you the boss?” asked Mina angrily.

Ash continued to stare at the two girls, smiling to himself that two girls are fighting over him, but didn’t say anything.

“STOP!” yelled May.

“WHAT?” Misty and Mina said at the same time to May.

“If you guys can’t be mature about who will be bunking with Ash, then I will!” she said hotly.

Misty grunted, so did Mina, they both knew deep down that they would have each flirted with Ash, but if May was with them, nothing would happen between them.

Misty looked at Mina, even a stronger sensation than the last, rage.

“You better not be messy.” said Mina.

Both girls continued to fight, not stopping.

“Well, lets go.” Ash said to May.

May nodded, and both went to the room. Ash and May changed, and slid into their bed.

“Ash, why don’t you just tell Misty that you love her?” said May, catching Ash by surprise.

“I just don’t want to talk about it!” said Ash shyly. “I’m going to sleep.”

“Ash! Ash! Don’t leave me conversation-less!” said May angrily.

Too late, Ash already fell fast asleep. Back with Misty and Mina, an argument already had broken out.

“I want the bed near the window!” exclaimed Misty.

“No, I have the bed near the window; after all, I do need my beauty sleep.” Mina replied to Misty.

“Then, what do I need?” asked Misty loudly, anxious to hear Mina’s answer.

Mina looked at Misty straight in the eyes, “A makeover.”

Misty got very angry at this remark, “Why you little-

Mina sighed and slid herself to the bed near the side.

Misty took the other bed, next to the telephone, and wall.

They both fell straight asleep, too tired to argue.

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The next morning, they all had a quick breakfast and tea, thanked Nurse Joy, and headed out the door.

It was a cloudy day, gray clouds everywhere; it looked like it was going to rain.

Misty headed back to the center to get umbrellas, bumping into Ash, they both blushed. She got the spare umbrellas that the center leaves for trainers to use.

So they all walked and walked, their next destination was the Gym, in Pewter City, they wanted to see Brock again.

They quickly arrived at the Gym, all lucky that it didn’t rain. May knocked on the door, waited for a few seconds, and Brock appeared, looking the same all usual self, and before they knew it he gave all of them a huge hug, Mina included too, and they all entered the Gym.

Next to Brock, stood Ash's long seen Pokemon, Pidgeot.

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Hope you enjoyed it and plz comment

 

[el_toro]

Well for one you were right that it was very descriptive so that's a plus But unfortunately your sentences were sometimes either too short or awkward. You can still PM me if you want me to help you out, I'll gladly do it.

But anyway, it had some funny moments like the fact that Misty and Mina are constantly fighting over anything. It also was pretty romantic; my favorite part was the heart constellation. That was pretty creative I'm glad May is not out for Ash's heart too like so many other fics have her doing. It gets to be pretty cliched and I always like seeing May act as the matchmaker, like in the scene with the water.
Keep it up and I'll keep reading till the story is finished

 

[PikamasterADV]

The next chapter. What can I catch...?

“Anything a problem.”

That should be a question, I believe.

Ash and Mina, again, were ahead of the group. Misty and way were walking behind them.

Misty and May, M I RITE?

I'm glad May is not out for Ash's heart too like so many other fics have her doing.

I'm just glad that May isn't out to be the villian. Although I think you lose something by not having her feel anything. After all, Drew might get defensive and start a fight with Ash, which can only be interesting.

As for the chapter as a whole, I have a bit of a problem believing that Misty and May are so close. After all, their only canon meeting between then and now was the Mirage Kingdom arc in Hoenn. Although, I suppose that they could have kept in touch with E-mails and Phone calls (like Ash and Misty apparently did leading up to said Mirage Kingdom Story Arc). I also wonder how Misty learned about Drew, and his relationship to May. As it's currently going, Contestshipping is being accepted as something that happened before the story, and doesn't seem like it's going to have a build up. That makes it seem that Contestshipping exists there ONLY to make sure May doesn't interfer in the Ash/Misty relationship. I dunno, I guess I'd prefer a Tenchi-esque 'everyone's going for the same guy' feel, with girls falling away as they fall for others after realizing that the guy doesn't feel the same for them, eventually leaving only the last girl and the guy.

That reminds me of a short series I want to write later. But for now, back to my sequel...

Let me close with my general distaste of Swellow getting replaced by Pidgeot.

 

[Artemis Ignitan]

I loved the part with the heart constellation! Aww, soo kawaii!
Silly May. She made things worse. Bleah.
And you were right, it was more descriptive, but things were just a little awkward with the spelling/grammar things...
Anyways, you get better with every chappie, so keep writing!

 

[XxM!styxX]

omg great chapter you are so0o0o0o lucky to get these stories done so quickly!!! I never get my chapters done so fast becuase of school T-T i should have finished this over the summer! Oh well, three weekend WOOOOOO I have to time to add to chapter 10... Did you already review my fic? I don't think I checked and I'm too lazy lol... Aww I really thought it was cute how Misty was so slick:

She leaned closer to Ash, their faces not an inch apart. She leaned more and more to Ash, and looked at him, “Thanks.”

And she left Ash, standing clueless. “Welcome…” he said to thin air.

HAHA! lol =p Misty left Ash completely clueless... Complete kawaii!!!! ^_^
q cute!
.../\/\...

 

[pokemondude]

great but the chapters need to be a little more legthy but grea5t job

 

[MistyLover]

I corrected the small mistakes.. i know some of you might be mad that swellow got replaced by pidegot, but i mean it just couldnt stay in the forest forever, and never see Ash, am i right?

 

[Encyclopika]

This fic started off great, and then everyone started spamming! =O So please people, cut it out and actually review, none of this "OMG! It was great!" because that's crap and you can say that to any fic. >> Elaborate and stop being lazy. If there is more spam in here, everyone involved is getting some warnings and notes. Thanks...and review properly.

 

[pokemondude]

I corrected the small mistakes.. i know some of you might be mad that swellow got replaced by pidegot, but i mean it just couldnt stay in the forest forever, and never see Ash, am i right?

No way! Pidgeot is a way better,stronger, and much cooler looking pokemon than swellow did i mention it's better?

 

[uber-olly]

Pokemondude stop spamming plz, you know your doing so just stop.
PikamasterADV I hate the way you never have much nice to say.

Back on topic, another great chappy, May is so cheaky, Mina and Misty may end up killing each other lol. Pidegot is back YAY!

Keep up the good work

 

[PikamasterADV]

PikamasterADV I hate the way you never have much nice to say.

I'm giving my honest opinion. I admit, I have been a bit... harsh in some of the things I've said. However, none of the things I've said are outright bashs of the Fic. I'm just pointing out things that irk me (and possibly other readers), as well as the grammar mistake here and there. As the saying goes, "what goes around comes around." I wish people would be harsher with my writings than "OMG IT'S AWESOME!" all the time. Fan-mail can be directed to my PMs Box, as can Fan Mail for this author. I'd rather get people trying to help me do better by telling me what I'm doing wrong, than settle for mediocrity and get mindless praises.

I've never said "Stop writing, you're horrible." Mostly because that is the furthest from the truth: this story has been enjoyable to me. And that's all a story needs to do. I'm just saying that it can be even better with a little work here, and a little elbow grease there.

/my two cents.

 

[radama]

This is a great fic!!!

May just thought of a perfect plan, she grinned widely to herself. She got up, and held a freezing cup of water in her hands, she tip-toed slowly to where Ash and Misty were both still gazing at the stars, and May did it.

She poured all of the water over Misty.

Love this!

Ash and Misty moved closer to each other, both could feel each other’s breath. Ash slowly placed his hand on Misty’s hip, and Misty did the same. Now was the moment of truth, the two teenagers pressed their bodies on one another. The moment was simply beautiful. They could both feel the other’s heartbeat. Misty felt warm the moment her body pressed up against Ash’s body. Ash was avoiding Misty’s gaze, and she did the same. Slowly, Misty got warmer. She leaned closer to Ash, their faces not an inch apart. She leaned more and more to Ash, and looked at him, “Thanks.”

Really love this!!

“I will bunk with Misty.” said May, smiling at Misty.

Misty, however, did not return the smile, “Then who will be sleeping with Ash?” she asked hotly.

“I will!” said Mina.

“I don’t think so, sweetie.” sapped Misty.

“Who ever made you the boss?” asked Mina angrily.

Ash continued to stare at the two girls, smiling to himself that two girls are fighting over him, but didn’t say anything.

“STOP!” yelled May.

“WHAT?” Misty and Mina said at the same time to May.

“If you guys can’t be mature about who will be bunking with Ash, then I will!” she said hotly.

Misty grunted, so did Mina, they both knew deep down that they would have each flirted with Ash, but if May was with them, nothing would happen between them.

And I really, really love this!!!

With my love for this fic done please update!!!!

 

[flygonrulz]

This fic is cool! Kinda weird in places but very shippy and funny. That, and it's restored my liking of pokeshipping. *Gives MistyLover a massive thank you cookie* slight contestshipping hint but i need mooooooore! Also, can i be added to the PM list? Thankies in advance.

 

[MistyLover]

Welcome

This fic is cool! Kinda weird in places but very shippy and funny. That, and it's restored my liking of pokeshipping. *Gives MistyLover a massive thank you cookie* slight contestshipping hint but i need mooooooore! Also, can i be added to the PM list? Thankies in advance.

Hii! Im very glad i restored your liking for Pokeshipping! *eats cookies, gives a chocolate cake in return* there will be traces of contestshipping, i exceed the contestshippy every chapter Yes, you will be added to the P.M list!!

I am currently writing Chapter 7, its going well, much longer than the others, so bear with me! lol

P.S: My name ends with a 'Z' too.

 

[Genkiness]

this is a really good and descriptive fic.
loved the heart constellation like everyone else has said.
and... I LUV MAY!!!! YESH WITH THE MATCHMAKING!!! lolz.
and i luv how misty commented about may's relationship with drew... rose boyfriend... lolz.

and... DOWN WITH MINA!!!! i just really hate flirters.... like... REALLY FLIRTY FLIRTY FLIRTERS!!!!! yeaz....

I really like how this story is turning out. Please put me on the PM list! Thanks!

 

[MistyLover]

Chapter 7

I am completely grateful for each and every single person that commented on my fic, it really plucks up my courage to do more everytime I think that i keep getting better after every chapter which is a good thing Ooh, i hope youll like this chapter it is by far the most interesting one.. hope you like it

Here you go:

CHAPTER 7: An Old Friend​

Ash just stood there, immobile, not knowing what do or what to say, there stood Brock, his best friend, they were together through thick and thin, and next to him, Pidgeot, his first ever flying type, and very loyal Pokemon, was staring right at Ash.

"This may take a while." muttered Misty, she seemed annoyed, and pulled out the Battle Frontier Guide, and started observing it.

Ash moved one step closer, so did Pidgeot, and then, Ash just jumped and hugged Pidgeot. Pidgeot had tears in its eyes, it was an emotional reunion. Ash's eyes started to water a bit, but he did his best to hide them, if even a tear fell off his eyes, Misty would tease him for the rest of his life.

May looked at Ash and Pidgeot, she thought that the most beautiful moment in life is between a trainer and its Pokemon. She never knew Pidgeot, but she had tears forming in her eyes. She moved to Mina and gave her a hug, catching Mina off guard. "Oh, this is such a beautiful bond." May told a surprised Mina, and started to wail.

"Will you calm down?" said Mina, trying to shove May out of the way.

May let go of her, and gave her a vicious glare. "Pokemon bond hater." she muttered under her breath, and entered Brock's house.

Ash still did not let go of Pidgeot, so Brock, May and Mina entered the house, Misty, however, was so absorbed in the book, she still didn’t know whether Ash had finished hugging Pidegot or not. Brock chuckled.

Ash let go of the long embrace, "Its really good to see you again, old buddy." brushing the beautiful coat of Pidgeot.

Pidgeot looked better than ever, tall and bulky, its hair with yellow and pink stripes and massive wings. It was truly a spectacular sight to see, and Ash grinned to the Pokemon, knowing that the Pokemon would never have been the way it is now if it wasn’t for him.

"So, what are you doing here?" asked Ash curiously, still admiring Pidgeot.

"Pidgeot! Pidg!" said the aerial Pokemon.

"So, you heard from Brock that I was going to the Battle Frontier, and you wanted to surprise me?" asked Ash, anxious for the answer.

Pidgeot nodded its magestic head to Ash.

Ash smiled at Pidgeot, and Pidgeot let out a cry. Ash and Pidgeot all entered the house.

"Ash, don't you think you are forgetting something?" asked Brock, a smirk appearing on his face. He perfectly knew what Ash was forgetting.

"Brock, tell me, come on, what did I forget?" said Ash, fretful.

"Misty, you forget Misty!" laughed Brock.

"Oh, no!" Ash dashed to the Pewter Gym Entrance, and found Misty standing up, still reading the guide, her eyes completely glued to the book. "Misty!"

Misty went back to her senses, she jumped from shock. "Ash, what are you planning to do to me? Scare me half to death?" she yelled at Ash, fury written all over her face.

Ash hid his grin, "I'm sorry, Misty, I hope you will forgive me for my wrong-doing." Ash said to Misty, trying to act cute, unfortunately, it didn’t, Misty saw right through him.

"Stop, you are not acting cute, you are acting obnoxious." she told Ash, snatching her bag, and carried Azurill lovingly, and walked towards the interior of the gym.

Ash stood there, yet again in the same position, "She likes me, she likes me not, which is it?" thought Ash intriguingly.

Ash looked at Pikachu, "You are so lucky that you don’t have to deal with love, you know." Ash added to Pikachu quietly. "I mean, if you just see another Pikachu that you are attracted to, you immediately mate, and have babies, no thinking, Pokemon Love is so primitive.

Pikachu looked at Ash, sparks flying from each cheeks, it obviously took that comment as an insult, infuriating Pikachu. "PIKA!" Pikachu blasted Ash with a powerful thunderbolt.

Ash fell to the ground, the shock obviously hurt him greatly. Pikachu did not care at all, it just continued to walk towards the Gym, and in it went, not even looking back at its trainer. Ash slowly got back up, he walked slowly too. He eventually arrived at the Gym, and marched himself towards the dining room, it was dimly lit, with a low but long table, and plates of sandwiches, and a lot chairs, he there saw the whole group enjoying lunch, finger sandwiches and drinks. Pikachu and Azurill kept popping the Pokemon treats inside their mouths, appreacating the food greatly.

"Ash, come and have a seat next to me." said Mina, tapping the chair next to her, she shot a furtive glance at Misty. Misty was not happy at all, she banged her fork on her salad, furious at Mina. May looked at them alarmly, she didn’t know what could happen, for all she knew, they could end up killing each other. Ash walked slowly over to the chair next to Mina, and sat himself.

"Brock, are you coming with us to the Battle Frontier with us?" asked Ash, grabbing a sandwich and taking a large bite from it.

Brock swallowed the piece of chicken in his mouth, and looked at Ash, "I sure am, how can I leave you and Misty alone, you guys would get lost instantly." he said, looking at both Ash and Misty, thinking that it would be good if he and Misty were alone together. "Of course, I couldn’t leave the lovely Mina alone." He added, love in his eyes, and quickly took hold of Mina's palm, and placed a kiss on it, maybe a bit too wet kiss.

Mina let out a weak smile, "Oh you are too kind." "You pervert." she thought disgustingly, wiping her hand on the napkin.

Brock then looked at May, "So, have you seen Drew yet?" he asked grinning.

May stared at him, "No, I didn’t, why do you ask?" blushing furiously, started stuffing mouthfuls of sandwiches all at once.

"Just asking, you don’t have to blush, it was just a simple question." He looked at her inquisitively, wondering if May had any feelings for him.

"Is Drew the guy who keeps popping out of nowwhere and showering you with flowers?"

"Not flowers, roses." May corrected Mina.

"Same thing." said an angry Mina.

May got heated up, "No, they are not. Flowers are just flowers, and roses are…red." she finally filled the small interval.

Mina stood up, and pushed her long chocolate brown hair out of her face, and looked extremely ticked off that she kept getting corrected.

"Good God, what are you, my flourist?"

She went to take the dishes to the sink, and soon came back, her expression still anger.

Everyone kept sending glances at Mina, except Brock, who kept staring at her beautiful face.

"Don’t hate me 'cause I'm beautiful!" said Mina, snapping her fingers at all, except Ash.

Misty snorted loudly, "Excuse me." She placed her hand over her mouth and continued to giggle uncontrollably.

"What is so funny, red head?" asked Mina hurtfully.

Misty straight away stopped laughing, she was angry at Mina's remark. "I am a red head, so? Is that a problem?"

Mina sighed, "No, no it is not." Tears started to form in her eyes, everything was dead-silence, no one said a peep. "All I ever want to do is to be your friend. What gives?" she stood up, and ran up to the guestroom.

Everyone had stopped eating, they all stared at Misty, she was shocked too, she didn’t expect Mina to cry.

"You should go over and apologize to Mina, I think you really hurt your feelings!" said an angry Brock, sitting up and looked at Misty sternly, like her father, and pointed his fingers to her first then moved them to the ceiling, which meant the upper-floor where the guestroom is and probably Mina is there too.

"Okay." She got up, grabbed her bag and put them over her shoulder, and marched off to the room. She soon came back and gave Azurill a quick kiss.

She saw the stairs, and slowly started ascending the steps. She didn’t know how to apologize to Mina. She finally arrived at the top of the stairs, and saw six rooms, three on one side, and three on the other side. She took a wild guess, and opened the room, it wasn’t the guestroom, she saw Brock's two sisters, one of them doing the other's hair, they were both angered by Misty's sudden and quite rude appearance.

The taller sister looked up at Misty, "Buzz off, sunset head, and shut the door on your way out." she added rudely.

Misty was taken aback at the rude comments, she didn’t lay her finger on why Brock's sister turned out to be the exact opposite of him. And, she was the second person in less than a quarter of an hour to be teased because of her hair."O-kay." she said quietly, closing the door on her way out.

She opened the next door, and it was the guestroom, she stepped inside the cozy room. She didn’t see anyone inside.

"SURPRISE!" yelled Mina, shocking Misty, making her jump high in the air. Mina took a soap bottle and squirted it all over Misty. It was a red shampoo, and all its liquid has been poured on Misty.

Someone outside the door gasped, it was one of Brock's brothers. He stared at them, stepped back and yelled. "BLOOD! BLOOD!"

The whole gang heard it, Ash, May and Brock quickly sprinted to the upper floor, nervous on what they might see. Brock reached first, he looked at Misty, and laughed. He turned his head to Ash and May, "False alarm, just red shampoo."

Ash started to laugh too, Brock joined, and they started laughing madly, May, however, was her usual nice self, and was considerate towards Misty, she walked towards her and took her to the bathroom. She let out a glare at Mina, "You guys don’t catch a brake." She moved her head towards Misty, and signalled her to go to the bathroom for her to take a shower. Misty entered the bathroom.

"Ash, will you wait here?" asked May kindly.

"Why?" Ash asked May back curiously.

"Because, you have to stay here with Misty incase she needs help in something!" responded May, she seemed to have a plan.

"Mina and Brock, you guys come help me wash the dishes!" ordered May, walking towards the door.

"But-, Mina stuttered.

"No buts, now!" she yelled again, holding the door open for the both of them. Mina and Brock walked towards the door. "Thank you, and Ash if you need anything, were just a floor away." she added nicely.

"All right." he answered May.

"May! Could you close the A.C, I don’t wanna get a cold after I get out of the shower." screamed Misty from the bathroom.

"OK! And I'm Ash by the way!" replied Ash thoughtfully, heading towards the A.C, and turned it off.

"ASH?! What are you doing here, where is May?" she asked him quickly, a bit shy that he was in the room while she was taking shower.

"May went down, if you want me to go, then I will." replied Ash sadly.

"NO! That’s Ok!" said Misty quickly.

She closed the shower tap, put a warm towel over her wet body, and stepped out of the bathroom, and she saw Ash.

"Oh!" Ash yelled, covering his eyes with his hands, but Misty could still him blushing.

"Ash, I see you blushing, you naughty boy!"

Misty soon got dressed, and sat on the same bed with Ash, they started talking about life in general, Misty thought it was so pathetic, she wanted to tell Ash how she feels about him, but once Ash talks about battles, well, you know the rest. She didn’t realize that she had been laying her head on Ash's shoulder. There was a knock on the door, it swung open and there was May.

She looked at them with a huge grin on her face, her hands were behind her back, and before they could say anything, May took a picture with her camera, picturing Misty laying her head on Ash's shoulder. May immediately dashed out of the room. Misty got up, but Ash held her hand.

"Come on, its just a picture, were friends, so whats the big deal?" asked Ash, looking at Misty's face.

"Friends, just friends?" she thought sadly. "Does Ash only think of me as a friend?"

"Actually Ash, I wanted to talk to Brock, and ask him how the Gym is going." Misty lied through her teeth.

Ash nodded and let go of her hand, "Sorry."

She left the room, she wanted to see May. She bumped into Mina, none of them said anything to each other, except continue to ignore. She finally saw May, at the end of the hallway, they locked eyes for a second, only to see May spriniting down the stairs, Misty went after her and caught her.

"Don’t worry." She panted, placing her hand on her heart. "I'm not going to take the picture away from you. I actually want to tell you something Ash told me." Her voice deepened, she got sad, and May believed her, and gave her a reassuring hug.

"What happened between you two?" asked May inquisitively, from what she could see, it didn’t seem that good.

"When you pictured me and Ash, I tried getting back the picture, but Ash told me to stop." She took a deep breath, "He said it didn’t matter because we're only friends." She continued sorrowfully.

May looked at Misty, "So you think Ash thinks of you as a friend?"

"I'm afraid so." she added sarcastically.

The way Misty said that made May laugh, she couldn’t help but giggle too, who knows, maybe Ash was not thinking straight that time. She saw Ash opening the door, she looked at him and said, "Ready for dinner?"

Ash beamed, "You bet I am."

So they all headed down to the dining room, Ash was glad to find that Misty, May and Mina did not continue to fight anymore. They all ate happily and soon after that, they headed up to their room to sleep.

It was passed midnight, the guys were already fast asleep, but the girls were wide awake, all were taking turns on the computer chatting with friends. It was May on the computer now, Misty and Mina were both lying on their separate bed.

Mina had a prank. "May, someone called Drew wants to speak to you."

"What? Drew? GIMME!" screamed May, jumping off her chair.

"Kidding, no one on the line for you." Said Mina nastily.

Misty couldn’t help but laugh, that was a good prank.

"Ahh, you do have feelings for Drew!" said Mina naively. "Drew and May, sitting in a tree. H-U-M-P-I-N-G. First comes lust, then comes love, then comes a baby in a baby carriage."

"Eeww! Gross! Whats the matter with you, changing the lyrics of the song?" asked May angrily.

Misty giggled, but she couldn’t let Mina see her laughing. May got sad that Drew was not on the line for her.

The phone rang.

Mina answered it, "Hello?" she said uncertainly, looking at Misty.

"Yes, could I please speak to May?" the voice asked uncertainly.

"Who is it?" Mina asked the stranger, courage in her voice.

"This is Drew, May's friend." responded Drew.

"May, Drew is on the line for you." she called to her.

May was facing the computer, her back towards Mina. "No, stop lying to me!" she said sadly.

"Uh…May, it really is Drew." Misty told May.

May looked at Misty, then at the phone, and she galloped like an animal to the phone and cleared her voice. "Hello?"

"Hey, May, whats up?" asked Drew nicely.

"Hi, Drew!" replied May, blushing cutely.

"How are you doing, little brunette?" teased Drew.

"Oh, I am spectacular, and you?" she asked back.

"I'm fine, I just miss…-, there was silence.

"Miss what?" asked May, curiousity getting the best of her.

"Uhh…Umm…I miss beating you in the battles…" stuttered Drew, his face burning with emberassement, he was too shy to tell May how he feels about her.

"Oh…okay." said May sadly.

"May, you are heading to the Battle Frontier, right?" he asked her.

"Well, yeah, I am there to support Ash." She told Drew.

"Ash, he has to travel and get badges. There were some coordinators that were picked, I was one if them. So, the good thing is that I don't have to travel and compete for symbols. I am through to the League. But, I...I want to ask, would you be my partner?" he informed May.

May stood there, all this information was too much to swallow at once, but she finally had her answer.

"Yes."

May could hear Drew scream in happiness, she blushed harder than ever, and they both bidded each other goodbye and she will hopefully see him in the grand opening of the Battle Frontier. She then told Misty and Mina everything, it took even more time for them to digest the new information knowing that they were all opponents in the League.

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The next morning, May, Misty, and Mina all told Ash and Brock about May competing and her partner is Drew. Ash smiled, he enjoyed the fact that all of his friends are going to hopefully compete in the League.

The whole group had a hardy breakfast, which they ate well. They would leave tomorrow for the Battle Frontier.

"You better watch out, Drew and I will pulverise you." May said maliciously.

"No, me and Ash will destroy you." retorted Misty.

"I don’t have anything to say, ran out of ideas. But I already defeated you." She added, grinning to herself.

Misty's temper rose greatly, it seemed that that everyday Misty and Mina will have a go at each other. May, the sweet person, will always try to be the matchmaker, even though she is very naïve, and Brock, will fall for any girl, and Ash, the most determined boy on the face of the planet, caring and sharing, and eating. All of them have different personalities, which set them apart from each other, making each one of them…unique.

AUTHOR'S NOTE:
First, i hoped you enjoyed this chapter, i worked hard on it So plz comment and review it!

 

[MistyLover]

Yeah!!!! Another 5/5 from me.(give bunch of awards) I'll be waiting for chapter 8!

Thanks a lot, you dont know how much it means to me that people are enjoying my fic that much So thanks, and i will have chapter 8 probably, i dont know, 3-5 days hopefully, ive got a bunch of science homework to do! (I hate ionic and covalent bonding) but school is a very important factor and i do well in it.

Snap Infact 6/5

6/5!?!?!!?? Wow im really happy, that just goes to say that i am honered to have anyone sign my fic! Wow!

I never asked, "HOW DO YOU LIKE MY BANNER???"

 

[Divinity_123]

This is my first time to write a fic, and please go easy on me okay?
Also there is SOME contestshipping but Pokeshipping is still more, but dont worry contestshippy fans, there is still contestshipping.....
Hope you like it.

Just to get a few things straight Ash is 14, May is 13, Misty is 15, Brock is 18, and Max is 9...reeeely close to ten!
I would greatly appreciate it if you guys could post a comment and tell me suggestions.

I dedicate this fic to Mina

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 1:

Ash Ketchum, a fourteen year old boy with raging hormones. He was well built, had mud colored eyes, and thick black hair, was walking through a thick and bushy forest. He was heading back to his hometown, Pallet Town, to see his mother and ask Professor Oak where the best region to travel to next is. His Pikachu, a yellow mouse that had shocking electrical powers, was sleeping on his shoulder. After all, it was still tired after the exhausting Hoenn League, which he came in the Top 16, quite respectable. He could still remember every single detail, to what happened on the match.

LOLz! I really hope he loses in another league!!!

Ash was standing on the red pillar, while his opponent, Mina, a beautiful girl from Celadon City, was facing him, over on the green pillar. Thousands of fans were screaming and cheering either Ash or Mina. They were down to their last Pokemon now. Ash was using Glalie, and she used Vaporeon.

Can you tell us what Glalie or Vaporeon looks like?

“Glalie, use Ice Beam to freeze the water,” ordered Ash.

Glalie had just used headbutt on Vaporeon, knocking it down on the water. While it still had the chance, Glalie shot a glistening beam of ice that instantly froze the water. Mina stood there, her long, shimmering brown hair, falling to her side, she had cute cheeks, and a beautiful smile, that most teenage boys would die for.

Would one of those boys be me?

Remarkably, she stood there, smiling.

“Freezing the water isn’t going to make my Vaporeon faint you know,” she sighed, “I just have to teach you a lesson, Vaporeon, use Hyper Beam to break the ice.”

Ash was shocked; he didn’t know that her Vaporeon knew Hyper Beam. “Glalie, headbutt Vaporeon, now!”

Meh.....

Mina smiled again.

“How could she be smiling in a time like this, but she is kind of cute.” Ash thought, perplexed.

BAD BOY! VERY BAD BOY! THINKIING ABOUT OTHER WOMEN! HAH!

His friends were on the bleachers, Brock, May, and Max. He really wished that Misty was sitting over there, cheering him on, but she was back in Cerulean City, taking care of the Gym, as she is a Gym Leader. Misty was the first person ever to travel with Ash. He missed her fiery temper, losing her felt like he lost a piece of his heart.

How cute....not!!! JK.

Glalie was lowering his head close to bashing Vaporeon.

“Double Team”, ordered Mina.

Multiple Vaporeon were appearing on the Water Field. Ash ordered Glalie to use Ice Beam on all of them, finally striking the real one. It slid back, taking little damage.

This is a flashback right? Well, I don't know what to imagine. You still didn't describe Glalie and vaporeon.

“Hyper Beam, Vaporeon, Now!” Mina knew what to do.

“Counter it with Ice Beam Glalie,” ordered Ash.

The two beams met; finally, the Ice Beam freezing the Hyper Beam. But Mina had a trick up her sleeve. Because the Hyper Beam that was still frozen and hasn’t exploded yet, she had the perfect opportunity to knock out Glalie.

Same^^^

“Vaporeon, use Double Team!”

“Glalie get up close, and use Ice Beam,” commanded the fierce boy.

Mina grinned, she knew he was falling for the trick. Glalie kept missing. The string of ice hasn’t exploded yet, but it was glowing red, which meant that it was going to explode in a few seconds.

Fecking dense skulled moron! I like that! Keeping Ash's personality.

“Vaporeon, use Iron Tail on Glalie and send it flying to the ice.”

“No!” Ash shouted, “Glalie watch out!”

It was too late, Vaporeon had used Iron Tail, and it sent Glalie flying to the ice. Glalie’s body touched the ice, and then it happened. It exploded!

ZLOL! Again, what does an Iron Tail look like?

The crowd was on their toes, not knowing the outcome. May was jumping up and down, blocking Max’s view. Max told her to move, but she was too tense, so Brock carried him onto his shoulder, so that Max could see the battle.

What does Max, May and Brock look like? What clothes were they wearing???

The smoke cleared, and Glalie was floating on the water, fainted.

Serves Ash right.....LOL! YAY HE LOST!

“Glalie is unable to battle, Vaporeon and Mina win the round, they will proceed to the Quarter-Finals.” The referee, shouted.

Ash just stood there, completely shocked, he recalled Glalie to its Pokeball, and praising its hard work.

Guess he didn't train hard enough......

The crowd was roaring to Mina’s victory, some boys throwing roses to her, and a guy screamed for proposal! May, Max, and Brock were all saddened by the result.

I'm surprised Brock wasn't one of those boys....but meh.

Mina went over to Ash to congratulate him, but she did something that Ash never thought she would ever do, she kissed him on the cheek.

The crowd was roaring and lots of “Aww” and “Young Love”, and a lot of, “they make such a cute couple”.

I'd laugh if Misty was watching!!! U BAD BOY ASH KETCHUP!!!

Ash felt his face burn, but he hoped that the kiss came from a red haired girl, not Mina, but still he couldn't argue!

What'd I say!!! ME NO LIKE ASH!

“I do hope we meet again.” She winked and left.

I hope we don't. LOL (JK)

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"I worked so hard to get those eight badges to compete in the Pokemon League. And know, I lost. Just because I wasn't paying attention to my opponent....my opponent's Pokemon.Ash thought heavily. Everytime he thinks of the battle, he calls himself stupid.

Well, he kinda is stupid and as mentioned before, he didn't train hard enough!

Ash looked up at the sky. It was starting to get dark, and Ash decided to camp. He continued to walk until he would find a good place to rest for the night, but something caught his eye. It triggered his memory, and thoughts and emotions were flooding through his brain. It was the lake, the lake that he had first met Misty. He remembered her fishing him, and how angry she was when he borrowed her bike, and she started to travel with him. He had so many memories with Misty. He was lonely too, because May and Max went back to Petalburg City, to reunite with their parents. And Brock went back to Pewter City, to meet up with his enormous family, as well. All these thoughts flooded through him, and he took out the handkerchief that Misty gave him, as a farewell present. It was about a year old, but Ash rummaged through his bag, and took it out and put it under his pillow, and slept.

I remember that! LOL! DON'T FORGET T CHANGE YOUR UNDERWEAR AH! LOLZ! Yeah, now I get it. Memory Lake eh? Very good.

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“Misty! Come here, I think Corsola hurt herself!” bellowed Daisy, Misty’s older sister. Misty groaned to herself, she didn’t get enough sleep; she was up all night thinking about Ash. She did like him a lot, and she didn’t know if he understood what the handkerchief meant.

He probably doesn't. After all, he is thick.

Misty Waterflower, is a pretty girl with beautiful emerald green eyes. She has a very funny personality and has a fiery temper. She is currently the Gym Leader of the Cerulean Gym, which specializes in training and battling Water Type Pokemon. Misty has an impressive team; Corsola, Staryu, Starmie, Gyarados, Politoed, Goldeen and Azurill. These are her Pokemon, but there's also the Gym Pokemon which she sometimes uses; Dewgong, Luvdisc and Shellder. She is a great trainer and actually beat Ash in the Whirl-Cup Competition. Misty used to have a Togepi, which she missed terribly, everytime she thinks about Togepi, tears form in her eyes, Togepi left when it evolved into Togetic to protect the Mirage Kingdom from invadors.Misty's has a crush on Ash, but she never told him because she didn't know if he liked her back, and if he didn't it would change their friendship dramatically.

Nice pokemon Misty. I think you could've separated this whole paragraph into different ones and can go into detail.

She walked down the stairs, and saw Daisy kneeling over Corsola, whispering, “Good job Corsola, we can finally trick Misty." Daisy and Corsola laughed devilishly. When Misty arrived, Daisy told her that Corsola was fine now.

Oh yeah? How mischievious...

“Ugh, stop waking me up, you freak.” Misty said.

“Do you have a bucket?!” Daisy retorted.

"Why would you need a bucket? Misty asked curiously

"Because, I think Im going to puke, your breath smells like rotten eggs. UGH!! Daisy said naively.

Misty placed her hand over her mouth.

Daisy knew what she had to do.

LOL! And she's reminding Ash to change his underwear. She needs to brush her teeth!!

“Do you miss traveling with Ash, Misty? Daisy asked.

Misty blushed. “I guess so, why?”

Daisy sighed, "Its too bad you have to take care of the Gym, because we could do it. We're actually good trainers."

Misty laughed. "Yeah, and then when I call to check, I find that all the badges disappeared, in like, what, a week?"

LOL!^^^^^That was good.

“Do you have a crush on him?” Daisy asked very quickly, catching Misty off guard.

“Duh- I mean NO, I DON’T!” Misty screamed, blushing furiously, now looking like a tomato.

“Well, well, well, go back to bed and dream about your boyfriend, missy.” Daisy laughed.

LMAO! Uh...DUH! Let me get a dunce cap for Misty.

"Shut your mouth, okay?! If you dont, then I might put mud in your shampoo." Misty said angrily.

“How dare you, fine then, I will go, but I know your little love secret, Misty” said Daisy, grinning broadly.

OH NOES!!! MUD IN MY SHAMPOOO!

When Daisy left, Misty whispered to herself. “Oh Ash, I hope youre not falling for a girl."

Too late for that! It'S ADVANCESHIP FOREVER! ASHxMAY!!!

Overall, I like this story! It's a whooping 4 out of 5. You can imrpove your description a bit so yeah....Good luck with your other chapters. I'll eventually review them. Whew, longest review ever in my part.

 

[Artemis Ignitan]

O.O A PICTURE!!! NYAHAHAHAHA!!! I should have seen that coming!

A little awkward in some places, but there are less and less mistakes each time. And shippiness increases each and every time.

Hang on, Drew screamed in happiness? Not something that I would expect him to do, but love makes people do strange things...

I wanna see Misty and Ash pulverize Mina and her partner. *pouts*

*smiling again* Another great chappie! Keep writing!